Reviewer: Stella98989
Date: 06/28/11 13:08
Chapter: Chapter 32

Now I don't have to look up what punch drunk means. Thank you.

Author's Response: You're welcome. Hope you enjoyed the chapter! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 06/27/11 10:03
Chapter: Epilogue

Great ending! I loved how Celie punched Malfoy in the nose. I also liked seeing Harry and Snape argue. Some authors would have made it seem as if they were suddenly best friends after what happened, but I think that would just be really wrong. I'm going to look for the sequel because it sounds good. Thanks for writing this! :D

Author's Response: Dear MagicMandy, thank you for another glowing review! :) I'm so happy that you enjoyed the end of the story. I hope that you like the sequel! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 06/23/11 8:42
Chapter: Chapter 26

I liked seeing Celie adjust to the magical world. However, I feel like the way in which you disposed of Celie's mother was a bit too random. Don't be offended, though, because I understand that it was crucial to the development of the story, and I'd rather see her die happy instead of having dementia be the cause of death. Still, I like the story a lot. :D

Author's Response: Hello again, MagicMandy! :) Thank you for the informative review. I understand your point of view about the death of Celie's mother - I honestly didn't want to spend a long (and depressing) time disposing of her, since the story revolves around Severus and Celie. In an attempt to make the situation a bit lighter in nature for the readers, I tried to work in a bit of humor. As you say, the death was random, but I wanted Celie's mom to go out in a positive way. I'm not at all offended and I'm thrilled to see that you are still reading the story! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: GoldenPen246
Date: 06/22/11 5:38
Chapter: Epilogue

A road trip with...Oh sweet Merlin I can't wait for that one!

Author's Response: I hope that you like the first sequel. I am sure that it will bring a smile to your face! :) Thanks for the review! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 06/18/11 13:10
Chapter: Chapter 11

That chapter clearly took a lot of effort, and it was very enjoyable! I enjoyed seeing Snape so embarrassed. Also, I liked the references to Rebecca and the flying car. It was really, really good, possibly my favorite chapter so far

Author's Response: Hello again! You are absolutely correct - this chapter did take a lot of time to write, but I enjoyed every minute! :) I'm glad to hear that all my efforts paid off! Even now, when I reread this chapter, I always laugh out loud when I read Snape's thoughts and his mortified reactions to Celie. I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed reading this chapter and I hope that you like reading the rest of the story! :) Thanks for sending me your thoughts! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 06/17/11 16:22
Chapter: Epilogue

Excellant ending.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I appreciate you taking the time to let me know! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 06/17/11 12:44
Chapter: Chapter 8

This is an interesting story idea! I like your character. At first I thought she was a good person, but didn't have much going for her besides that. Now, though, I see that she is strong-willed and not afraid to stand up to people who mistreat her. Anyway, good job writing this, it's really good.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! :) I'm glad to see that my original character, Celie, is growing on you! It was rather difficult to introduce a new character into the mix when such realistic and engaging characters are already a part of the HP world, but I hope that, as you read the story, Celie will blend seamlessly into the magical world that we all love. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 06/17/11 0:14
Chapter: Epilogue

Loved the part about Lucius calling Celie "Madam Snape" - couldn't stop laughing. Can't wait to read the sequel.

Author's Response: I am also glad that Celie was able to "dish it out" to Lucius! (He certainly deserved it!) I'm really happy that you enjoyed the epilogue and I hope that you like the sequel. Thanks for sending me a review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/15/11 11:11
Chapter: Epilogue

Ruby,
That was the best epilogue I have ever read. Can't wait to see the sequel.
hpgploversforever (Kristin)

Author's Response: Kristin, that is one of the nicest compliments that I have ever been given! :) Thank you so much! I hope that you enjoy the sequel! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: sam1
Date: 06/15/11 6:27
Chapter: Epilogue

waitting for the sequel harry up

Author's Response: The sequel is coming - it just has to be approved by the moderator. I hope that you think that it was worth the wait! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 06/14/11 20:59
Chapter: Epilogue

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww!!! Story is over.... there's going to be an awful big pile of snot on my keyboard tonight. =(

Nevertheless... it was a superb ride. And what an amazing way to go out than to have Celie yanking Lucy's wand! He did have it coming and OMG I looooved reading about that punch! That was just marvellous!

