Reviews For Jemzi
Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 09/08/10 19:55
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

Really loved this chapter! A lot of romance, and it was a long one too! Great Job!
Parting from this story is becoming very painful...

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I know, I can't quite believe it's near the end

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 09/08/10 17:10
Chapter: Calm Before the Storm

this is getting intense. SO luka likes lily it's about time hse realized all she has to do now is accept that she loves him. So jemzi met her grandpa...interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next. how wil rose's situation with scorpius work out, and leon and tristan is that the end of that? we need a proper resolution. As always great chapter

Author's Response: Glad the intensity is building well :D

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 09/08/10 16:42
Chapter: Visits From the Past

Bastien sends a bad signals me thinks. BUt this chapter was quie interesting as usual. THe little bit about Draco i particularaly liked. it shwes him being human and i really think it was a growing experience for scorpius.

Author's Response: So glad you like :D

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 09/08/10 16:29
Chapter: Love Means Slowly Losing Your Mind

this was an amazing chapter. SO full of details. It felt very short somehow, but maybe that was jsut my impression. I want to know more about these side relationships, leon and tristan, rose and scorpicous and lily and luka. gimme more gimme more. :D

Author's Response: So much more to come :D x

Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 09/08/10 9:24
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

Albus better not die! I really like him!!

Author's Response: I kinda like him too, so we'll see :D

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 09/07/10 22:26
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

I swear, if you killed Albus I will... Well, be very upset, I suppose.(Very threatening, I know.) Can we have a happy ending? Pleeeease? :)

Author's Response: We shall see :D next chapter soon

Reviewer: Eowynatheart
Date: 09/07/10 20:51
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

YES! GO SCORPIUS! Its about time! the same for Lily and Luka, they are so precious! People like Algernon are such hypocrites, i mean, seriously? They were all at a freaking ball for their kids! nice long chapter, keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Will do, but only one last chapter to go!! Stay tuned :D

Reviewer: padfoot2116
Date: 09/07/10 20:26
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

that was just fantastic! the ending was completely amazing, the way you worded it was beautiful :) please get the next chapter up quickly!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I intend to get the next chapter uploaded quickly :D

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 09/07/10 19:59
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

WOW! Great cliffhanger! I can't wait for the next one! Thank you for writing this wonderful story.

Author's Response: Thank you for a lovely comment; next and final chapter soon, I hope :D

Reviewer: trussrr
Date: 09/07/10 18:39
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

o my gosh ALBUS!!!! wow omg omg thats terible PLUS lilys sick but good thing she has Luka with her. please let me know albus will be fine? and FINALLY rose and scorpius are back together!!! and too bad tristin and leon are still doing an acward dance around each other and not getting together. please keep writing. you the best author i know because everytime i read another fan fiction book im always like "albus is not acting right" "wheres jemzi come in at" "why is lily with him and not with luka" please keep writng, your writng is worth the wait.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. One of the nicest comments I've had in some time :) Hopefully, everything will be tied up in the next and final chapter :D

Reviewer: Evora
Date: 09/07/10 18:38
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

Dearest dearest Belledeg,

I was planning to leave a great, humongous review when this story ends, but my lovely friend, Alyssa (ron lover), is so obssessed with your story that she asked me to request:


Yeah, that's not how she exactly said it, but there's the point :D Seriously, please have more tristan/leon; Alyssa's like, rereading your story for how many times just to get some clues about the pairing... XD

As for me, I ADORE Rose/Scorpius. I just entirely love the scene that you wrote about them. You, Belledeg, are a fantastic writer. Keep up the excellent job!

Much love,
Dinny and Alyssa

Author's Response: Will do. Plenty of Leon and Tristan in the finale. Glad you both enjoy, it means a lot for the slash pairing to get some love :D <3

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 09/07/10 16:49
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

Holy canelones!!! What A chapter!!

I truly can't point towards the bit I liked most... Let's see... Scorpious and Rose mazyingly written make up? That was too lovely. "my idiot" and all that. Freshly out of fluff. Loved it!! ^.^

Perhaps, Luka's daring rescue!! That was quite awesome. Lily stupid reckless thing! But perfect grounds for Krum to play prince charming. ^.^ I soo like the Bulgarian hawtness!

Still want to see Blaise's reaction to his new-found daddy! He had a nice detail with the dress, that much us certain.

Also liked the Harry and Ginny seasoning. The hints towards their own little love story were a sweet touch.

Let's see... what else did I just love? Well, the Boy Who Loved, clearly. And the fact that Keeler's dad turned out to be the prickiest prick of the chapter. Hehehe! That'll give the skank some thinking to do! *snorts* Her dad nearly kills Harry Potter's son! Jackass!!

