Reviewer: paudie
Date: 11/30/10 9:50
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

Great stuff- loving seeing Hermione back again. Really enjoying this so far.

Author's Response: I know how you feel. I miss them now that the books are complete. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, Jenny

Reviewer: LilyFlowerxo
Date: 11/29/10 16:14
Chapter: Chapter 9: Drunk Malfoy

pleasee write more chapters asapp!
i love how theyre short, theress no bs or anythingg.
but write moreee!

Author's Response: Every time you see a chapter go live on the site, another chapter is already with a moderator being looked over for approval. I'm going as fast as I can, honest! And I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story. Thank you, Jenny

Reviewer: Mifey
Date: 11/26/10 17:03
Chapter: Chapter 9: Drunk Malfoy

I loooooove this fic. You are one of the few writers who follows the character's respective natures instead of making them all cuddly and lovey dovey.

Author's Response: There's a little love at the end, but never cutesy. It helps that I'm not a cutesy in my relationships either! Thanks for the positive feedback, Jenny

Reviewer: grangerfan101
Date: 11/25/10 14:11
Chapter: Chapter 9: Drunk Malfoy

i absolutely love this fan-fic. please post up another chapter or two. loved it

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear you like the story! I'm posting chapters just as quickly as I can get them approved, I promise! -- Jenny

Reviewer: Sakura-Chan
Date: 11/22/10 19:47
Chapter: Chapter 9: Drunk Malfoy

Post more. NOW.

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear you like the story! I'm posting chapters just as quickly as I can get them approved -- there's always a chapter in the queue, I promise! -- Jenny

Reviewer: Sakura-Chan
Date: 11/22/10 18:00
Chapter: Chapter 3: Dinner with the NEWT Students

I don't care if this story is AU; it's great so far. I love HermionexDraco, just something about it is so.. appealing. I hope to see more action soon! ;] Off to read more~

Author's Response: I was actually a big HG/RW shipper in the books and movies, but somehow writing HG/DM has turned out to be so much more fun! I'm glad you are liking it. -- Jenny

Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 11/21/10 21:38
Chapter: Chapter 9: Drunk Malfoy

I like your fan fiction. It has a certain interesting edge to it. What i like the most is that Ron and Harry stay out of the way most of the time, so we can actually focus on Hermione and Draco. =)

Author's Response: Ron and Harry will be in and out until about half-way through the story, I'm afraid. Since I'm a HG/RW shipper in real life, I couldn't just toss Ron to the curb quite so fast :-). You'll be happy around chapter 20, I believe (the entire story is written already and is about 30 chapters, depending on how I divide them up). Thank you for the positive feedback! --Jenny

Reviewer: upa
Date: 11/16/10 12:21
Chapter: Chapter 8: Halloween Celebration

please post a new chapter, i really tink this story is funny!:)

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you think the story is funny -- one is never quite sure how a story will come across, you know? I'm posting chapters just as quickly as I can get them approved, I promise! -- Jenny

Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 10/24/10 8:45
Chapter: Chapter 8: Halloween Celebration

ok. lol to the end part.

Author's Response: Glad to evoke a chuckle. I hope you keep reading! -- Jenny

Reviewer: Potter_lover13
Date: 10/19/10 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Accord?

Pretty good! The chapters are very short though, but thats ok.:) When Draco made his little speech that really caught me off gaured. I thought Hermione would say something like that

Author's Response: I guess I see Hermione as angry at Draco, especially since she was tortured in his house and he plotted to kill Dumbledore. She comes around in the story based on observing Draco's behavior. I see Draco as more exhausted from the war and trying to finally do the right thing (without changing his personality -- which is tricky). I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. -- Jenny

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/17/10 14:46
Chapter: Chapter 8: Halloween Celebration

Great chapter! I like how Draco has been acting more civil! LOL Cannot wait for the next one :-)

Author's Response: Glad to hear you are still enjoying the story. Draco does become more civil over time -- otherwise they'd never get together, I guess. The next chapter should be approved shortly. -- Jenny

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 10/17/10 10:47
Chapter: Chapter 8: Halloween Celebration

Ron pays more attention to Draco than Hermione and/or her needs... Honestly, I never fully understood why did they ended up together in the books.
Please keep up the entrancing good work and update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the words of encouragement. In the books I love Hermione and Ron, but for some reason I have more fun writing Hermione and Draco. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! -- Jenny

Reviewer: ultamitespider-man
Date: 10/10/10 19:22
Chapter: Chapter 7: The School Year Begins

Please update soon!! When s chapter 8 coming ????
Great job by the way!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story. I posted chapter 8 today, so as soon as it gets approved, you'll be able to read it. --Jenny

Reviewer: annabok
Date: 10/06/10 4:39
Chapter: Chapter 7: The School Year Begins

Awsome! More please...!

Author's Response: Thanks. More is coming soon! :-) Jenny

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 09/29/10 5:10
Chapter: Chapter 7: The School Year Begins

Nicely done.
Keep up please.

Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I posted Chapter 8 today, so once it's approved you can read it. --Jenny

Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 09/28/10 9:46
Chapter: Chapter 7: The School Year Begins

hmm.....

Author's Response: Is that a good hmm... or a bad hmm... ??? ---Jenny

Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 09/28/10 9:46
Chapter: Chapter 7: The School Year Begins

hmm.....

Reviewer: craftychick
Date: 09/26/10 12:58
Chapter: Chapter 7: The School Year Begins

I'm quite happy to see this new chapter so soon. But I suppose you might not post the next chapter this fast, right? Anyway, now that Ron left, maybe we'll see more interaction between Hermione and Malfoy. I can understand how Ginny still hates Malfoy, since she and her family have lost a lot of people (and Fred). I wonder if we will ever see George and his joke shop in here? Anyway, thanks so much for posting up this chapter so quickly!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm posting as quickly as the beta and approval process will let me go. But the story is much improved this way :-). --Jenny

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/26/10 12:18
Chapter: Chapter 7: The School Year Begins

Excellent chapter! I really like how Hermione throws insults around! Very entertaining :-)

Author's Response: Glad to hear it. I'm going for the "witty banter" approach for this story. --Jenny

Reviewer: ElenaPetrova
Date: 09/24/10 5:14
Chapter: Chapter 6: Students Return to Hogwarts

Heyy, overall how you imagine Hogwarts after the wall is so good. And it's great that it's really sticking to JK's vision. Just a few things....
1. There are some americanisms that wouldn't be said in the UK like 'class' which would be a 'lesson'.
2. Personally I don't think they'd call McGonogall 'Headmistress' or 'Ma'am'. After all no-one called Dumbledore Headmaster Dumbledore. And in the UK Ma'am's used basically only for royalty. It wouldd usually be 'Miss' instead. lol.
Apart from that really good and a great storyline already :):)

Author's Response: I'm trying to do a better job with the British English -- I've got a bunch of websites I'm referencing. Obviously I'm American, though, so it's going to be rough. Also, my beta told me that Hermione tends to be formal and that I should say "Headmistress" more often, not less! Funny how things work out. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! -- Jenny

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