I can not wait to see what the next big adventure brings up! ^.^ Our favorite group in the States!

Kudos for a much enjoyed literary ride! Loved the story!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear back from you! :) Don't be sad - I think that you will enjoy the sequel. I have certainly had a blast writing it! Like you, I am also very happy that Celie found some courage and dealt with Lucius the way she did. He certainly deserved that punch, in my opinion! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: AReader
Date: 06/14/11 20:33
Chapter: Epilogue

Ya-ay! A sequel! I'll look forward to it!

Author's Response: I hope that you enjoy the sequel! :) The first chapter should be posted very soon. Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/14/11 15:02
Chapter: Epilogue

Fantastic ending!! I've enjoyed this so much I'm going to read it again! Can't wait for your next installment!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked the epilogue! :) The first chapter of the sequel should be posted any day now! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: starkllr
Date: 06/14/11 11:13
Chapter: Chapter 33

Great work! I enjoyed this very much! I've been keeping up - sorry I haven't put up a review to the last couple of chapters.

I've got my guess for what we'll see in the epilogue - I'm looking forward to seeing if I'm right...

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear back from you! :) I'm thrilled that you are pleased with the progress of the story. I hope that you enjoy the epilogue. Happy Reading! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: dory2o2
Date: 06/12/11 23:18
Chapter: Chapter 33

I felt like this was just a filler, it was a good and well written chapter, but there was barely any substance to it. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm sorry that you didn't care for this chapter, dory2o2. I hope that you enjoy the epilogue, which will be the next and last chapter of this story. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/11/11 14:48
Chapter: Chapter 33

Ruby,
You are such an amazing writer. I can't wait to read the sequal and the Epilogue. Keep writing great stories. You will always bee one of my faviorte authors.
hpgploversforever

Author's Response: Gee, I'm blushing! Thank you for such a kind-hearted compliment. :) It is so gratifying to hear that somebody actually likes what I'm writing! I hope that you enjoy the epilogue! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: thornytorynx
Date: 06/10/11 19:03
Chapter: Chapter 33

Very satisfying. I'll be sad when this story is over! Is the sequal going to involve two pink lines????

Author's Response: Congratulations - you wrote my 150th review! In a show of my appreciation, you should be receiving - by owl, of course - a gift certificate to Madam Malkin's Robes for All Occasions! :) I'm glad that you liked the chapter, but don't be sad...the first chapter of the sequel will be submitted as soon as the epilogue is posted. I have a good feeling that the sequel will be favorably received - it is very funny, if I say so myself. As for the pink lines that you asked about, you're going to have to wait a bit for them, but they will eventually be the subject of a future sequel. Thanks again for the review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 06/10/11 18:44
Chapter: Chapter 33

Wonderful! Thank you for updating so quickly. I loved that Celie finally told the 2 men in her life what their actions were doing to her.I look forward to the next chapter & the sequels to see what's next for Celie & Snape.

Author's Response: Hello again, bearfoot! Thank you for sending me another sweet review! :) I'm so glad that you liked how Celie finally let Harry and Severus know that she's not going to choose between the two of them. I hope that you enjoy the upcoming epilogue and the first (of many) sequels! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/10/11 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 33

Loved it! I'm so glad there will be another chapter and *clutches heart* a sequel!! Wahoo!! I really liked that for once Harry had a hotter head about things than Ron! Very awesome!!

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you were pleased with the chapter! :) I hope that you enjoy the epilogue. I'm eagerly awaiting your thoughts on the last chapter! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Mrs Cedric Diggory
Date: 06/08/11 16:46
Chapter: Chapter 32

Great chapter! Can't wait for the rest.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you liked this chapter! :) Hope you enjoy the last two chapters of the story! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

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