On a side note... could the Malfoys be more slow to catch on? Going solo into a deserted corridor AND giving room to disarming. Useful for lovely Albus' rescue, not so much of self-preservation instinct for a former Death Eater! Tut-tut!

Oh, and, yeah! There IS the little yet HUGE detail of Al wanting to ask Jem to live with him. I do hope that's the first thing he blurts out once he regains consciousness!!

LOVED the chapter. Soooo sad it's next to last.... :'(

Author's Response: Once he regains conciousness?? Very optimistic ;-)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 09/01/10 22:06
Chapter: Calm Before the Storm

Thanks for the Tom/Keedie chapter!  :)  Can't wait for the end, but I'm a bit scared...  I know how you ended MTT and I'm wary as to whether this one ends similarly.  Then there is always the FHV which ended happily, so it could go either way.  There are butterflies in my stomach in anticipation for the oncoming two chapters!! 

Author's Response: Some people clearly know me too well...Next chapter will indeed have some twists

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 08/31/10 20:33
Chapter: Calm Before the Storm

That scene between Tom and Keeds was very very moving. :,(

However, I've got to say that the high tension scene between Luka and Lily was what stole my breath. And Jem had to change in and to an Umbridge!! ('ahem') Little minx!!

Anyhow, I very much enjoyed the chapter!! ^.^
I'd have expected Jem to be a little more volatile with her grandfather... But I guess her reaction was rather regular and understandable... I just don't like this Bastien's attitude that much. Thinks he has some right over Jem to pull strings from the shadows and introduce himself through Wingate totally bypassing her parents (and his son) If I were Blaise I'd be royally pissed! And I suspect that's what this chapter's tittle was about, right?

Wicked! ;)

Author's Response: The chapter title of course suggests what must come ;-) Lily and Luka in the next chapter, I promise :D

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 08/31/10 15:08
Chapter: Calm Before the Storm

yay! so good, i can't say how much i love lily and luka! and i love bastien, he is a great character, but i wish jemzi would tell albus about him because i think it might cause a problem - update soon!

Author's Response: She will in her own time. Next chapter soon; a nice long one too :)

Reviewer: Lympha
Date: 08/31/10 12:42
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

Thanks for writing this awesome chap. I really loved the part where Jemzi met her granddad. Wonder how Blaise will react if he meets him. Also will you write some more about Leon and Tristan? I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Next chapter is a very long and pretty intense one! Stay tuned :D

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 08/31/10 1:11
Chapter: Calm Before the Storm

This is the first chapter I have read from your story, although I don't udually read chaptered fictions from this genre. I realise you have a gift for detailed sketching. The next generation characters are written nicely but since you are the famous Belledeg I have to say that the part with Tom and Keedie did not disappoint. It's been a while I read something so flawless. I wonder some times whether it is because it is Tom, you know. Some of the richness that exudes from your writing about him, has to be simply just because of the choice of character. You have some talent there. Your other Tom Riddle fiction I haven't read, maybe just a few chapters I believe. Well may be it is just about Tom as a character holding my attention and then not holding my attention so much at other times.

But the few times it has and I have stumbled upon your work, its been mind-blowing. The person who send you the request in the PM is lucky. And so I am today it seems.

Great job!


Author's Response: Thanks for such a lovely review, I hope to hear from you again in the future :D

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 08/30/10 20:52
Chapter: Calm Before the Storm

Only two chapters left?! Any chance you're going to make a new story focusing on Luka and Lily? I certainly wouldn't disapprove... *hint hint* :)

Author's Response: I was considering it, but when I start school--I don't think I'll have time! But I promise that Luka/Lily will get its moment :D

Reviewer: trussrr
Date: 08/30/10 15:53
Chapter: Calm Before the Storm

i love how you added keedie and tom in there! i love keedie. can't wait to see what happens at the ball?!?!?!?! where was Scorpius??? your an amazing writer, keep it up. i don't want to sound whinny but can you please write faster, i'm excited to know what happens next. :)

Author's Response: I'm going as quick as I can, I promise! The queue always takes ages. The ball has a few surprises in store :D

Reviewer: ThatRomantic
Date: 08/30/10 15:12
Chapter: Calm Before the Storm

Ooh... the Keedie/Tom scene was excellent, and I love Luka/Lily.

if this story is nearly finished, will there be a sequel?


Author's Response: Who knows? But yep, this story is nearly finished. Thank you for reading and reviewing, and sticking with it while it's a work in progress :D

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