Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/08/14 20:39
Chapter: 'Alone' Is A 5-letter Word

Wow, It has been a long time since your last update!! Interesting chapter especially there at the end. I hope the next update is coming sooner than the last one ;-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/06/13 17:57
Chapter: Slow Downward Spiral

Hehe, I have rotten tomatoes ready just in case :-P This last chapter really showed just how much Venice has been affected compared to the rest of the Weasleys. Cannot wait for the next update!

Author's Response: The next chapter should, with any luck, be up by the end of the month! Thank you so much for all your reviews!! :D

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 0:30
Chapter: One Step Forward, Twelve Steps Back

Great chapter! I just hope for more chapter updates and maybe longer chapters...*hint hint*

Author's Response: Haha! I'm trying. My laptop is fried right now so I've had to resort to stealing my mom's...makes writing a little trickier, but I'm pretty close to posting the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 0:26
Chapter: Now What?

Aww, Very touching chapter!

Reviewer: readergirl166
Date: 04/02/12 21:52
Chapter: One Step Forward, Twelve Steps Back


Author's Response: Haha! I'm working on it, don't worry! :D

Reviewer: ForeverFred
Date: 03/16/11 15:55
Chapter: Now What?

I read this chapter the day you posted it but forgot to review! Whoops!
I really, really like this story, and I hope you continue with it! :) This chapter is such a cliffhanger that I feel like you should be obligated to write more haha. I hope to read more of this story soon!

Author's Response: The next chapter is almost ready...a few more tweaks due to me changing my mind halfway through the chapter and having to rewrite 75% of it, and it'll be up :D. I'm so glad I have faithful readers like you! Your reviews make my day! :D

Reviewer: readergirl166
Date: 10/05/10 17:21
Chapter: Now What?

What happened to Charlie? Write more, I love it so far. I want to know what happens.

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter right now :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/05/10 7:36
Chapter: Now What?

Awww Poor Venice!!! Looking forward to the next update! Hope they find Charlie in the next one :-)

Author's Response: I'm SO bad at keeping things up to has a funny way of mucking things up. I'm working on the next chapter right now, though, and hopefully it should be up fairly soon! :D

Reviewer: ForeverFred
Date: 09/18/10 12:44
Chapter: And On Goes the Lightbulb

...the cliffhanger is killing me. Is there any chance of an update soon? :)

Author's Response: Yes. Lol Im so sorry its taken so long to update, but yes, an update is coming. Works been taking up a lot of my spare time lately, but thankfully a mindless job leaves me with plenty of time to plot out events.. :D

Reviewer: ForeverFred
Date: 07/29/10 20:09
Chapter: O. M. G.

I just read this whole story in one night and I absolutely love it! Your writing style is really great. I can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far. Next update shouldn't be too far off :D

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 07/16/10 9:53
Chapter: O. M. G.

I love the chapter(Except the cliffie!), love the story, and love you as an author! Cannot wait for the next one! And P.S. I think you do drama just fine :-)

Author's Response:

I love your reviews. It's probably pretty dumb for a 22-year-old to *squee* like a middle-schooler when she has new reviews, but it happens. :P

Next chapter's in the works, and I have a good idea of where it's headed, so if it takes me as long to update next time as it did this time, I'll have to cry. Plotbunnies are so unpredictable... :D

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/25/10 13:57
Chapter: And On Goes the Lightbulb

Ooo, great cliffie! I hope you update soon! I cannot wait to see what happens. Great job writing each chaper :-D

Author's Response: The next chapter should be up relatively soon--it's proving a little more difficult to write. I'm good with goofy, not so much with the drama, but I know where things are going and what's going to happen so it shouldn't take TOO long...and thanks for the reviews! I'm really glad you like it so far--I hope it keeps living up to the expectations :P

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/25/10 13:53
Chapter: Good News and Even Better News

Awesome chapter! It is nice to see that Charlie is staying :-)

Author's Response: I debated back and forth for a while about whether he should stay or not...but I hated the idea of having to write a long-distance relationship. It was just easier, and more fun, to make him stay :D

Author's Response: I debated back and forth for a while about whether he should stay or not...but I hated the idea of having to write a long-distance relationship. It was just easier, and more fun, to make him stay :D

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/25/10 13:49
Chapter: A First Time for Everything

Awww, Loved this chapter! ;-)

Author's Response: I loved your reviews! I don't know how many authors get ridiculous smiles when they have new reviews, but I know I do. Hopefully the rest of the fic keeps you just as hooked :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/25/10 13:45
Chapter: Ice Skates and Conversations

Awesome date! :-) I am hooked on this story, cannot wait to see what else happens! The dialogue is very clever and playful, keeps me entertained!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/25/10 13:39

Excellent chapter! I like the exuberant Ginny :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/25/10 13:35
Chapter: A Few Weasleys and an Incident

Ooo, interesting chapter! I agree I think Charlie gets overlooked when it comes to the fan fiction world. I am very excited to be reading this fan fic and hope to be a regular reviewer when I have time! :-)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 06/14/10 18:46
Chapter: And On Goes the Lightbulb

EEEEEP!!!! Oh. my. good! Good for her and I can SO see Charlie as the romantic type. sa-woon worthy! Somehow it seems as if she isn't going to get proposed to but my hopes are that she does. THEY ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER!

Author's Response: Personally, if a guy ever did the flowers thing to me, I'd hurt him. That kind of mushy stuff makes me gag, but it seemed totally perfect for Charlie and Venice. Glad someone else agreed! :P

Reviewer: Marshall Marie
Date: 06/14/10 15:48
Chapter: And On Goes the Lightbulb

omg i absolutely LOVE this story

Author's Response: well...after I post the next chapter (which should be sometime before Friday, as I want to get it done before my brother's wedding and all the craziness that brings), hopefully you continue loving it. Things are about to get....interesting.... *insert maniacal laughter here* :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 06/06/10 19:32
Chapter: A First Time for Everything

AW! This was such a GREAT chapter and I absolutely LOVE Ginny! She's amazing and my favorite character besides Venice and Charlie. Cannot wait for more chapters and it was once again written wonderfully!

Author's Response:

So far, out of all the chapters I've got written, this was my favorite to work on. Everything fell right into place and I'm really happy with it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter's already in the queue! :D

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