Reviewer: pandora pax
Date: 07/12/10 12:26
Chapter: Chapter 3: Dinner with the NEWT Students

many Qs now -
why did u make M call H love?? Sounds totally weird, coming from him
Isnt Luna supposed to be dreamy and vague? I thought u tweaked her personality a bit.
Didnt know that R/H relationship was that obvious ..
but hey, keep up the good work
pandora pax

Author's Response: He called her "love" in a sarcastic, biting way, not an affectionate way. I could change that though, if there's another British term that would work better there. I tried to keep Luna in character, but you are right, she is not vague here (I can fix dreamy with some descriptions of her voice, I think). She's not in the story very much, so hopefully that won't bother you too much. I assumed that Hermione and Ron were together as a couple all summer after the war and that news had spread. Maybe I should state that more explicitly. Thanks for the feedback! Jenny

Reviewer: pandora pax
Date: 07/12/10 12:19
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Accord?

wah! malfoy is mellowing ... .

Author's Response: Yes, sorry, this is a story where over the course of about 30 chapters, Malfoy mellows. I tried to keep him with a sarcastic sense of humor, though... Sorry! Jenny

Reviewer: pandora pax
Date: 07/12/10 12:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

reading your first chap made me smile. i thought it was quite good. i just have one Q: why is draco whispering? i thought they'd sort of ignore each other, but i liked it anyways.
pandora pax

Reviewer: Roseanne Potter
Date: 07/07/10 6:37
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Accord?

Seems like it will turn out to be a great story. Do keep writing. And ya, dont only write, remember to update as well ;)
Waiting for the next chapter. Hurry up! :)

Author's Response: I hope you like the story as it progresses further. It's all written, but getting the chapters approved for Mugglenet is taking some time. Jenny

Reviewer: Roseanne Potter
Date: 07/07/10 6:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

Love the fact that Draco and Hermione will be in character. :)
Quite a nice start. :) :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the story. Jenny

Reviewer: cassiexron
Date: 05/27/10 19:09
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

Very enticing... can't wait :)!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the rest of the story. Jenny

Reviewer: lovethirteen
Date: 05/25/10 13:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

I like it so far! It's hard to find good Dramione fanfic where both Hermione and Draco are in character, but so far it seems like you've done a good job!
I look forward to the future chapters!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. This is my first fan fiction story, so I'm very uncertain about how well I keep Hermione and Draco in character. I'm posting chapters as quickly as I'm allowed to, so hopefully you'll like them going forward as well. -- Jenny

Reviewer: NymphTonks666
Date: 05/22/10 11:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

I think this is the start of a great story :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I've written most of it already -- looks like about 33 chapters total. I hope it keeps you engaged throughout! Jenny

Reviewer: littlewolf
Date: 05/20/10 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

i wanna read more. malfoy is so in character. write write! =D

Author's Response: Thank you! The story is almost done (33 chapters). I'm posting each new chapter just as soon as the moderator approves the last one! I'm thrilled you like the voice of Draco. I found him easier to write than Ron (in real life, I'm a HG/RW shipper, but I'm having so much fun writing HG/DM!). Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: lovedbythedragon
Date: 05/20/10 10:32
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

i can already tell this is going to be an amazing story please post the rest of it as soon as you can thank you so much :)

Author's Response: Thank you! The story is almost done. I'm posting each new chapter just as soon as the moderator approves the last one! I'm thrilled you like it so far. Jenny

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 05/18/10 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

lol ... nice.

im wating the other chapters.

um ... but i can be very impatient ...

so if u can find it inyour heart to send the others to me ill be greatful!!

lol i like where this story is headed. ive never really liked draco/hermione ships but as i read along i found that they are quite compatible :)

Surihya

Author's Response: Surihya: The story is almost completely written, so as soon as the moderator verifies one chapter, I load up the next. More of the chapters are posted at Live Journal, too, under the same name: jenniferes. I've always been a Ron/Hermione shipper, but somehow this story was easy for me to write with Draco/Hermione. :-) Thank you for your nice review. Jenny

Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 05/15/10 18:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

Nice start to what promises to be an entertaining, enticing fic! Is this your first story on here? You write well. Can't wait to read any future chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. Yes, this is my very first fanfiction story! I'm very nervous to see whether people will read and like my story. I appreciate your taking the time to tell me you like it so far. Thank you! Jenny

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