Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 06/06/10 17:00
Chapter: A First Time for Everything

Yay!!! I am soooo excited for them!!!! I cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Author's Response:

I've already got my raincoat handy for when you all start throwing tomatoes....I don't want to say too much, but...things might not always stay so perfect and happy for Charlie and Venice...(but then, if they did, there wouldn't be much of a story, would there? :D)

Reviewer: mrscooke
Date: 06/04/10 2:33
Chapter: Ice Skates and Conversations

i hope you continue with this i love it i also feel bad the charlie didnt get much book time so i just love this

Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry. This one's not done til it's DONE, lol. As long as the plotbunnies don't die of starvation, I'll be writing :D

Reviewer: Marshall Marie
Date: 06/03/10 14:17
Chapter: Ice Skates and Conversations

oooooo i liked this chapter ALOT!!!!!!!!!!!      ur amazing:)

Author's Response: haha thanks! hopefully I won't disappoint with any of the coming chapters :P

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 06/02/10 21:56
Chapter: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

The same thing happens to me, except it's during school. I'll be in the middle of World History and the teacher will be talking or we're doing something in the book and all of a sudden I burst into laughter. It's hilarious because I get stared at and the room goes dead silent! :) EMBARRASSING AND AWKWARD!

Author's Response: I bet the people that stare are just jealous because they're not cool enough to be crazy. :P (it does make life such fun, doesn't it?)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 06/02/10 21:26
Chapter: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

Congrats about the whole brother getting married thing!! And I feel that everyone is entitled to get giddy sometimes. Like there have been times when I'll randomly giggle to myself or burst into song! :)

Author's Response:

Aww thanks! And it's good to know I'm not the only one that will randomly's great until it happens to you at work, and your customers end up looking at you like you've completely gone insane :P

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 06/02/10 18:15

I really enjoyed it! While Ginny was a bit OOC, it was amusing to read how she was so hyper and ecstatic and I agree with what you said in the chapter notes. If my best friend was going out my with my favorite brother then I would be psyched as well!

Author's Response: I sort of hated writing Ginny like that, but her response just seemed to fit, and it's totally something I would do too (although I only have one brother, and he's getting married in two weeks so I'll never know for sure :P). Ginny might bit a little OOC again in the next couple chapters, but when you read them you'll understand why :D

Reviewer: Marshall Marie
Date: 06/02/10 15:32

omg i LOVE this story, i cant wait to read the rest:)

Author's Response: You should be happy to know, then, that the next chapter is going up just as soon as I finish proofreading it. There's a few minor fixes I need to do and then it's getting submitted. Yay! :D

Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 05/14/10 10:17
Chapter: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

I reallly like it so far. Very cute. And Venice seems like she could own her own with the twins. Is there something between her and Bill or am I reading too much into it?

Author's Response: Oh, Venice can definitely hold her own with the twins. I can't imagine working for them for that long without being able to beat them at their own game once or twice. :D (I love the twins-they're so much fun to write). But no, there's nothing between Venice and Bill. Maybe a sort of brother-sister relationship, even though they aren't related, but nothing more than that.

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 05/13/10 14:05
Chapter: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

REALLY GOOD!!! :) I enojoyed the fact that this story is going to be about Charlie because he seems so underappreciated!! Keep on writing!

Author's Response: Charlie's character is so much fun to write: like a nicer, more toned-down version of Fred and George. In my head, anyway. :D I'm glad to hear you like it! The next chapter should be up fairly shortly; I'm working on last-minute editing and then it'll be posted.

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