This is honestly one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. It was touching in an odd way, and for some reason I almost felt like crying at the end. I've always held a lot of sympathy for Regulus, and this story brought that out. I really, really liked how you characterized him, and how he felt like an actual person and not just a character. I also liked how you portrayed Lily- and Sirius. Great Job! ~Olivia
Let me start by saying that I adore this story, very realistic, and although we don't know very much about Regulus's character from the books, I reckon that you've got him nailed.
I loved seeing these characters (James, Lily, Sirius) from a different perspective, from a Death Eaters eyes. You included a lot of small details that I thought were really clever.
Anyways, great job!
Melissa, this is really really amazing. I love the characterization, I loved the description... Seriously, when James, Sirius, and Lily entered the store, I had almost like a video playing in my head of the three graduates entering Flourish and Blott's, kind of in slow-motion... XD I liked that description, it was really good. I liked Regulus's behavior through it, too. It wasn't like he was hopelessly infatuated with Lily despite knowing that she was beautiful, and it wasn't like he was ready to kill her just because she's a Muggleborn. He existed in some interim that was realistic and amusing at the same time. So yes. I really liked reading this =) Becca:D
this was really good. i liked it a lot...u should consider continueing with it... brilliant job
Awww! A crush on Lily!