Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 03/05/11 19:39
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
Loved it! Hermione just needs to realize how perfect her and Draco are for eachother. LOL!
Author's Response: She'll realize it, eventually ;-). Thanks for the positive feedback. --Jenny
Reviewer: Carmen SanDiego
Date: 03/05/11 17:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
I love the story more and more each chapter. I cannot wait to see how Draco & Hermione will go. I love how you didn't automatically make Hermione and Draco fall in love, first they are friends. Anyways, love the story... Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive feedback. I personally dislike stories where there's a immediate infatuation or instantaneous sex. I like to see characters become friends and fall in love -- I think there's a better chance of a lasting relationship that way (in real life too!). Thanks again, Jenny
Reviewer: lax_punky97
Date: 03/05/11 15:45
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
it was great!!! can't wait for the next update!!! thank you so much for such a fantastic story!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story! The next chapter is in the queue, so you won't have to wait too long for the next update. --Jenny
Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 03/05/11 14:09
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
Bravo!! No offence, but I just want Ron gone!! He is selfcentered (in this fanfic, of course) Love the chapter!!!! :)
Author's Response: You won't have to wait too long now for the big break-up. ;-) Thanks for the positive feedback. --Jenny
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 03/05/11 14:04
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
Excellent chapter! :-) Loving the updates and hope the next one is just as good
Author's Response: I hope you like the next chapter too (and all the chapters, for that matter). Chapter 19 is one of the first chapters I wrote for this story and a personal favorite. Thanks again for the positive feedback. --Jenny
Reviewer: j1e2s3s4i5e6
Date: 03/05/11 13:56
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
aww! such a sweet chapter,one of my favorites!
Author's Response: Ha! It's my favoriate too (and one of the very first chapters I wrote for this story). Thank you for the positive feedback! --Jenny
Reviewer: appledeebapple
Date: 03/05/11 8:32
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: You shouldn't have to wait long -- it's in the queue already. Thanks! Jenny
Reviewer: Dani2314
Date: 03/05/11 6:37
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The next chapter is in the queue already. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: remmus
Date: 03/05/11 6:19
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
love:)
Author's Response: Thank you! --Jenny
Reviewer: petrifikustotalus
Date: 03/05/11 3:38
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
Yay! A new chapter! I loved this one. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive feedback. I'm happy to hear you are enjoying the story! --Jenny
Reviewer: soccer22
Date: 03/04/11 22:49
Chapter: Chapter 19: Painful Dark Mark
i love this story!
Author's Response: That's great! I'm happy to hear it. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: Daughter of the Light
Date: 03/04/11 21:55
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
Oh YAY, I was ever so thrilled when I refreshed the page and saw the latest chapter! Argh Ron.... I was so happy that Hermione kissed Draco this time and then didn't go off with Ron. Hermione and Draco are so lovely together ;). I can't wait for the next chapter, you write beautifully!
Author's Response: Thanks for your positive feedback. I'm glad you are enjoying the various interactions I'm writing for JKR's characters. The next chapter is in the queue, so you shouldn't have to wait long. --Jenny
Reviewer: aarati
Date: 02/26/11 8:32
Chapter: Chapter 18: Second Assault
Just loved it
Awesome Chapter.......
update more pls can't wait to read more....
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next one is in the queue. Thanks! Jenny
Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 02/25/11 15:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
Just read throught his yesterday and today. I absolutely love it! Can't wait for the next update. :)
Author's Response: I am very happy to hear you are enjoying the story! I'm trying to get the next update to you just as fast as I can. Thank you! -- Jenny
Reviewer: wingedana
Date: 02/23/11 16:07
Chapter: Chapter 18: Second Assault
Draco is a bit OOC... but I love this story! :)
Author's Response: It's difficult because gradually, over the course of the story, I am trying to make Draco more likeable. This inevitably leads to him being OOC, I'm afraid. I'm trying to keep him edgy though. I'm glad you like the story! --Jenny
Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 02/23/11 6:44
Chapter: Chapter 18: Second Assault
Love the tension in this chapter (:
when's the next one going up?
Author's Response: I entered the next chapter in the queue today. It should be available soon. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: weasleytwinsgirl124
Date: 02/22/11 15:20
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
well i wasnt saying it as potty as in toilet, i was just saying and i said in the movies AND books but thank you for taking it into consideration and yes i do ge it would be hard to keep that fine line between old draco and him growing
Reviewer: weasleytwinsgirl124
Date: 02/21/11 5:27
Chapter: Chapter 8: Halloween Celebration
ok u seriously should stop having draco call harry, potty. Its a great story but that completely detracts from it. If you pay attention to the books and movies. not once does he call harry, potty. only peeves does
Author's Response: I'm sorry. I didn't realize that. I do know that in the UK, potty means someone is crazy or looney, it doesn't mean toilet. So I thought Draco might call him that, as an insult. Eventually, in the story, Draco does come around with regards to Harry. It's a fine line, trying to keep Draco in character and yet show that he has grown since the war. Also, I'm trying to base the story on the books, rather than the movies, as much as possible. It's hard, though, because the images from the movies are available in my mind as I write. Thank you for the suggestion. -- Jenny
Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 02/20/11 19:09
Chapter: Chapter 18: Second Assault
I'm so happy you updated this so fast!!! I've been on vacation so I haven't had time to catch up!!!! Love it!! Keep it up!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you. Trust me that I'm trying to move this along as quickly as possible. --Jenny
Reviewer: remmus
Date: 02/20/11 12:03
Chapter: Chapter 18: Second Assault
love.
Author's Response: Thank you. --Jenny
