Reviews For Little Lions
Reviewer: dahpjkr7
Date: 01/11/11 18:19
Chapter: The Point of No Return

Can't wait to read the rest!
your a great writer

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: shiznittt
Date: 01/03/11 20:33
Chapter: Prologue: The October Storm

I am utterly in love with your story. When I first started reading it I was a bit apprehensive it would just focus on Lily and James' relationship and leave Sirius aside. But, UAU, Izza is perfection. Which leads us to Izza + Sirius= Master perfection!
The suspense is killing me, for real. And, may I add, I've read your whole story in two days. Yeah, I guess I can say I became a little addicted to it. And now I beg you for an update!

Author's Response: Oh my god, this review made my day! I'm glad you're enjoy the story and I'm glad it's suspenseful - makes you come back and read more *wink*. The next chapter is very nearly ready to go.

Reviewer: chattyswimmer
Date: 01/03/11 12:20
Chapter: The Point of No Return

Oh gosh, the suspense is killing me! Please, I beg, update soon!!!

Author's Response: I've just submitted the next chapter :D

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 11/15/10 18:22
Chapter: Aftermath

AHHHHHH!!!!! This chapter was soo good! I've missed this story so much, you have to update soon!!!!! I love the whole Izza, Sirius, Remus thing, and also the James/Lily thing. So good please keep writing!

Reviewer: divine fog
Date: 10/23/10 23:51
Chapter: How Deep the Bruises Lie

feels like i am back to the POTTER world that Rowling had created! awesome storyline and very well phrased scenarios... *thumbs up

i really can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded... please do it soooooon!!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, that is such a huge compliment - you're going to make me blush :) I'm just waiting for the next chap to come back from the beta, so hopefully it should be up very soon.

Reviewer: skies are blue
Date: 10/10/10 22:28
Chapter: Prologue: The October Storm

Great story so far!
I love how you've managed to add so much depth to the characters of Lily and the Marauders while staying true to what we know about them from the books. Too often in fics, they seem to become predictable caricatures, but in this story they come across as believable and multi-dimensional. I think Izza adds a lot to the story, too, and it was interesting to get a glimpse of her family and childhood in the last chapter. For an 'ice queen' with an unusual and mysterious past, she's surprisingly easy to relate to.
The plot twists you’ve thrown in (didn’t expect to like Vlad as much as I did, didn't see Diagon Alley coming) have me completely hooked, just like the first time I read the original books. Can't wait to find out what happens next :-)

Author's Response: Thank you much! I work hard to make sure I nail characterisation, so it's always awesome to hear that I'm doing a good job. Plenty more twists and turns to come, so keep reading :D

Reviewer: Eowynatheart
Date: 09/29/10 20:23
Chapter: How Deep the Bruises Lie

Is it bad that I really like Vlad and I want her to marry him?? I love Sirius but we all know he never married...

Author's Response: It's not bad - Vlad is a good guy :)

Reviewer: Eowynatheart
Date: 09/29/10 17:47
Chapter: If You Don't Know Me By Now

So I almost died laughing when I read that, its so out-of-character for Lily! Thank you for making my day.

Reviewer: Chloemontanapotter
Date: 09/18/10 20:06
Chapter: If You Don't Know Me By Now


Reviewer: fairy_lights27
Date: 09/11/10 18:10
Chapter: Lazarus Rising

Cliffie? Whyyy?
Update pleasee!

Author's Response: Cliffie = to make you read the next chapter, of course :D And also because I do love a good cliffhanger. Next chapter is in the que.

Reviewer: Heiress of Marauders
Date: 09/11/10 13:14
Chapter: Prologue: The October Storm

Talk about a cliffhanger! Izza has a fascinating history. This chapter was amazing, please keep them coming!

Author's Response: Next chapter is in the que. Glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 08/15/10 10:05
Chapter: Forget The Dog, Beware The Evans

Oh! So good! i cant believe remus likes izza too! it should be sirius and izza! update soon please!

Author's Response: Ah, Rosty, my loyal reviewer! Next chapter is already waiting for validation :D

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 08/07/10 19:36
Chapter: Don't Leave Me With My Thoughts

OMG OMG OMG i am soooo happy!! Finally!!!!!!!!! It was great i loveeeeee sirius and izza!! i also love the fact that they both have a dark side, i mean they are totally gryffindors, but they will always have those family ties - i think it is really well done. and lily and jamessahhh the tension! I love it! please keep sirius and izza together and update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, they both have that dark streak, but then so does everyone, I think. I'm glad you think their family ties are well done - the human sense of loyalty and obligation is a twisted, fascinating thing and I plan to explore it even more in this story, so expect more of the Blacks and Moldovoneaus :D

Reviewer: Lollipop2203
Date: 07/03/10 14:50
Chapter: Paranoid

A really good story! i really enjoyed it, is there anymore chapters coming??

Author's Response: Thank you. More chapters are on the way - most of this story is actually written, so updates are pretty frequent.

Reviewer: lucca4
Date: 06/26/10 2:48
Chapter: Prologue: The October Storm


Please, please post the next chapter soon!
I'm loving this story by the way :). Izza is an amazing OC.

Author's Response: Thank you :D The new chapter is up, another is on the way :)

Author's Response: Thank you :D The new chapter is up, another is on the way :)

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 06/23/10 17:35
Chapter: Paranoid

AAAAAH! Please update soon! Such a cliffhanger! You are such a good writer - I love Izza and Sirius - they really need to get together - however, Remus and Izza was cute too - something there perhaps? Oh, and is anything going to happen with Lily and James? Anyway, please update soon!

Author's Response: Hmmm... Izza and Remus? Interesting... Of course something will happen with Lily and James :D Just not right now - there's a little too much tension (the 'I want to punch you so bad right now' tension as opposed to the 'I want to shag you all night long' tension) for anything of the romantic persuasion to happen right now. But sit tight! There is plenty of action coming up.

Reviewer: 14hundred
Date: 06/23/10 8:11
Chapter: Paranoid

oooooooooo i love this it is sooo creepy sometimes but its really really good!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 06/15/10 19:32
Chapter: There Goes The Neighbourhood

I'm loving it so far! Please continue, I am very interested to see what Izza's so secretive about, and of course just dying to see her and Sirius get together :)

Author's Response: Thanks :D Next chapter is already up and just waiting for validation.

Reviewer: Marshall Marie
Date: 06/15/10 12:41
Chapter: There Goes The Neighbourhood

i really really like this story

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: chattyswimmer
Date: 06/01/10 21:24
Chapter: Oh Brother, Where Have Thou Been?

Wow. This is the first time in a while that I've been able to really read a Marauder era fiction. It's my favorite genre, and I used to only read it. But recently, I've become picky with the quality of the stories I've been reading - that's what happens when you've read so many cliches, and similar story lines. Your story, though, is so intriguing! It has different ideas, and you portray the usual things like the Lily/James drama in such a unique way - I mean that you don't all of a sudden have Lily only able to think about James and the way he's changed. I love that you also have her think of other things.

Speaking of other things, I also adore Sirius and fact, I love that you have all the Gryffindor seventh years as best friends - I like that they all hang out together.

Finally, I want to say that your writing style is fantastic! I can't wait, and am dying with suspense, for the next chapter!!! Please update again as soon as you can!!

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad that my story is the one to tempt you back :D That makes me feel awesome, and I really do my best to avoid those Marauder Era cliches that turn people off, because I've encountered plenty myself, so it's great to hear that I'm doing something right :D The next chapter is being betaed as we speak, so it should be up really soon.

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