That was wonderful, just like the other two! I just love reading these stories about Harry and Ginny and their kids. Everything about them rings so true to life and so beautiful! I don't know what constructive criticism I could offer even if I wanted to. You build each moment of these stories with such detail and heartfelt emotion. You portray Harry as a father wonderfully well - I love that these are in his point of view. I would really like to read something about Lily, if you had any plans to continue. It would be lovely to see Harry's reaction to having a daughter. Thank you so much for sharing these, they are wonderful! ~Gina :)
Author's Response: Gina Thank you so much. Others have suggested that I write a Lily story, too. Perhaps I will, but Iíll need inspiration to strike first. I suspect that, though heíll try very hard to be fair to his kids, Lily will be Harryís favourite and heíll finally discover why Ron is so protective of his little princess. Iím beginning to see the glimmerings of a storyÖ -N-
I've really liked these Potter family stories, and I hope there are more to come!
Author's Response: Iím trying to write a sequel to Grave Days, but these stories keep coming to me. So thatís a definite, perhaps, then (-: -N-