Reviews For Jemzi
Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 05/08/10 13:44
Chapter: Christmas Part Two

Very good, as per usual. I like how you threw in the palmistry bit! Really looking forward to the next one...

Author's Response: Good, it should be up sooner rather than later. :D

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 05/08/10 12:01
Chapter: Christmas Part Two

OMG OMG! It was soo great! I loved the Albus- Jemzi interaction, and James is still amazing. Wow. Good job! I'm soo excited for the next chapter, and the return of Rose and Scorpius. Please please update soon - a month is soo long!

Author's Response: It's not been that long, has it?? Next chapter's written and ready to go :)

Reviewer: darkside-evan
Date: 05/07/10 23:29
Chapter: Christmas Part Two

This is awsome hurry the hell up with updates.i love it!

Author's Response: Next hapter soon! Thanks a lot :P

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 05/07/10 21:54
Chapter: Christmas Part Two

I reallyy want Albus and Jemzi to get together!! Like reallllyyy badly! And you're like my favorite Author on here and I hope you write more for MFF!

Author's Response: Next chapter should be to your liking, and it'll hopefulling be up soon. Thanks a bunch :)

Reviewer: awesomeness2000
Date: 05/03/10 21:35
Chapter: Christmas Part One

This is amazing!
and you're going at a perfect pace, but i still can't wait for interesting things to happen between al and jemzi!
patiently awaiting and update!! =]

Author's Response: Part two is now up, next chapter soon. Thanks for R&R ing :D

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 04/23/10 16:35
Chapter: Christmas Part One

I like the way you stretch the plot, but I can't help myself waiting anxiosly for it to be continued!!!

Author's Response: Part two soon, I hope :)

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 04/22/10 13:41
Chapter: A Hero In The Wings

I am actually getting attached to Al and Jemzi. They are so cute and so in love!!! I want them to realize that already!

Author's Response: Oooh, that might take a while :)

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 04/19/10 18:31
Chapter: Christmas Part One

Yay! I love the ending scene! Don't worry about taking them slow. I keeps me in suspense! I just really want to know what happened! :)

Author's Response: You'll find out soon :)

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 04/19/10 9:53
Chapter: Christmas Part One

i love blaise and harper! the paragraphs about them are lovely :D and al and jemzi are as exciting as ever. take your time- normally on a slow romance, things get dull, but yours only gets more interesting!

Author's Response: Thank you! Had to hsve a bit of Blaise and Harper :D

Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 04/19/10 1:25
Chapter: Christmas Part One

Next chapter, come soon please!

Author's Response: Hopefully :D

Reviewer: RGSH
Date: 04/19/10 0:32
Chapter: Christmas Part One

Aww you cruel cruel person i thought the bold meant i had hit the jackpot and finaly would learn what happened lol oh well makes the story interesting and loved the blaise and harper interlude i miss them too sometimes though not nearly as much as keedie and tom i need to reread that sometime. Thanks for the quick update cant wait for the next one =)

Author's Response: It should be up soon, and the argument will be revealed in time :P

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 04/18/10 23:23
Chapter: Christmas Part One

Grrrrrrrrrr Hermione... Grrrr!!!! Awful interruption!!! Not upset... just frustrated!!! Awesome chapter anyway!! I liked the fact that Gigi seems to like her older sis quite a bit but Jem clearly doesn't. And it's a bit funny the way everyone's oblivious to that.

Still thriving to know the reason of the fall out! And I'm curious as to see whether James is, perhaps, going to scheeme somethig to bring Jem & Al back together... Maybe...

Author's Response: Ver astute. Find out soon :)

Reviewer: AccioDiadem
Date: 04/18/10 21:58
Chapter: Christmas Part One

I'm not at all upset with all the time you're taking with Jemzi and Albus. It shows that you want the readers to really understand them and I really appreciate all the hard work you put into every chapter. They just keep getting better.

I'm loving meeting the new characters like James, and Isabella (who isn't new but still). Hopefully we'll meet Teddy and Victoire soon. And find out what Isabella is trying to tell Jemzi.

Going back to the previous chapters, I've been rereading OotP and I'd like to compliment you on how well you've portrayed an older Zacharias Smith. He's a right git in the novel, and I believe you have his esscence down pat!

Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Lots of new characters to come, and I'm glad you commented on Zacharias! Part two up soon, I hope :P

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 04/18/10 19:47
Chapter: Christmas Part One

I loved this chapter! It was sooo good. I love your interaction with Jemzi and James - I think he is my favorite character now. Ohhh that last part with Jemzi and Albus - gah! I want to know what happens! Anyway, hope part 2 comes very soon (I love that you have been updating with regularity - thank you soo much) and please update soon!

Author's Response: Part two soon, I hope. So glad you liked :D

Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 04/18/10 19:38
Chapter: Christmas Part One

Ok can you say cliffhanger! What is happening in the Zabini house? I can't wait to find out! I thought it was cool that you had James have no clue as to what was going on between Al and Jemzi. I love family awkward silences!

Author's Response: Lots and lots happening at the Zabini house. All will be revealed in time... :D

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 04/18/10 19:33
Chapter: Christmas Part One

i don't mind in the slightest :) i would have actually liked to see it a little bit MORE drawn out, because it seems like Al took a like to her right off the bat, and she seemed to be noticing that as well....
but it's awesome no matter what :)

Author's Response: Next chapter soon, thanks so much for R&R ing :)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 04/18/10 15:47
Chapter: Hey, Weren't You My Best Friend Once?

albus is so caring its sad :(

Author's Response: I know...but wait til you find out what he did :)

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 04/15/10 14:54
Chapter: Hey, Weren't You My Best Friend Once?

Ooooh it was great! I loved it. I always like when you have Albus/Jemzi convos. However, my favorite is when they are getting along, and you show how well they know each other....maybe soon? Update again please!

Author's Response: Some nice Al/Jemzi interaction to come, never fear. Thanks for commenting :D

Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 04/14/10 2:42
Chapter: Hey, Weren't You My Best Friend Once?

Okay I officially hate Collum and Pippa! That was a very good action sequence you put in there! I also liked how in the end, Albus shows some vulnerability to Jemzi! Finally! I loved this one! I hope Jemzi does something about what Albus said to her!

Author's Response: Thank you. Action sequences are not my forte so I'm glad it proved all right. Sadly when it comes to Albus, Jemzi is a tad clueless :D

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 04/13/10 18:40
Chapter: Hey, Weren't You My Best Friend Once?

Yet another juicy chapter... leaving me hungary for the next.
P.S. I really hope you're going to tell us what the hell happened between Albus and Jemzi soon cause it keeps me up at night!

Author's Response: The cause of the argument will be revealed in good time....I just hope people don't find it anti-climatic :)

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