Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 03/27/11 7:18
Chapter: Chapter 23: Preparing for Confrontation

these past 2 chapters have been amazing, I love how their relationship is progressing :) It should be interesting to see what happens when Harry and Ron come...keep the lovely updates coming!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy to hear you are liking this section, where I tried to introduce a little adventure and suspense into my romantic comedy. :-) Jenny

Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 03/27/11 6:15
Chapter: Chapter 23: Preparing for Confrontation

yay (:
i didn't expect the new chapter this soon
it's a really sweet chapter and i think it's building up for a dramatic next chapter

i cant wait ^^

Author's Response: Yep, I'm trying to build some suspense into my story. I hope it works! Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: vandalsally
Date: 03/26/11 19:53
Chapter: Chapter 23: Preparing for Confrontation

I just randomly found this story and it's so good! :) Excited to read more of it!

Author's Response: I happy you found the story and even happier that you like it! Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: BJ Allen
Date: 03/26/11 19:31
Chapter: Chapter 23: Preparing for Confrontation

Harry and Ron... Draco and Hermione... all in the same suite. This should go just /great/.
I love how Draco, the player, is the one pursuing an actual relationship and Hermione is still undecided. XD Funny.
I still love your story. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside when I see you've updated... so you should update again. Soon. XD

Author's Response: I hope you like the way I handle all the relationships in the next couple chapters. You'll have to let me know. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 03/26/11 12:12
Chapter: Chapter 23: Preparing for Confrontation

I just relized something.....there's only 7 chapters left!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(((((((((( WICKED SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Don't be too sad. I'm already hard at work on a sequel -- the freshman year at the Wizarding University of Paris! :-) Jenny

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 03/26/11 10:48
Chapter: Chapter 23: Preparing for Confrontation

Love, love, love! Ron staying with them should be interesting!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Poor Ron, I don't treat him very well in this story. ;-) Jenny

Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 03/26/11 6:28
Chapter: Chapter 23: Preparing for Confrontation

Wow, that was fast for the next capter! I really liked this one to!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to keep the chapters moving along. --Jenny

Reviewer: j1e2s3s4i5e6
Date: 03/26/11 3:40
Chapter: Chapter 23: Preparing for Confrontation

yay! the quickest update ever. nice chapter, can not wait for the next one! i think that i am obsessed with this story :)

Author's Response: I have an obsessed fan. Yay! :-) Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: Daughter of the Light
Date: 03/25/11 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang

Oh, a cliffie! I am so excited to know what happens next, but then, I always say that! And I'm glad you addressed the lingering question about their current relationship as I asked, it was very well done:).

Author's Response: There are a few more chapters that leave you in suspense, but not too much, I hope. Glad you liked the relationship clarification. I have to warn you, I'm carrying that issue forward in my sequel, so you won't get 100% satisfaction here. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 03/25/11 16:51
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang

Ahhhhh- a cliffhanger!!! What will happen now? *wrings hands* Don't let Lucius hurt them!!!

Great chapter, btw. Looking forward to the next one! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. I guarantee a happy ending. There's enough bad stuff going on in the real world. I use fanfiction to be uplifting. :-) Jenny

Reviewer: lax_punky97
Date: 03/25/11 14:36
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang

ooh, a cliffhanger!! i dont know how i am suppose to wait!!
anyway, great story! im glad things are progressing between hermione and draco.
thanks for the AMAZING story, keep up the good work! and please try to get the next chapter up asap!
thanks so much! ;)

Author's Response: I feel bad about the cliff-hanger, but I couldn't resist :-). I've already posted the next chapter, so it's just a matter of getting moderator approval. Thanks for the praise! --Jenny

Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 03/25/11 12:55
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U LEFT US HANGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway, great chapter, i've been waiting a long time!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Author's Response: Sorry about that. :-) The next chapter is in the queue awaiting moderator approval, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long. --Jenny

Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 03/25/11 12:15
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang

oooh very dramatic :D
i can't wait for them to get together and i'm really looking forward to the new chapter x

