This was really well written. Also very cute! Do you have any stories that you'll submit any time soon? :D
So, I once said yes to a date without realizing it was a date. Yeah. Bad choice. I couldn't go through with it, though. He was not my James Potter.
aww this fic was so cute...the idea for it was great and i loved adette and sirius' bantering...:)
Great ending. I must say, I am kinda surprised that no one other than me has reviewed this, when it is clearly a good fic. I like the way it kind of was like a parallel to Harry and Ginny - they kissed in the common room, etc.
It was a great story, regardless of the number of reviews. KUTGW!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the support nonetheless! I kind-of expected a low review count, to be honest, primarily because I haven't updated on here in YEARS, but I'm hoping that when I start updating other stories and uploading more works, perhaps that will change!
Great chapter. I liked the James/Lily interaction, the way that it was kind of clumsy but not quite awkward. No offence intended, but maybe you might have more reviews if you update a bit slower? As in, you published the first chapter four days ago. And you're already publishing the second? Maybe that's why there's just one review for your first one (mine). My advice is that you wait a bit more before submitting the next one - the one I assume is the final one?
Author's Response: Yeah, actually that was my plan... I figured it would take longer to get the second chapter approved by mugglenet so it got posted much earlier than I expected! I certainly know what you mean, though! Normally I'm a little more careful about that! Thanks for the advice, though!
Good start to what looks like a great story. kutgw!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like it!