Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 03/15/10 1:09
Chapter: Not Eating Blackberry Cobbler

I really enjoyed your interpretation of what it would be like to be Lupin. Your writing was nicely understated and it did not feel melodramatic or false at all which is a blessing in fanfiction. It was also nice to see the way you incorporated that line from the HBP film into the fic. It made the fic come full circle and I loved that. This is a really wonderful one-shot so well done! I look forward to reading more of your work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm really, really glad it didn't seem overly dramatic -- that's a problem I used to have, and I'm working now to not let that happen so much. And of course I'm very happy you liked it!

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 03/11/10 11:17
Chapter: Not Eating Blackberry Cobbler

That was great and it does make sense.
Poor Remus, you really got inside his head.
Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really tried to, so I'm quite happy you liked it.

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