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Name: Trucker (Signed) · Date: 04/01/10 21:17 · For: Chapter 1
Well done, as always. I have just two nits to pick:

"... not be returning to Hogwarts, the was taken aback"

and, it looks like you had the Longbottoms being tortured into insanity during Lily's lifetime, instead of after Moldyshort's apparent death.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll have to fix both of those -- thank you for pointing them out :)

Name: Marybeth (Signed) · Date: 04/01/10 19:45 · For: Chapter 1
I admit I cried at the begining and mostly through the rest. You did an awsome job!

Author's Response: Thanks! The start is a bit of a dreary way to begin, I know!

Name: maggie_95 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/10 9:08 · For: Chapter 1
i love this!! i love this whole concept of "the seven people who loved ..."
all three so far are just great!! i hope you write some more =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like them all :)

Name: phoebejpotter (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 20:37 · For: Chapter 1
I enjoyed it the story is warm and shows compasion from Father, brothers, her children and harry. At first I thought this story was about the death of Ginny. And when I read the end she was alive. I was so happy.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it and liked the different sides of Harry it shows. And the death of Ginny? I could never kill Ginny!

Name: hgprincess92 (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 16:40 · For: Chapter 1
Hhhmm, im feeling contemplative because this story was really good but not amazing, u kno? I feel like with Harry you could have done so much more. It was good though, my favorite parts were the each lily.
I think the ending was cute, but thats it cute. The Ginny and Hermione ones were better because you allowed us to see the charcters in different lights, this one seemed ordinary. I still liked it and i still think ur amazing, keep these going. Theres a potential for greatness here, are any of the marauders on the short list for these charcter studies??

Author's Response: People don't seem to have liked this one as much as the others. I'm glad you liked the scenes with both Lily Evans and Lily Luna -- I liked writing both those scenes, so it's good to know they were enjoyed. As for the ending -- I kind of wanted to show that Harry was simply happy with his life. That it was normal and he was content and comfortable in his love for and life with Ginny. I'm sorry if you didn't like it as much! Thanks for the review. Yes, there's a Marauder on the short list, and I actually think I'm doing him next.

Name: Callisto Anaxandra (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 11:02 · For: Chapter 1
I didn't like this story as much as your Ginny 7 person one (perhaps these seemed less creative?), but there were great ending lines for McGonagall and Cho. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed parts of it, if not the whole as much as Ginny's. Thanks for the review!

Name: heartachin4harry (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 10:37 · For: Chapter 1
I really like it! The end is perfect! It fits so well for them! Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked the ending!

Name: chattyswimmer (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 8:44 · For: Chapter 1
another amazing story!!! I think you should do one for Lily Potter....that would be amazing....great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will probably do Lily, too :)

Name: Ginny H Potter (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 8:04 · For: Chapter 1
What can I say? You're a genius!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! :)

Name: WeasleyMom (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 7:42 · For: Chapter 1
Well, you've done it again, to no one's surprise. I liked this one a lot, too. I think my favorite sections were McGonagal, Lily, and Mrs. Weasley.

About Cho, I admit that when I saw her name pop up, I was a bit disappointed, as I don't really think she was in love with Harry. But I'm so glad you included her... I believed it because of how well you wrote it, and then found my favorite lines of the whole piece in that section...

"Eventually, Cho met Stanley Collins. He was a Muggle. He fixed clocks. He was nothing like Michael, Harry, or Cedric. They lived happily ever after."

I think the short sentences there, and the fact that he's a clockmaker, were just perfect. Cho needed something simple; Harry is one complicated guy.

Really nicely done.

And can I get in line behind SiriusBlackHead to be one of Ron's girls? ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it and ended up enjoying Cho's secction. I think the kind of love teenagers feel is of a different variety, and while I've never been a big fan of Cho, it seemed wrong not to include her and whatever relationship she and Harry did have for however short a time. But she defnitely couldn't handle complicated Harry! Haha, Ron is going to be fun to write.

Name: REMi iS AWESOME (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 7:19 · For: Chapter 1
That was really sweet the whole part with Lily his daughter, I love how great a father you portray him to be!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really liked writing the scene with Lily and I definitely imagine Harry to be a great father, so I'm glad you liked that!

Name: madhumakhi (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 5:27 · For: Chapter 1
I really like this story . 7 is a magical number .

Author's Response: Thank you! I agree -- seven is the best number :)

Name: hedwig4evr (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 2:23 · For: Chapter 1
Loved it!! Although I have to say, I almost would've liked to have read Luna's over Cho's. Not such a big fan. :-)
But, it was fantastic, and I loved Molly's. I'm sure Lily would have approved of Harry calling Molly "mum." Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! It was a tough decision, choosing who to put and finally picking Cho over Luna -- but chances are Luna will crop up again, while as Cho wouldn't get the chance. I'm glad you like the story anyway, and enjoyed Molly's scene!

Name: hedwig4evr (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 2:16 · For: Chapter 1
Loved it!! Although I have to say, I almost would've liked to have read Luna's over Cho's. Not such a big fan. :-)
But, it was fantastic, and I loved Molly's. I'm sure Lily would have approved of Harry calling Molly "mum." Can't wait for more!!

Name: siriusblackhead (Signed) · Date: 03/31/10 0:15 · For: Chapter 1
I have to say I really love this series you've started doing. I really hope you do Ron or Luna next, because I just love them. (I could be one of Ron's women. haha)

I especially loved Lily Luna and Ginny's stories. Harry is the cutest husband and father and of course he would blame himself for the attack on his daughter. jeez.

"Poor bloke'll be afraid of blubbering girls for the rest of his life." - hilarious

And I must say, that little tidbit at the end of McGonagall's section has me verrry curious :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thinking of doing both Ron and Luna, actually. And I definitely agree that Harry's an adorable husband and father -- I couldn't imagine him any other way :) As for McGonagall -- I've always thought she had an interesting story (but I've never had the guts to try writing it myself!)

Name: BeeKayBee (Signed) · Date: 03/30/10 23:16 · For: Chapter 1
i LOVE LOVE LOVE this series you are doing with hermione, ginny, and harry! can't wait to read the next one

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it! The next one hopefully isn't too far off. :)

Name: the opaleye (Signed) · Date: 03/30/10 23:14 · For: Chapter 1
Oh I loved this! Your choices were great for Harry and I have to say that I'm so happy you chose Cho. I have a bit of a soft spot for her character especially since a lot of fanfic writers give her a bit of a sore deal. So thanks for another great read. I absolutely adored how you finished with Ginny and Harry flying the Firebolt, that was a really very sweet touch. I hope you will write more of these. I think Neville would be a great one to do (but no pressure hehe)!

Julia XD

Author's Response: Thank you! Fanfiction generally isn't very nice to Cho, you're right, but imo her relationship with Harry seems so much more complicated than J.K. Rowling ever addressed, and I couldn't help but address it in this. I'm glad you liked it! As for that last scene -- I really wanted to show Harry and Ginny in all their happy glory, and it didn't seem right for the two of them if flying wasn't involved ;) I'm thinking of doing five more of these, and currently Neville is on the list, so stay tuned!

Name: radcliffe4eva (Signed) · Date: 03/30/10 22:58 · For: Chapter 1
I think I liked this one more than the Ginny one, which is saying *a lot* because I really liked this one as well.

You have such a talent for bringing these characters to life. I love reading your work!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having a lot of fun writing these, so I'm glad you're enjoying them!

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 03/30/10 22:17 · For: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT!!!!! I cried through the entire thing and laughed at the end! Great job! love it love it love it!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

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