I really liked it. This is going to be a great fic. Keep going, I want more!!!

I like the premis of this story; it sounds very interesting and I'll certainly be checking back for updates. You've certainly left a lot of unanswered questions that are intriguing (why is she running away? What are her parents bigotted about? Who found her?) and I can't wait for Remus to turn up. Your writing is descriptive too, but not over-wordy, so it flows well. This prologue is a bit short for my taste - but then it's a prologue so that doesn't matter and it serves its purpose very well. Interesting idea (but you could be right about the title - although he name Eia is interesting too.) ~Carole~