Reviews For The Discovery
Reviewer: Maddie Potter
Date: 03/07/12 15:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: Confiscated and Highly Dangerous

HAHAHA! That was hilarious! Also, perfect house-elf grammar, not many people get that.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/21/10 12:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: Confiscated and Highly Dangerous

Awesome!! This is going to be a great story! I love Fred and George! I always wanted to know how they came across that map!!

Reviewer: hestiajones
Date: 04/16/10 0:06
Chapter: Chapter 1: Confiscated and Highly Dangerous

Hello there!

I just wanted you to know I am really excited about your story. :D You write the twins very well (George being different from Fred and all), but judging by how you have done Percy and Filch, I can guess your story is going to have excellent characterization in general.

I also love the fact that they are going to have to work to get to the password. I always wondered how they managed to figure that one out.

Eagerly waiting for updates,


Reviewer: hgprincess92
Date: 04/14/10 19:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: Confiscated and Highly Dangerous

It's cute, interesting beginning. I'm curious to see how this goes...

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