Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/16/12 18:36
Chapter: Chapter 14: Christmas Holidays

I've said it before and I'll say it again--Ron's going to envy himself right out of Hermione's good graces. At this point, Draco is behaving much more charming than Ron. Draco would be my obvious choice. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like how I'm moving things along so that it makes sense for Hermione to be with Draco. Thank you for your nice review! --Jenny

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/12/12 18:21
Chapter: Chapter 13: Yule Ball

Draco seems to be getting more and more charming. I think Ginny's right--Draco fancies Hermione. I'm so glad that Ron didn't wear his old dress robes. They were pretty hideous. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I'm having trouble keeping up with all your reviews :-). Thank you so much for giving me feedback on all the chapters. I'm writing story # 3 now, and positive feedback like yours really motivates me to keep going. Thank you! Jenny

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/11/12 19:56
Chapter: Chapter 12: Visit to the University of Wizardry in London

I can't believe Ron brought Lavender over to the table. He must be clueless. I took offense at Ron saying, "After we're done, you can Apparate back to UWL." It was like he invited her there for one specific reason--sex--and assumed that's what they would do. He just assumed too much. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/11/12 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 11: Tittilandus

Draco is such a naughty boy. He's right though--that tickling charm could come in handy, no pun intended. I wonder what Ron will say when Hermione explains that Draco taught it to her--through an interactive demonstration. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/11/12 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 10: First Hogsmeade Weekend

It looks like Ron is digging himself into a hole. I can't wait until Draco and Hermione visit the U in London. I'll bet Ron makes an arse of himself. I loved the scene at the beginning--with Draco and his girlfriend. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/10/12 22:46
Chapter: Chapter 9: Drunk Malfoy

I really like Draco's method of apology. When I first read about the flowers in a firewhiskey bottle I thought, "typical guy." But when they transformed it was awesome. I think that sometimes people's true feelings come out when they're drinking. :D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/10/12 20:38
Chapter: Chapter 8: Halloween Celebration

That "fancy dress" thing is good to know. I can appreciate Hermione's chosen costume but I think I would've been tempted to dress up to look prettier and sexier. Someone should tell Ron that jealousy is never attractive. Hermione might be driven to defend Draco. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/10/12 18:57
Chapter: Chapter 7: The School Year Begins

Wouldn't it be great if there were Potions that could cure Muggle virus things. I think it would be funny if Draco caught one of those viruses:D Not really--he seems to be doing a lot and a lot wouldn't get done if he were out sick. Slytherin House seems very decimated. Do they even have enough players for a team? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/10/12 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 6: Students Return to Hogwarts

I think I would've been disappointed in Ron but that's me. I'm a bit more jaded than Hermione is, not to mention a lot older:D Something tells me that Ron is not going to be in favor of Hermione furthering her education. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/09/12 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 5: August at Hogwarts

It's hard to live with someone in such close quarters and not end up at least caring about them a little. Isn't it a good sign if one of your pets likes someone? I think it will be interesting when Ron and Harry find out who the Head Boy is. I've always wondered why Wizarding children don't pursue higher education and how they can get through life without being taught the basics you need to get by on--basic math, reading, spelling, etc. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/09/12 19:32
Chapter: Chapter 4: First Weekly Meeting with McGonagall

Draco reminds me of an envious man. I get the feeling he'd like to "go at it" with Hermione:D I have found over time that I like Hermione paired with someone other than Ron. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/09/12 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 3: Dinner with the NEWT Students

I totally agree with you that Luna may appear flaky but she usually makes a lot of sense if you don't discount what she says. So are you saying that Neville was an Auror before he became a professor? Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/03/12 21:26
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Accord?

Are you saying that the Head Students' Suite has a two story fireplace? I was so awed by the thought of a two story fireplace that I couldn't focus on anything else. I was trying to think if there's anyone that I absolutely dislike so much that I couldn't live with them. I finally thought of one person:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/03/12 19:24
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts

Well, that was a mean thing for Draco to say but I must admit that it made me chuckle. I had planned to read this story once before because the title fascinated me. I'm just now getting around to it. I like to be assured that an author has a history of finishing a story before I read their work. It looks like you're a good risk:D

Reviewer: dramionefan26
Date: 09/16/12 11:46
Chapter: Chapter 20: Third Hogsmeade Weekend

Cutie!

Author's Response: Glad you thought so! :-) Jenny

Reviewer: dramionefan26
Date: 09/16/12 4:29
Chapter: Chapter 16: Potions Success

The last part is such a cutie! :">

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/09/12 0:25
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home

Oh goodness! I read this start to finish!! Brilliant!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Compliments like this motivate me to write more. Just what I need as I'm working on the third installment in this story line. I appreciate it! --Jenny

Reviewer: SFIE
Date: 08/29/12 23:09
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home

This was briljant!!! Normally I don't realy like it when hermione is together with anyone else but Ron but this was realy well written! Thanks

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I am also a big Hermione/Ron shipper (in the books more than the movies), but there are so many great H/R stories out there already. And for some reason, writing Draco is easier for me than writing Ron. Thanks for the nice review! --Jenny

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/06/12 20:20
Chapter: Chapter 3: Dinner with the NEWT Students

Makes sense.

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/06/12 20:08
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Accord?

I thought Malfoy was too nice...

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