Reviews For Slytherin Boy
Reviewer: Slythindor47
Date: 04/18/10 15:08
Chapter: Longbottom's Home

This is good and I want too read the rest, but I noticed something: If this would have really happened, then the sorting hat wouldn't have even considered putting Harry in Slytherin.

Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked it, and the next chapter should be up really soon its just i have tried to post it through numerous times but them charming mods are still not accepting it :) And ah-ha i thought somebody would one day ask about that, personally i only think it was a tiny bit because of what had happened he got put in slytherin, this is an alternate universe story so you're aloud to muck around with the characters a bit so what about harry potter is just a little bit more cockier than were all used to?? trust me if you keep reading it and if i actually can be bothered to complete the story but am sure i will get there you will understand it! again thanks for the review though ~Courtney~

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 03/13/10 15:44
Chapter: Longbottom's Home

cool i love how voldy let them live and then got wasted for letting them live great first chapter can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and I hope you keep on reading my story to the end.. Mugglenet is being horrible to me at the moment though,, I have my second AND third chapter finnished but they are just not accepting my second chapter!! I have tried about 20 and have had about 4 beta's onto the 1 chapter but something just is not right.. Keep on looking though and I really hope the next chapter will be up soon x Thanks for reviewing ;)

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 02/13/10 9:30
Chapter: Longbottom's Home

wow that was a really interesting chapter, i can't wait to see where you take it i look forward to the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Well thanks for reviewing =] And the next chaptershold be up soon, I am just waiting for it to be accepted as I did try to put it up a few days ago but they declined it so fingers crossed it will be accepted this time, hop you like the rest of my story!! ~Courtney~

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 02/09/10 16:17
Chapter: Longbottom's Home

So, Neville's dead, his parents are alive, and the Potters aren't in the picture yet? Interesting idea... I've actually written a one-shot where Harry is in Slytherin, myself. I'm curious to see how you pull this off. Also, you may want to look back at your second to last paragraph- the commas are kind of over done and its a bit of a run-on sentence. And one more nit-pick: your dialogue is a bit formal. For instance, try "can't" instead of "cannot" to make it a bit more believable. Good luck with this story!

Author's Response: Yep, Neville is indeed dead and his parent's are alive =] But see, just wait till the next chapterand it will be a tad more explained.. I know that the story is about Harry being put into Slytherin but I felt like I had to add these first to chapters in =] And thanks.. I will try and sort that a litte Thanks for reading and reviewing though ~Courtney~

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