Reviews For Sleepless Night
Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 04/11/10 22:25
Chapter: Sleepless Night

Superb! I love the way you write from Harry's perspective. Everything is so very poignant and sweet and perfectly detailed. I loved the dynamic you had with Ron and Harry as proud fathers. Very funny and sweet at the same time. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks. I seriously thought about taking the ďRon and Harry at the pubĒ section out. I was concerned that their conversation added too much to the underlying eroticism of the, mainly, baby story. Now Iím glad that I didnít. -N-

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 04/11/10 20:06
Chapter: Sleepless Night

That was wonderful, just like the other two! I just love reading these stories about Harry and Ginny and their kids. Everything about them rings so true to life and so beautiful! I don't know what constructive criticism I could offer even if I wanted to. You build each moment of these stories with such detail and heartfelt emotion. You portray Harry as a father wonderfully well - I love that these are in his point of view. I would really like to read something about Lily, if you had any plans to continue. It would be lovely to see Harry's reaction to having a daughter. Thank you so much for sharing these, they are wonderful! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Gina Thank you so much. Others have suggested that I write a Lily story, too. Perhaps I will, but Iíll need inspiration to strike first. I suspect that, though heíll try very hard to be fair to his kids, Lily will be Harryís favourite and heíll finally discover why Ron is so protective of his little princess. Iím beginning to see the glimmerings of a storyÖ -N-

Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26
Date: 04/11/10 16:47
Chapter: Sleepless Night

I've really liked these Potter family stories, and I hope there are more to come!

Author's Response: Iím trying to write a sequel to Grave Days, but these stories keep coming to me. So thatís a definite, perhaps, then (-: -N-

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