Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 03/15/10 14:42
Chapter: The Girl Who Came Back

wow i am sooooo pissed that darla is back she is a horrible person and i'm sooo glad that's anna;s back, i wonder if alex is going to get her hands on a time turner we'll see

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 03/15/10 11:17
Chapter: The Girl Who Came Back

Innocence is just so....innocent! And clueless, but in a really adorable way. And I'm so glad Anna's back! I was worried Alex was going to run away from school and try to save her from some terrible wizarding prison, or something equally dangerous. But I'm still really worried about what she's going to do about Max, and what she's going to do to Darla. Update again soon please!

Reviewer: witch1561
Date: 03/15/10 6:24
Chapter: The Girl Who Came Back

Alexandra's going to do something really stupid, isn't she.... why does she have to be so dumb? Well, I know that, I suppose....

I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 03/12/10 15:34
Chapter: The Ghost Writer

pretty good chapter, i really want to hear more about what the 2 old wizards were talking about in the owl post office. When are we going to learn whats going on with anna, i hope alex gets better she's so down now

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 03/10/10 1:28
Chapter: Innocence

Hmmmmm......This chapter was choc-full-of-info, but was otherwise entertaining. Was hoping for a little more of snide-remarking alex to the Rashes, but we can't have everything now can we?! I love Innocence already...sounds like Ozarker's gone wild?! jk. I feel we are going to see and hear more from little innocence during this year. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 03/08/10 14:50
Chapter: Innocence

i hope anna comes back to school. pretty good chapter hope the ozarcks don't shun alex for the coming year

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/08/10 6:47
Chapter: The Witch of Old Larkin Pond

The witch of old Larkin Pond. The title of this chapter reminds me of a novel, "the Witch of Blackbird Pond" a story that takes place in Wethersfield Ct in the late.1600's. It's the story of a 16 year old who is accused of witchcraft because she is different.

I wonder if Diana knows that Alexandra has her memories back and is just saying nothing.

Ever since book 2, I wondered if Bonnie was going to be a witch. If she isn't, it will be interesting to see where this story line goes.

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 03/06/10 18:26
Chapter: The Witch of Old Larkin Pond

Poor Alex, like she hadn't had enough nastiness last year. This one starts with an encounter with Diana Bitch Grimm, the DESTRUCTION of her broom (she should sue, BTW!) and another not so pleasant run-in with Brian and Bonnie... :'(

I feel so bad for her... And she hasn't even heard of Anna's problems yet! I guess once she finds out, she'll be even more angry. It's soo bloody unfair, I mean, she's got far nore cheek than advisable, I give ou that. But the treatment the Confederation gives her is unacceptable. Not that Daddy Thorn behaves in an even remotely decent way towards his children...

Argh! So furious for Alex's sake!!! Stupid Bitch Grimm!!

PS: Super duper happy to see chapter 2 up so soon!!!
PS2: GREAT chapter. As you might notice, it really makes you relate to Alex' anger and frustration...

Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 03/06/10 6:38
Chapter: The Witch of Old Larkin Pond

excellent, as always.

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 03/05/10 18:22
Chapter: The Witch of Old Larkin Pond

hmmmmmm...that was more of what i was hoping to read!! great chapter! was hoping to see if anna was going to contact alex or if it was her in the bushes...good twist with it being bonnie.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 03/05/10 13:43
Chapter: The Witch of Old Larkin Pond

wow alex is a little bitter and winey. should be a good next chapter

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 03/03/10 11:31
Chapter: The WODAMND Act

Glad you are back. I like the different point of view. It reinforces the paranoia that the first book has.

Reviewer: I-luv-Hogwarts
Date: 03/01/10 20:09
Chapter: The WODAMND Act

Good opening chapter, I wouldn't exactly call it a cliff hanger, but something close. I have to say that I just finnished book 2 and loved it, the end had me in tears.
I know you most-likely get this a lot but, post asap!
I-L-H

Reviewer: chickonsticks
Date: 03/01/10 16:34
Chapter: The WODAMND Act

I got so excited to see Alexandra back! Yeah! Still one of my favorite on going series and the WODAMD act sounds a bit like it was based on the Patriot act...

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 03/01/10 15:18
Chapter: The WODAMND Act

WOW!!!!! what a first chapter, i've been waiting for this for a while now. a really good starting off point for the story, can't wait to see where anna goes for help and if alex can help at all

Reviewer: Calico
Date: 03/01/10 9:52
Chapter: The WODAMND Act

I'm so glad the third book is here - just in time to distract me from my midterms! I love that you wrote from Anna's perspective (even though I'm dying to know how Alexandra is really doing, after everything that happened at the end of book 2). I cannot wait for the next chapter! Update as soon as humanly possible, please!

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 03/01/10 8:34
Chapter: The WODAMND Act

Holly bucket of freezing water!!!!

Okey, first things first. WOOOOOOOOOOPEEEEEEE!!!! Alexandra's third book!!!!! Horray!!!

*does victory dance, over and over again* ^_^

Now... it's refreshing to have a first chapter told in darling lovely addorable timid Anna's POV. It's really interesting to hear her thoughts about Alex and also a quick way of covering the past events.

I enjoyed very much hearing of Anna's home and the way every neighbor sort of "shows off" with great stuff on their front gardens. It gives the Malfoy's white peacocs a run for their galleons! ^_^

WODAMND and the Auror's way of acting is remarkably similar to the way Policemen acted during dictatorships in my country... So, creepy, very creepy and *shudders* to the thought of what might be enduring Anna's dad...

And I do wonder, what on Earth is poor Anna going to do now... She can't possibly abandon her mum. Can she go up to any of her neighbors for help? How will they react to the falling from grace of Gemming?

You evil writer.... There were a million questions left hanging after Lands Bellow.... and first chapter of the next book opens a million more!!!!! You're sooooo bloody brilliant!!!!

I'll be watching the recetns even more requently now!!! ^_^

*leaves skidding happily*

Reviewer: potterchassid
Date: 03/01/10 3:59
Chapter: The WODAMND Act

Ah, congratulations to you and your readers, the long awaited volume three has arrived!

Reviewer: dominiqueweasley
Date: 03/01/10 0:37
Chapter: The WODAMND Act

Hooray! It's back! Can't wait to get back to this story. I like this chapter a lot and am totally excited for this story. :)

Reviewer: MetamorphmagusLupin
Date: 02/28/10 23:45
Chapter: The WODAMND Act

I am so happy to see Alexandra's third year getting posted! It was very interesting to see Anna's POV for once, though I can't wait to see what Alex is up to. I bet she's still in a lot of pain from Max's death. Poor Alexandra..there is still so much she doesn't understand. For that matter, there's still so much I don't understand...Can't wait for the update!

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