Reviews For The Smell of You
Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 05/02/10 15:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very sweet and romantic! Although smoking doesn't seem to me as something Lily would do, and I was really expecting to see the proposal...

Author's Response: Thanks! As much as I would like to say that of course Lily wouldn't smoke, I can imagine that she wasn't always a goody-two-shoes, and it was the 1970s. . . . I'm glad you like it nonetheless :)

Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26
Date: 05/02/10 14:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good. I thought the overall structure was a unique story-telling method, and I liked that it was just a giant bundle of fluff. We all need some of that once in a while. And as someone currently struggling to escape the massive weight of final projects and final exams, I understand that desire to get away from it all. I'm glad you choose to do so by writing these stories, because it gives me the chance to escape reading them.
Aside from a few small errors (a word got deleted here and there throughout), this was a really nice story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it was a good distraction from the horrors of finals in real life :) It was a lot of fluff, but sometimes that's just what you're looking for. I'll try and fix errors as I seem them!

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