Reviewer: Daughter of the Light
Date: 03/25/11 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang
Oh, a cliffie! I am so excited to know what happens next, but then, I always say that! And I'm glad you addressed the lingering question about their current relationship as I asked, it was very well done:).
Author's Response: There are a few more chapters that leave you in suspense, but not too much, I hope. Glad you liked the relationship clarification. I have to warn you, I'm carrying that issue forward in my sequel, so you won't get 100% satisfaction here. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 03/25/11 16:51
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang
Ahhhhh- a cliffhanger!!! What will happen now? *wrings hands* Don't let Lucius hurt them!!!
Great chapter, btw. Looking forward to the next one! :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I guarantee a happy ending. There's enough bad stuff going on in the real world. I use fanfiction to be uplifting. :-) Jenny
Reviewer: lax_punky97
Date: 03/25/11 14:36
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang
ooh, a cliffhanger!! i dont know how i am suppose to wait!!
anyway, great story! im glad things are progressing between hermione and draco.
thanks for the AMAZING story, keep up the good work! and please try to get the next chapter up asap!
thanks so much! ;)
Author's Response: I feel bad about the cliff-hanger, but I couldn't resist :-). I've already posted the next chapter, so it's just a matter of getting moderator approval. Thanks for the praise! --Jenny
Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 03/25/11 12:55
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang
HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U LEFT US HANGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway, great chapter, i've been waiting a long time!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Author's Response: Sorry about that. :-) The next chapter is in the queue awaiting moderator approval, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long. --Jenny
Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 03/25/11 12:15
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang
oooh very dramatic :D
i can't wait for them to get together and i'm really looking forward to the new chapter x
Author's Response: I know -- this is my one cliff-hanger chapter :-). But the next chapter is already in the queue, so you won't have to wait too long for some resolution. --Jenny
Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 03/24/11 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault
New Reader! An excellent story, and oh how I love to read about Ron being a completely thick-headed git and Draco trying to sincerely turn his life around... all while being so effing sexy!!! Why can't I be Head Girl? *sighs wistfully*
Your storytelling is fantastic, spot-on and very believable. Too many D/Hr fics move them too quickly along the path from hate to love; in yours, Draco and Hermione are so completely themselves even as they grow and change. My overall point is: Well done and put up another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtful, positive review of the story! I'm so glad you like it. The next chapter is in the queue, so we just have to wait until it is approved. Thank you! --Jenny
Reviewer: acs09
Date: 03/22/11 9:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
I love your story!!! I got hooked right away and I had to go read it in your blog completely. The way you wrote the development of Hermione and Draco and the other characters was well done. It keeps the reader hooked and entertained. One of the best fanfictions I've read and continue rereading. I do want to encourage you to write the second part honestly ( read that beta first chapter you posted on your blog and I wanted to read more of it!!! ) :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The blog story has not been beta'd, although I'm updating it as I post new chapters at MuggleNet. The main points are the same, though. And good news, I'm hard at work on the sequel and making good progress. I'm sure once this first story is complete at MuggleNet, I'll start posting the sequel. Thank you so much for your support for my story :-). --Jenny
Reviewer: Carmen SanDiego
Date: 03/21/11 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault
i am in love with the way you write hermione & draco. i also loved that way that ron and hermione broke up...it was something i could actually see happening. i need to read the next chapter! i cant wait :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback! The next chapter is in the queue already, so you shouldn't have to wait long. --Jenny
Reviewer: BJ Allen
Date: 03/21/11 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault
Yay, they caught him! I'll admit, I thought Hermione might end up being his last victim, but, however romantic it might have been for Draco to save her, I'm still very glad I was wrong.
Hermione is being silly, though. She wants things with Draco to be /casual/?? I understand her reasoning, but still... a little sad.
Waiting with bated breath for your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback! I guess I think of Hermione as the invincible one in the story... The next chapter is in the queue already, so you shouldn't have to wait long. --Jenny
Reviewer: Daughter of the Light
Date: 03/19/11 21:43
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault
As usual, I loved this chapter.
One thing - are Draco & Hermione together now? Or just unofficially so? They did start snogging and not care about it xD. Just curious!
Author's Response: Draco addresses this somewhat in the next chapter, which is in the queue. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: Hermione_Bianca
Date: 03/19/11 18:47
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault
this is such a good chapter and i would love it if you would continue and iv only read a few fanfics but this is by far the best so please continue to write
~Bianca xox
Author's Response: Thank you. I've written the whole story and the next chapter is in the queue, so no worries about me not finishing it! --Jenny
Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 03/19/11 17:46
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault
Great update! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: petrifikustotalus
Date: 03/19/11 15:48
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault
YAY! A new chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 03/19/11 11:36
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault
I liked this chapter very much!! I'm glad Liam was caught! Yay! :)
Author's Response: I'm happy to see someone glad about that. I don't have a good backstory for why he was doing what he was doing, but I think that's often how it is, in life. :-) Jenny
Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 03/19/11 10:59
Chapter: Chapter 21: Third Assault
yay (: thanks for the new chapter- i was disappointed when Ginny walked in though :P
can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Ha ha. They'll get to finish what they start eventually, don't worry. :-) Jenny
Reviewer: Hermione_Bianca
Date: 03/19/11 0:27
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
hello,
i truly am in love with your story and i do hope you continue writing. i love the atmosphere you have created with this story please finish your story i really want to read the end of it over all i would give this a 10 out of 10 rating :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. You'll be happy to know that I've finished writing this story and I'm hard at work on a sequel! :-) Jenny
Reviewer: petrifikustotalus
Date: 03/18/11 9:47
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
Do you know when the next chapter is going to be cleared?
Author's Response: No, I never know that. I think MuggleNet is a very popular fanfiction site, so the moderators are often overwhelmed with submissions. --Jenny
Reviewer: HStetler
Date: 03/14/11 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 20: Third Hogsmeade Weekend
please please please write a new chapter! i'm dying here i love this story :)
Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue already and I've written the entire story -- I'm just working with betas and moderators to make sure it's the best it can be before it's posted. :-) Jenny
Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 03/13/11 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 20: Third Hogsmeade Weekend
this story is so captivating. i don't have specific feedback (i'm just really loving it), but it's a fantastic story and thank you so much for sharing it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I am having so much fun writing this story -- it's really nice to hear that people like it! --Jenny
Reviewer: lax_punky97
Date: 03/11/11 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
another great chapter. i really like how you have developed draco's charecter. i'm glad he cares! thanks for the awesome chapter, cant wait till the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback! --Jenny
