Reviewer: RGSH
Date: 04/12/10 15:20
Chapter: Hey, Weren't You My Best Friend Once?
this is probably my favorite chapter. I am confused by one part, lilly has a line about a white knight and then. "Her cousin gave her a look but jemzi hadnt heard." but im confused on who you meant cus al is lillys brother
Author's Response: Gah, you're so right. Okay...I shall change that at some point. Until then, ssh! :D
Reviewer: Callisto Anaxandra
Date: 04/11/10 21:51
Chapter: Hey, Weren't You My Best Friend Once?
I don't know whether or not I approve of your stringing out the mystery of their argument like this. Sometimes I think that it is a ploy to keep readers attached, but then I do enjoy wondering when you'll have the big reveal. Your writing does keep me on the edge of my seat with its excitement. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Arument will be revealed round about chapter ten. It's probably not even that impressive. Stay tuned though :)
Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 04/11/10 20:33
Chapter: Hey, Weren't You My Best Friend Once?
LOL!! L O V E that song!!
Can you hear my SOS?
Jem!! Wakw up doll! Your BF is head over heals for you!! And deep down, you're head over heals for him too!!! ^_^
Great chapter!! And great catch!! I bet Blaise, if he ever hears of Callum's nasty trick, might need to adjust his attitude towards Albus, uh?
BTW, what on Eart is going on wit Hogwarts? I do hope there are some consequences for that prat's actions! Jem gets called to the principal's office for talking back to a teacher... He might as well have shot an Avada at her!!
Let's be serious people!!
Author's Response: All's fair on the Quidditch pitch; tis a dangerous place. And yes, Jemzi is a bit clueless and there will be plenty of Albus/Blaise altercations to come :)
Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 04/11/10 20:14
Chapter: Hey, Weren't You My Best Friend Once?
Awwww I love these scenes. They're so sweeeet...
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter soon, hopefully :D
Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 04/10/10 21:09
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
Good chapter. I like the mood swings between Albus and Jemzi. They are perfectly played out in the chapter and I love the way you are slowly letting us in on what happened between the two. I also like how you had Albus punch Diego, that was by far my favorite part!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it; plenty more of it to come! :D
Reviewer: Lovegood-x
Date: 04/09/10 9:47
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi
This story is so far, amazing. No other way to descibe it really.. :P It really keeps you gripped, you think you've worked it out, then it all changes :) Keep adding the chapters, i'll look forward to them ;)
Lovegood-x
Author's Response: Next chapter's in the queue, so it'll hopefully be up soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 04/08/10 21:12
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
amazing, i just readit in one go. you write characters beautifly.The plot is quite a catch. I love all the small tensions that an still be seen from the past, but i love it even more that they can all still be friends.Scorpius and Rose ar adorable. I can't wait to find out what reallyhappened between Jamzi and albus. jemziis an amazing character btw and she has the coolest name. Nice job please up date soon.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for such a lovely review; I'm glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter's in the queue, so it should hopefully be up soon :)
Reviewer: HeadWig
Date: 04/06/10 16:45
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
Update soon, I can't take the suspense anymore!
I love all your stories-- keep it going with this one ; )
Author's Response: I will, thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: AccioDiadem
Date: 04/06/10 15:51
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
Albus is in love with Jemzi! Yessss! They're such a dynamic duo together, and I adore them. Please keep writing. I check back every week for a new entry, and it's totally worth it. Thanks!
Author's Response: As soon as I'm finished writing the next chapter, I'll have it posted. Means a lot that you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 04/06/10 8:52
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
This is an Easter chocolate review!!! Loved. it!!!
I'm very very mad a Jem for not figuring it out herself!!! But if the fall out was not (entirely) love- related.... ? Then what!?!?!?! I'm going to spontaneusly combust out of curiosity here!!! Please up date soon!!!! ^_^
Loved it!
PS: Diego is a jerk! And you have a way of always making them loatheful!!!
Author's Response: Diego is a jerk and sadly I write him and his alternatives from life. The fall-out won't be revealed for some time, I fear. Thanks for R&R ing :D
Reviewer: Lympha
Date: 04/05/10 13:58
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
I love all of your stories and I must say that this chapter was fantastic as well. I hope that you can update the next chapter sooner but I understand if you are too busy. Still thank you for all the amazing pieces of writing you have already managed to put up on this site and I'm really looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: There will be more, I swear, but thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D
Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 04/05/10 13:50
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
Oh! I 'm so happy there's another chapter!! I was worried there for a bit. This one is excellent, and it makes my day when one of your chapters comes out!! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for such a lovely comment, so sorry about the delay--a lot going on right now :)
Reviewer: slytherinbhabesx
Date: 04/05/10 8:23
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
This was amazing, please make a new chpter soon becuase you are an amazing writer !
Author's Response: Thank you; that's so sweet. Next chapter soon :)
Reviewer: RGSH
Date: 04/04/10 20:21
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
Finaly, i've been dying to read this. Love this chapter it was very good though at first i felt the potion was over done but the way Albus reacted completely made up for it cus i loved that part of the chapter. This fight is killing me i want to know, lol. update soon please!
Author's Response: Will do; thanks for reviewing and reading :)
Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 04/04/10 19:46
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
Thanks for updating! Oh now i am even more curious about the fight. Was it just that Albus told her his feelings and she didn't reciprocate? Or is it something more? Anyway, it was a short chapter, but now I'm itching for more. Great job, update soon!
Author's Response: Needed to find a way of getting his feelings across. Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: darkside-evan
Date: 04/04/10 16:51
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings
Really good very detailed i love it keep writing
Author's Response: Will do, thanks for reading :D
Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 04/01/10 22:51
Chapter: Daddy Zabini
:( awe
you still write love so well
kudos
Author's Response: Thank you :) Next chapter's in the queue
Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 04/01/10 10:31
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi
Okay, I just read your story with Harper and Blaise and it made me even more eager to read this one! Please please please update soon!
Author's Response: Next chapter's in the queue right now. Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: AccioDiadem
Date: 03/11/10 19:47
Chapter: Daddy Zabini
I enjoy reading this fic so much and I'm itching to know why Jemzi and Al had their falling out. It's a great fic, keep writing because I can't get enough.
Author's Response: Next chapter up soon, I promise. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :D
Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 03/02/10 20:50
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi
You are a very good writer! At first I thought it was going to be just a typical romance blah blah blah. Yet you managed to make me soo curious about the fight that now i check like every hour to see if you have updated! very good idea please update soon!
Author's Response: Next chapter's in the queue, so glad you enjoyed the story so far! :D