Author's Response: I know -- this is my one cliff-hanger chapter :-). But the next chapter is already in the queue, so you won't have to wait too long for some resolution. --Jenny

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 03/24/11 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault

New Reader! An excellent story, and oh how I love to read about Ron being a completely thick-headed git and Draco trying to sincerely turn his life around... all while being so effing sexy!!! Why can't I be Head Girl? *sighs wistfully*
Your storytelling is fantastic, spot-on and very believable. Too many D/Hr fics move them too quickly along the path from hate to love; in yours, Draco and Hermione are so completely themselves even as they grow and change. My overall point is: Well done and put up another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtful, positive review of the story! I'm so glad you like it. The next chapter is in the queue, so we just have to wait until it is approved. Thank you! --Jenny

Reviewer: acs09
Date: 03/22/11 9:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

I love your story!!! I got hooked right away and I had to go read it in your blog completely. The way you wrote the development of Hermione and Draco and the other characters was well done. It keeps the reader hooked and entertained. One of the best fanfictions I've read and continue rereading. I do want to encourage you to write the second part honestly ( read that beta first chapter you posted on your blog and I wanted to read more of it!!! ) :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The blog story has not been beta'd, although I'm updating it as I post new chapters at MuggleNet. The main points are the same, though. And good news, I'm hard at work on the sequel and making good progress. I'm sure once this first story is complete at MuggleNet, I'll start posting the sequel. Thank you so much for your support for my story :-). --Jenny

Reviewer: Carmen SanDiego
Date: 03/21/11 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault

i am in love with the way you write hermione & draco. i also loved that way that ron and hermione broke up...it was something i could actually see happening. i need to read the next chapter! i cant wait :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback! The next chapter is in the queue already, so you shouldn't have to wait long. --Jenny

Reviewer: BJ Allen
Date: 03/21/11 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault

Yay, they caught him! I'll admit, I thought Hermione might end up being his last victim, but, however romantic it might have been for Draco to save her, I'm still very glad I was wrong.
Hermione is being silly, though. She wants things with Draco to be /casual/?? I understand her reasoning, but still... a little sad.
Waiting with bated breath for your next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback! I guess I think of Hermione as the invincible one in the story... The next chapter is in the queue already, so you shouldn't have to wait long. --Jenny

Reviewer: Daughter of the Light
Date: 03/19/11 21:43
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault

As usual, I loved this chapter.

One thing - are Draco & Hermione together now? Or just unofficially so? They did start snogging and not care about it xD. Just curious!

Author's Response: Draco addresses this somewhat in the next chapter, which is in the queue. Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: Hermione_Bianca
Date: 03/19/11 18:47
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault

this is such a good chapter and i would love it if you would continue and iv only read a few fanfics but this is by far the best so please continue to write
~Bianca xox

Author's Response: Thank you. I've written the whole story and the next chapter is in the queue, so no worries about me not finishing it! --Jenny

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 03/19/11 17:46
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault

Great update! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Dark Enough To See The Stars by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Scorpius is looking for answers in the constellation that bears his name. He...
The Other Prophecy by IWriteToSurvive 3rd-5th Years
Hermione Granger is in a dilemma. A dilemma she never thought could happen...
Do Over by Jeograph 6th-7th Years
Harry plods toward his death, toward the Dark Lord to give himself up, to make...
FEATURED
Oread, Walking by Seren
Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione
The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze 3rd-5th Years
From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two...
Drunk on Him by armagod679 Professors
For me, he was an obsession, a burning obsession, one that I could never let...
A Broken Hallelujah by epiphany212 Professors
You have always loved the chase. The pursuit of Quaffles and dragons have carried...
In the Hufflepuff Way by 1000timesingoldenink 3rd-5th Years
Did anybody really appreciate Hannah's mum?Because Mrs. Abbott was a heroine...
And Now... by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
Moments after the death of Voldemort, Harry gazes at the corpse of the Dark...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1 by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Welcome back to another rousing round of rambunctious rock!However, a new act...
CATEGORIES