Okay, I just read your story with Harper and Blaise and it made me even more eager to read this one! Please please please update soon!
Author's Response: Next chapter's in the queue right now. Thanks for reading :)
I enjoy reading this fic so much and I'm itching to know why Jemzi and Al had their falling out. It's a great fic, keep writing because I can't get enough.
Author's Response: Next chapter up soon, I promise. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D
You are a very good writer! At first I thought it was going to be just a typical romance blah blah blah. Yet you managed to make me soo curious about the fight that now i check like every hour to see if you have updated! very good idea please update soon!
Author's Response: Next chapter's in the queue, so glad you enjoyed the story so far! :D
I hope you know how good this story is. All I can say is keep writing!
Author's Response: Will do, next chapter soon :)
Wow, I love this story more and more every time I read a chapter! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I will, thank you :) Next chapter soon
i love this story and the chapter was great though im dying to know about the fight. don't forget about your other stories though i feel like i havent read a chapter of mff in a year lol
Author's Response: The fight will become clear eventually :D
I love how you bring Keedie into all of your stories! Poor Jemzi, no one ever wants to hear her side. The story is great so far, can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response: I have a lot a lot to thank Keeds for. Next update soon :D
Wow! I look forward to more! you're a great writer!
Author's Response: Thank you :D Plenty more to come!
that's so sweetly sad!!
OMG I LOVE YOUR WRITING
POST MORE SOON PLEASE
Author's Response: Just getting started, plenty more to come :P
oh i wonder who it could be!!! and yah i totally get what jemzi's saying with the daddy's little girl thing... it was like that before my sister came along as well
Author's Response: I'm glad you got the sibling bit cos it'll be important later. :D
Interesting... Jem seems capable of uprising many kinds of emotions.
The fight with Albus... heart related I guess, maybe.
But these fighting fellows... I wonder what's the story behind them and if it relates to the one with Al, or maybe it's just sub-plot...
I like the quiet and shy romance between Rose and Scorpious. Very sweet!
Nice story. Very promising!! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you. More updates soon :D
this is really interesting. i love how you can establish tension without hitting us over the head with it. (and i love blaise and harper! so therefore i love jemzi a lot too :p) nice story :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. More soon :D
Ah, poor Al. :) I like the character development you've got going on here! Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: No problem. Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Poor Al indeed. Stay tuned. :D
there is only one chapter out, but I'm already in love with it!!! You HAVE to make this story longer then your rest!!! I don't want the fun to end so soon!!
Author's Response: My other stories are quite long, but they're not completed. Though I do intend to keep this one up. Next chapter soon :D
You have no clue how excited i was to see this story was posted! I loved it, it's going great so far except one little critique:
I hate the line when ginny says "but she'll break your heart"
I understand the story telling aspect of it but its a little out of character. She is refering to the daughter of her friend who has a very succesful relationship and Ginny herself has a good relationship so i dont see why she would be biased against Jemzi, just a thought but like I said love the story.
Author's Response: Ginny loves Jemzi, but she knows her too well. She knows her nature, and the implication is that Jemzi will not mean to do it. It's essential for the initial relationship between the two. Next chapter soon, ta for th review :D
Oooooo.... please write more!!
Author's Response: Will do :P
AH! why didn't I see this earlier?! BRILLIANT! More Blaise/Harper ANDDDD my favorite new generation kids Rose, Al and Scorp! Update again soon, love!
Author's Response: Yep. Plenty of Blaise/Harper with some next gen fun as well. Stay tuned :P
as usual i loved it!!
plz update soon!
Author's Response: Ah thanks. Next chapter soon :D
I've been excited for this since the end of FHV!!!!! I'm using excessive amounts of punctuation I'm that excited!
So far so good, please update quickly =]
Oh, and I'm glad there's a Holmwood in this story! I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of dramas he's going to create (because they always do) XD
Author's Response: Ah yes, there is a Holmwood. But he's a good Holmwood, there to prove that you can fight your bloodline. Next chapter soon :P
It's here! Yay!
They are such kids about their parents' relationship, which I find hilarious and truly and completely accurate. It's one of those little things you manage to put in there that just makes it better.
Very much looking forward to what happens. I like Jemzi - she's an individual, that's for sure, but in the best possible way!
Author's Response: I like Jemzi too, I have good plans for her. Next chapter soon :D