Reviewer: jinxauror
Date: 06/04/13 7:02
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
Nice work! Looking forward to catching up on the next piece. I really enjoy reading your work, although I have lost a bit of sleep because of it (can't close the laptop...).
Author's Response: That's a huge compliment! I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed my story. Thank you, Jenny
Reviewer: AnimeAnimagus
Date: 03/11/13 7:09
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
This was a brilliant story, well written, and am looking forward to reading the other two :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I had fun writing it. I hope you like the next two stories just as much. Thanks, Jenny
Reviewer: xfirespritex
Date: 02/27/13 0:14
Chapter: Chapter 14: Christmas Holidays
Poor Hermione, stuck between a rock and a hard place. (Whether Ron or Draco is the rock/hard place is up for debate.) Excellent work!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. In the books, I'm pro-Ron, in the movies, I'm so-so, in my fan-fiction I'm pro-Draco. Who knew? Thank you for the review, Jenny
Reviewer: KatieWeasley07
Date: 02/24/13 22:18
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
Oh, where to begin? Well this is actually my second time reading your series, and I'm completely, totally in love, in case you were wondering why. You managed to capture and maintain my attention throughout the story, something which can be hard to do:) But you did a great job portraying the characters. Except for Malfoy, of course. He could never be civil, let alone amazingly perfectly sweet!! And I hated Hermione, my favorite character. And I haven't decided if I love you or hate you for that temporary feeling... It's just that when Malfoy told her his feelings and she blew him off... Ugh. I felt like she might have well have said, "Aw, that's cute." Hahaha thanks for an amazing series, and now I shall read the second and third once more whilst I wait for a new chapter!
Xoxo,
Katie
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your nice review -- I'm so happy you enjoyed the story and that I was able to evoke so many emotions in you! That's high praise. I'm working hard on Story # 3, but it tends to be rather slow going, I'm afraid. But reviews like yours really motivate me to keep writing. Thank you! --Jenny
Reviewer: xfirespritex
Date: 02/10/13 23:44
Chapter: Chapter 10: First Hogsmeade Weekend
Ron is being a jerk, for lack of a better term. I find myself frowning whenever Hermione does which means I'm either so into this story I can't help it or you're an excellent writer (or both.) Well done.
Author's Response: That is a huge compliment! Thank you, Jenny
Reviewer: xfirespritex
Date: 02/10/13 23:34
Chapter: Chapter 9: Drunk Malfoy
I enjoy their banter and the back and forth with their moods towards each other, looking forward to seeing how it comes together.
Reviewer: xfirespritex
Date: 12/13/12 23:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: Return to Hogwarts
I love this story so far and how the new Headmistress is handling the challenges. It's also good to see the old tension mixed with surprises in there. Most enjoyable so far. If only I didn't have a job that required normal sleep hours I'd stay up and keep reading.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I hope it keeps you entertained throughout. There are even a couple sequels, if you really like it. Thanks for the review! Jenny
Reviewer: LiveToSing
Date: 11/17/12 22:50
Chapter: Chapter 3: Dinner with the NEWT Students
It says that she will be missing Luna and Neville, and that she will be with Ginny's classmates, but in the books it says that Luna is in Ginny's year.
Author's Response: I know Luna is in Ginny's year and it is confusing. I meant for Luna to be taking her exams early. It is not clearly stated, though. I should edit this to make it more clear.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/31/12 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 30: Going Home
That was a great story. I really enjoyed it. I'm happy there will be a sequel and then another. I loved the scene in the train loo. I wonder if train bathrooms are as small as plane bathrooms. I wonder what's up with the Watch-listed wizards--the policy didn't sound very definitive.
Author's Response: I am very glad to hear you enjoyed the story, start to finish! I do confess that I left a little bit hanging at the end of this first story to set up a sequel. I hope you enjoy that one too. Thank you again for all your feedback, Jenny
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/30/12 15:49
Chapter: Chapter 29: End of the School Year
I'm glad Hermione finally gave in. Never mind Draco, I was beginning to feel the pressure:D He seems quite talented with his wandless magic. I loved how Hermione surprised him with her decision to go to Paris. Draco seems so rational with his visions of the future--and very persuasive. I loved this story and I'm glad I have more to read.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/29/12 13:25
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Spring Ball
Vacationing in a warm place sounds wonderful. It seems like Hermione is kind of pulling back from her relationship with Draco but maybe she was always that way. I'm just remembering all of the impromptu snogging is all:D I wonder how long it will take Draco to convince her that skinny dipping is the thing to do.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/29/12 13:09
Chapter: Chapter 27:Draco's Birthday
I couldn't imagine what Hermione was giving Draco for his birthday. I'm sure a personal gift meant a lot to Draco. I wonder how one would make an Invisibility Cloak and how you differentiate the quality of one. I think Hermione should just give in and go to Paris with Draco. His scenario of what happens with a long-distance relationship seemed fairly accurate.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/23/12 12:41
Chapter: Chapter 26: Mission Accomplished
I'm glad everyone made in back safe from capturing the escapees. I was wondering why Hermione was hurt that Ron wanted to go back to London so quickly but then I considered that it is hard to stop thinking about someone you've had such a long relationship with. I'm that way with my ex. I left him but sometimes I still think that we're involved:D It's nice that Narcissa can see Draco interact so nicely with Hermione. This is such a wonderful story. I don't know why but it's so easy to be so critical of Ron:D
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/19/12 14:55
Chapter: Chapter 25: Following Draco
I can only imagine the tension Hermione is under. I thought the letter in code was a good idea. I actually got a giggle out of it. Of all things for Hermione to have to say in front of Ron. I love this story. I wish I had read it sooner but at least now I have a trilogy to read.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, too. I had fun with Ron in this story. It's not really fair, I haven't painted him very well. In real life, I'm a Ron/Hermione shipper, but there are too many good Ron/Hermione stories out there. It was easier for me to write Hermione/Draco for some reason. Thanks for the nice review! --Jenny
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/19/12 13:03
Chapter: Chapter 24: Preparing to Capture the Azkaban Escapees
That was a very sexy scene. I thought it was funny when Draco and Hermione kept going up to his room and no one else seemed to suspect anything. I wish Hermione could go with Draco on his mission.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/18/12 16:46
Chapter: Chapter 23: Preparing for Confrontation
I was wondering if Draco was going to try to get into Hermione's bed. I expected more than a little hugging though.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/18/12 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 22: Visit to the Wizarding University of Durmstrang
I did not expect to see Lucius in this story, although his escape was convenient to end Hermione's date with Victor. I kind of wonder why they have to rush back to Hogwarts though.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/17/12 18:05
Chapter: Chapter 18: Second Assault
It's going to be really interesting to find out who is assaulting female students. I knew Ron was spending more time than necessary with Lavender. I kind of hope Hermione busts him. I don't know how she can stay away from Draco, but I've always been a Draco fan.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/17/12 17:46
Chapter: Chapter 17: Visit to the Wizarding University of Paris
I think Ron is having a dalliance of his own--with Lavender:D It would be interesting if Hermione found out and ran to Draco for comfort. I liked how he got out of Josette's romantic overtures.
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/17/12 17:15
Chapter: Chapter 16: Potions Success
Draco is right--their intimate session was bound to happen with the two of them living in such close quarters. It's something they can forget over time but I bet they won't. Hermione already made the comparison between Draco and Ron.
