Reviews For Jemzi
Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 03/01/10 16:33
Chapter: A Nobody Amongst a Bunch of National Treasures

I hope you know how good this story is. All I can say is keep writing!

Author's Response: Will do, next chapter soon :)

Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 02/26/10 5:59
Chapter: A Nobody Amongst a Bunch of National Treasures

Wow, I love this story more and more every time I read a chapter! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I will, thank you :) Next chapter soon

Reviewer: RGSH
Date: 02/25/10 14:51
Chapter: A Nobody Amongst a Bunch of National Treasures

i love this story and the chapter was great though im dying to know about the fight. don't forget about your other stories though i feel like i havent read a chapter of mff in a year lol

Author's Response: The fight will become clear eventually :D

Reviewer: AccioDiadem
Date: 02/25/10 10:10
Chapter: A Nobody Amongst a Bunch of National Treasures

I love how you bring Keedie into all of your stories! Poor Jemzi, no one ever wants to hear her side. The story is great so far, can't wait till the next update.

Author's Response: I have a lot a lot to thank Keeds for. Next update soon :D

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 02/20/10 15:53
Chapter: A Bunch of Hotheads

Wow! I look forward to more! you're a great writer!

Author's Response: Thank you :D Plenty more to come!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 02/15/10 18:06
Chapter: A Bunch of Hotheads

aweeeee :(
that's so sweetly sad!!
OMG I LOVE YOUR WRITING
POST MORE SOON PLEASE

Author's Response: Just getting started, plenty more to come :P

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 02/15/10 17:48
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

oh i wonder who it could be!!! and yah i totally get what jemzi's saying with the daddy's little girl thing... it was like that before my sister came along as well

Author's Response: I'm glad you got the sibling bit cos it'll be important later. :D

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 02/15/10 16:41
Chapter: A Bunch of Hotheads

Interesting... Jem seems capable of uprising many kinds of emotions.

The fight with Albus... heart related I guess, maybe.

But these fighting fellows... I wonder what's the story behind them and if it relates to the one with Al, or maybe it's just sub-plot...


I like the quiet and shy romance between Rose and Scorpious. Very sweet!

Nice story. Very promising!! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you. More updates soon :D

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 02/15/10 16:15
Chapter: A Bunch of Hotheads

this is really interesting. i love how you can establish tension without hitting us over the head with it. (and i love blaise and harper! so therefore i love jemzi a lot too :p) nice story :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. More soon :D

Reviewer: dominiqueweasley
Date: 02/15/10 15:09
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

Ah, poor Al. :) I like the character development you've got going on here! Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: No problem. Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Poor Al indeed. Stay tuned. :D

Reviewer: CloverSun
Date: 02/14/10 15:44
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

there is only one chapter out, but I'm already in love with it!!! You HAVE to make this story longer then your rest!!! I don't want the fun to end so soon!!

Author's Response: My other stories are quite long, but they're not completed. Though I do intend to keep this one up. Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: RGSH
Date: 02/08/10 23:48
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

You have no clue how excited i was to see this story was posted! I loved it, it's going great so far except one little critique:
I hate the line when ginny says "but she'll break your heart"
I understand the story telling aspect of it but its a little out of character. She is refering to the daughter of her friend who has a very succesful relationship and Ginny herself has a good relationship so i dont see why she would be biased against Jemzi, just a thought but like I said love the story.

Author's Response: Ginny loves Jemzi, but she knows her too well. She knows her nature, and the implication is that Jemzi will not mean to do it. It's essential for the initial relationship between the two. Next chapter soon, ta for th review :D

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 02/07/10 15:07
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

Oooooo.... please write more!!

Author's Response: Will do :P

Reviewer: way_too_HP_obsessed4011
Date: 02/06/10 19:43
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

AH! why didn't I see this earlier?! BRILLIANT! More Blaise/Harper ANDDDD my favorite new generation kids Rose, Al and Scorp! Update again soon, love!

Author's Response: Yep. Plenty of Blaise/Harper with some next gen fun as well. Stay tuned :P

Reviewer: aruna mukerjee
Date: 02/05/10 12:34
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

as usual i loved it!!

plz update soon!

Author's Response: Ah thanks. Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: xxBigGreenEyesxx
Date: 02/05/10 3:19
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

EEEEEEE!!!
I've been excited for this since the end of FHV!!!!! I'm using excessive amounts of punctuation I'm that excited!
So far so good, please update quickly =]
Oh, and I'm glad there's a Holmwood in this story! I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of dramas he's going to create (because they always do) XD

Author's Response: Ah yes, there is a Holmwood. But he's a good Holmwood, there to prove that you can fight your bloodline. Next chapter soon :P

Reviewer: Amanda Vega
Date: 02/04/10 22:56
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

It's here! Yay!

They are such kids about their parents' relationship, which I find hilarious and truly and completely accurate. It's one of those little things you manage to put in there that just makes it better.

Very much looking forward to what happens. I like Jemzi - she's an individual, that's for sure, but in the best possible way!

Author's Response: I like Jemzi too, I have good plans for her. Next chapter soon :D

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