Reviews For A Promise
Reviewer: dreamsnape
Date: 03/04/13 22:44
Chapter: Chapter 4

This is a good story, but when I chose to read a HP/SS story, what I really wanted to know was how the hell those two ended up together. You covered that some in the last chapter, when Harry thinks about what he loved about Shape, and that was good. I would have liked more of that, and earlier in the story. Understanding more about his feelings for Snape would have made his grief more moving to me, as I would have felt his loss myself. Hope this helps and doesn't offend. I think you're a good writer, otherwise I wouldn't have bothered. Feel free to comment on any of my stories.

Reviewer: Spottedsunshine
Date: 04/22/11 10:38
Chapter: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: Spottedsunshine
Date: 04/22/11 10:11
Chapter: Chapter 2

Not you Too! You and J.k. must hate Severus! Poor guy had to die twice now!

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 06/05/10 7:39
Chapter: Prologue

I actually quite like this. It kind of goes along with canon in Deathly Hallows (that Snape dies, I mean) but it's sad that he dies. I want to know: does Harry join him in heaven?

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