Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 02/20/11 7:23
Chapter: Chapter 18: Second Assault
you've spelled 'jerk' like 'berk'. Other then that, it's going pretty good.
Author's Response: Berk is a British word for idiot, according to my research. I'm trying to make them sound like they are in the UK (even though I'm obviouly American). You don't know how many "okays" I have to replace with "all right" -- hundreds! :-) Jenny
Reviewer: j1e2s3s4i5e6
Date: 02/18/11 13:17
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
i am loving this story! and i loved how quick the update was. keep up the amazing work:)
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you are enjoying the story. The chapters are written, but the beta and mod process takes time. The story is better because of it, though. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/18/11 12:42
Chapter: Chapter 18: Second Assault
Great chapter! Wonder how many more victims there will be before the one responsible is caught...
Author's Response: You will just have to wait and see (evil laugh here). :-) Jenny
Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 02/18/11 12:16
Chapter: Chapter 18: Second Assault
ah the mystery deepens and the sexual tension gets better and better!! i'm loving everything about this story, so excited for more!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! The next chapter is one of my favorites. Hopefully you'll like it too! -- Jenny
Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 02/16/11 8:01
Chapter: Chapter 17: Visit to the Wizarding University of Paris
great chapter! the description of the university sounded so cool i wished it was real! lol and i love how sweet Draco is becoming...sigh great job and i love how fast this update was! another one please :)
Author's Response: I had a lot of fun inventing the universities. I think that's the main reason I'm working on a sequel now -- so Hermione can attend one! The next chapter is in the queue. Thanks for the positive feedback! Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/16/11 6:55
Chapter: Chapter 17: Visit to the Wizarding University of Paris
Ooo Cannot wait to see where they choose to go!! I love these timely updates :-)
Author's Response: You're in luck. The next chapter is in the queue already. :-) Jenny
Reviewer: twins11
Date: 02/16/11 4:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
This is by far the best Dramione story I have read! Keep up the good work and ill be waiting for your updates! keep them coming!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your compliment! I am very happy to hear you like the story. There's a new update available today. --Jenny
Reviewer: Daughter of the Light
Date: 02/16/11 0:16
Chapter: Chapter 17: Visit to the Wizarding University of Paris
Oh, I've been refreshing the "most recent" page every half hour to check if you'd updated. I love your story (I can't believe I've resisted the urge to review until now!) and I love your portrayal of Draco. Some people just show him as a somehow automatically reformed individual who is incredibly romantic/perfect in every way, but you actually took the time to develop his character. Including his apologies to Hermione also made this seem much more accurate and realistic. He is such a sweetheart, I hope Hermione ditches Ron soon... I was never a fan of Ron, even before I started reading fanfiction ;). Good work, and good luck on future chapters; I'm excited and eager to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your very thoughtful review. In real life, at least with the books, I am a HG/RW shipper. But somehow I find it easier to write about Draco. I'm working hard to have Draco evolve based on his wartime experiences, but at the same time be consistent with who he was pre-war. I'm glad it's working for you! --Jenny
Reviewer: acciojemma97
Date: 02/15/11 0:02
Chapter: Chapter 16: Potions Success
You.Are.Amazing!!!!!!!!!!?
Author's Response: Thank you. Another chapter is in the queue already. Enjoy! --Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/14/11 13:42
Chapter: Chapter 16: Potions Success
Excellent chapter! As always looking forward to the next one :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you are continuing to enjoy the story. The next chapter is already in the queue. Thanks! Jenny
Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 02/14/11 13:09
Chapter: Chapter 16: Potions Success
yay (: love that something finally happened between the pair and glad that they got accepted :P
thanks for uploading, i really am addicted now x
Author's Response: Happy to feed the addiction. Another chapter is in the queue already! -- Jenny
Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 02/14/11 13:01
Chapter: Chapter 16: Potions Success
OMG!!! NEW CHAPTER!!!! Okay I'm even kidding, I've been checking everyday for a new chapter!!!! And I just finished a stroy I was reading, and I checked 'recent' and it said this story and I nearly screamed!! :D Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the enthusiastic response to my story! There's a new chapter in the queue, so keep checking. --Jenny
Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 02/14/11 11:51
Chapter: Chapter 16: Potions Success
great chapter! finally some action between draco and hermionie :) I love this story so much and i hope you update again soon!!
Author's Response: I made you wait long enough, didn't I? And there are more bumps in the road ahead. But the next chapter is in the queue already, so that's good, eh? Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: LaurennJenks
Date: 02/13/11 1:48
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
I LOVED it!
can't wait to read more chapters, really well written:)
Author's Response: Glad you are liking the story so far. The next chapter is in the queue and should be approved soon. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: acciojemma97
Date: 02/12/11 21:31
Chapter: Chapter 15: Second Hogsmeade Weekend
This is honestly the best fan fiction i have ever read! I am really hoping that everytime I check fan fiction that there is going to be another chapter, but it's taking ages! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Wow! I am humbled by your enthusiastic response to my story. The next few chapters should come along a bit faster now. This story is done and I'm working on a sequel already. :-) Jenny
Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 02/08/11 2:40
Chapter: Chapter 15: Second Hogsmeade Weekend
i love this story (:
thanks for posting another chapter- i think i'm hooked
i like how long it's taking for things to happen between the pair- in most other stories things happen way too quickly :)
although it is torture waiting for new chapters xD
Author's Response: Yes, I had so much fun inching them closer and closer that I ended up moving together them slower than I had originally planned. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. The next few chapters should move along a bit more quickly. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 02/06/11 8:32
Chapter: Chapter 15: Second Hogsmeade Weekend
ok this more to you then the story: I love what you've been doing! I'm glad your not one of the authers who don't continue their stories. And when I get bored I'll read the story over and over again, it's that good! just thought you should know!! :) Can't for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback. This story is completely written (30 chapters total) and now it's just refinement and getting it posted. The chapters should move along faster now. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: shanshine
Date: 02/05/11 18:31
Chapter: Chapter 15: Second Hogsmeade Weekend
Oh my- cliff hanger! Well, please continue to post the remainder of this story! It really is very good, and I enjoy Draco and Hermione's confused relationship! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is in the queue, so you shouldn't have to wait too long this time. -- Jenny
Reviewer: LadyRiverton
Date: 02/05/11 8:12
Chapter: Chapter 15: Second Hogsmeade Weekend
I like the way you've broken up the story. I can't wait for the remaining Chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. The next chapter is in the queue... --Jenny
Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 02/04/11 13:46
Chapter: Chapter 11: Tittilandus
by far my favorite chapter!wait no this is my favortire story!
Author's Response: This is my second favorite chapter, myself. My favorite is chapter 19, which you'll get to soon, I hope. Thanks! Jenny
