Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 08/17/11 14:04
Chapter: Chapter 11: Tittilandus
I'm pretty sure this is my favorite chapter.
Author's Response: That's funny because I believe this is the very first chapter I wrote. It's the one that gave me the idea for the whole story. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: Hplover0695
Date: 08/10/11 17:22
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
Wow. Just-wow. I love it! I've always cringed when I see a Dramione story, and before now, I've refused to read them. I think it's safe to say that you've officially converted me. I really think you've captured both of their personalities well, and I really like how you started it as a canon R/Hr and gradually shifted it to a Draco/Hr story. I agree that I think it's unrealistic to believe that Ron and hermione stayed together all those years-I mean, I love them together, and I totally agree with jkr's decision to keep romione a couple, but, honestly, I think this would also be a very plausible ending! Draco has the perfect amount of deviousness, but I liked how you gradually worked his charming side into the mix. I don't know how I feel about the idea of Ron getting back together with lavender, but I guess he needs someone! I just have one Brit-picky thing (which isn't really fair of me as I'm not from britain-this just bothered me a bit). In chapter 20, about 3/4 of the way through, it says "the weather was warm for a March day in Scotland, reaching close to sixty-five degrees." They use celsius, so sixty-five degrees there is not warm, it's hot-in fact, it's 149 degrees f! I really do enjoy this story, and I can't wait to read "More Wandless Magic"! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I thank you for your thoughtful review! I am not British, although I tried really hard to make the story sound less American. I did read that the UK is about 50/50 with Farenheit and Celsius, but that might be wrong. I'll go back and fix that to not use degrees at all (and thus avoid the issue). Thanks again for your excellent and encouraging feedback! Jenny
Reviewer: Dreaming-of-Draco
Date: 08/09/11 18:28
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Accord?
i love your story so far
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy it as you get further along! --Jenny
Reviewer: FireintheBreeze
Date: 08/07/11 6:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
Hey!
I just finished reading The Dragon does the Tickling and now I've finished the 6 chapters of the sequel. You've written an absolutely AMAZING story!!! You made me fall in love with Draco and Hermione :) I love them together; their personalities really suit. Thanks for keeping true to the book, but also for adding in your own touches of creativity. You are doing a fabulous job. Can't wait for more updates! Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging review! I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed the entire story and are reading the sequel. I work hard to get the details right and spend a lot of time researching the new things I add, so I'm glad to hear you like that about the stories. Thanks again! Jenny
Reviewer: Nina1503
Date: 08/06/11 16:07
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
Hey. Great story read in one day. Interesting plots and really well written :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I always like to get feedback from people who read the whole story as a unit. It's good to learn that it hangs together and is enjoyable. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: Tonks4life
Date: 08/02/11 0:04
Chapter: Chapter 3: Dinner with the NEWT Students
Um... I thought that Luna was in Ginny's year. Not to be critical but if you're mentioning AU stuff... that would be one of them.
I personally think that Luna could feasibly pass the NEWT's. But that's just because she's Luna.
Author's Response: There's an explanation in the chapter about why Luna is there a year ahead of schedule. It is noted that she's Ginny's year -- I didn't change that. But I'm glad to see it's believable that Luna could pass at least one NEWT. Thanks for the review, Jenny
Reviewer: Tonks4life
Date: 08/01/11 3:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
I absolutely love Malfoy's comment at the end about her being a screamer... I can totally picture him say something like that.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you find Malfoy believable. I certainly had fun writing about him! Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 07/28/11 14:06
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
This was an amazing story! I'm going to go dig up the sequel now, tood-a-loo!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the complete story. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: georgiejay
Date: 07/28/11 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
This was a very enjoyable story. I would like to thank the author for writing a story from a point of view that didn't focus on Harry or Ron. It was nice to seehow she went into depth about Hermione and Draco. Very weel done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am a Ron/Hermione shipper in real life, but I couldn't seem to write about them as a couple. Draco was just more fun for me, so I went with this new approach. I hope you check out the sequel! Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: radioblahblah
Date: 07/27/11 23:39
Chapter: Chapter 12: Visit to the University of Wizardry in London
lavender died, you know.. fenrir greyback bit out her throat..
Author's Response: She didn't technically die in the books. I wrote this before the movie came out. She's in my sequel too, so beware. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: radioblahblah
Date: 07/27/11 22:17
Chapter: Chapter 9: Drunk Malfoy
In the last line, shouldn't it be " wouldn't that be a site to be?" not 'that would have been", seeing as it hasn't happened yet?
Author's Response: I think I mean it as a conditional, that it won't actually happen at all. Thanks for the constructive feedback, Jenny
Reviewer: radioblahblah
Date: 07/27/11 20:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
LOL THAT LAST LINE
HOLY CRAP THAT SHOULDN'T BE AS FUNNY AS IT IS
PFFTTTTTDLBSFCSVC
Author's Response: I hope you are referring to a line I intended to be funny. If so, great. If not, my apologies, --Jenny
Reviewer: Tiger-Lily
Date: 07/18/11 4:03
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
Excellent story really great looking forward to reading the sequel
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review. I hope you enjoy the sequel, Jenny
Reviewer: raquel
Date: 07/17/11 23:52
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
I really enjoyed this story, I’m glad that Ron and Hermione’s relationship die a natural death and I look forward to the next part. Thank you for writing
Author's Response: Thank you for your positive feedback. I hope you enjoy the sequel. I just didn't have it in me to write super high drama for Ron and Hermione's break-up. I'm glad you liked my approach. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: cookielala
Date: 07/17/11 2:11
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
this story was brilliant! i couldn't stop reading and read well into the night.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I hope you like the sequel too. --Jenny
Reviewer: Teenster1967
Date: 07/13/11 18:46
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
This was a VERY entertaining story! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked itl. --Jenny
Reviewer: PurpleBlackSilver
Date: 07/13/11 14:57
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
amazing story!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Jenny
Reviewer: PurpleBlackSilver
Date: 07/13/11 14:49
Chapter: Chapter 29: End of the School Year
ur an amazing writier!
Author's Response: Thank you! Jenny
Reviewer: lilit829
Date: 07/08/11 14:02
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't stop reading! Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback! I've got a sequel going already, so I am trying to keep up the good work. Thanks for the encouragement, Jenny
Reviewer: PurpleBlackSilver
Date: 07/07/11 11:49
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Accord?
great story so far :)
Author's Response: Thank you! --Jenny
