Reviews For Jemzi
Reviewer: LuLu94
Date: 09/15/10 21:10
Chapter: Jemzi and Albus

Yay, for happy endings! I loved this story so much and really am sad to see it end. I hope you DO end up writing more because I'd love to see more from these characters (Jemzi and Albus...perfection) But overall, spectacular job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm so glad you liked the ending :)

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 09/15/10 19:36
Chapter: Jemzi and Albus

Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story great characterization and plot line! Great job, and gook luck at University!

Author's Response: Thank you very much and you're welcome :D

Reviewer: Heiress of Marauders
Date: 09/15/10 19:36
Chapter: Blaise and Harper= Jemzi

Wow, what a beautiful close! Thank you so much for writing this, it was a pleasure to read.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: ThatRomantic
Date: 09/15/10 17:34
Chapter: Jemzi and Albus


Yey for Lily and Luka. Do you know any other Lily Luna/OC stories that are worth reading?

Hope you continue!


Author's Response: No, sorry, don't know any-haven't read any myself. Thanks for reading and reviewing :D

Reviewer: Lympha
Date: 09/15/10 12:56
Chapter: Jemzi and Albus

Thank you for this wonderful story, really enjoyed it. I hope you won't give up writing because all of your stories are fantastic and I'd like to read more of your work.
Good luck with your studies. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, so glad you've enjoyed :D

Reviewer: Eowynatheart
Date: 09/15/10 11:34
Chapter: Jemzi and Albus

That was such a good ending!!! I cliche-ly breathed a sigh of relief afterwards. Okay, but now that this story is over you HAVE to finish the others!!!

Author's Response: Never say never. Glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 09/15/10 1:30
Chapter: Jemzi and Albus

I really enjoyed the way you ended this story! I was super happy that Albus didn't die!! lol I wish you luck in New York and with what ever you decide to do in your studies! I would love to see another story when you are able to have more time! But if not, it was a great adventure reading this story!

Author's Response: Thanks, it was great writing it. And I could never kill Albus :D

Reviewer: trussrr
Date: 09/14/10 22:50
Chapter: Jemzi and Albus

ps. please write more. their is no harry potter without belledeg.

Author's Response: Thanks, what a lovley thing to say :D

Reviewer: trussrr
Date: 09/14/10 22:48
Chapter: Jemzi and Albus

OMGosh thank you so much for not leting Albus die!!!!!! i L-O-V-E the ending. will there be a next generation to this story of the next generation??? i would love to see what you think will happen. if you do then i will DEFINTALY read! i have asked my friends to read your storys and they are now hooked. if you right another story can it have girl/girl.
i am requesting this cuz my friend wanted to read about that. thank you soo much for another great story! ps. who does james end up with?

Author's Response: Lol, I could never let Albus die! I've never tried girl/girl before, but if I ever go back, I suppose I could try :D

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 09/14/10 22:01
Chapter: Jemzi and Albus

Belledeg, it makes me quite sad that you may not write anymore. This story was so rich and full with different kinds of romances and pairings that were simply irresistible, I keep changing my mind as to who my favorites where!

Lily and Luke were so very much sweet. They honestly made me melt. I wish could just pick them up and place on my nightstand right next to my childhood teddy bear. That's how sweet they are!

Of course, Jem and Albus have this intensity, this raw passion. And have knack for jumping blindly into the lion's denn for each other that makes them Shakespearean... You've managed to describe them so vividly I can literally feel the strenght irradiating from the monitor when you write those steamy scenes.

I found it impeccable the way you defined the Grandpa issue. Harper is so smart. I thought it was noticable and quite good the fact that Red refrained to bring her lack of family into the picture till Blaise had decided to acept Bastien. It speaks volumes of her character!

Nico was such a sweet little thing to add... Had me chuckling! I do hope they explain it to him that Al did not do something to Jem.

The Keeler/Blaise encounter was a great treat!! Thanks for that! *snorts* that witch had the nerve to show up and talk back to Al!! Someone hex her. Soon!!! LOL!

And Tristan and Leon did come around!! I had my doubts about those two... But you gave them a happy ending. More like a happy beggining!! Mum and dad Holmwood will have a cow! I think they're also very very sweet! Minus the biting- which I totally share! You go Leon!! LOL!

Rose and Scorps... *le sigh* I loved that little detail of Rose giving a piece of her mind to each of them before settling calmly...

Basically, I'm going to miss the gang!!! And your writing alltogether!! I wish you the best for your studies in NYC. But my inner eye tells me you need no such wishes, you 're just meant for success!!!

Thanks for a great read!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for such an incredible review, and for the many that have come before. I'm so glad you enjoyed the ending and the story as a whole. Thanks again :D

Reviewer: grangergal101
Date: 09/12/10 6:22
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

OMG. Wow can't wait for the next chappie

Author's Response: Next and final chapter coming soon :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 09/11/10 12:57
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

This has been my favorite chapter of yours in this story. I knew it. I knew something like this was going to happen! Albus, Albus, Albus, why did you have to be such a hero? Cannot wait to read the next chapter to see whether he lives or not. CROSSING MY FINGERS! The ending seems like he isn't going to, but you are good at throwing curveballs and stuff like that! So, I can't wait!! :D

Author's Response: He's a Gryffindor, they always do crazy heroic things :D

Reviewer: Patroh
Date: 09/11/10 6:52
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

The story was probably one of the best fanfiction stories I have ever read . Can't wait for the happy ending .

Author's Response: Oh, thanks. Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: Moony_Lover 57
Date: 09/10/10 23:02
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

Why does it say that it's completed when it's clearly not? O_o

Author's Response: The last chapter's in the queue, so it's prematurely marked as complete. Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 09/09/10 20:45
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

What? Who? Why? Am I mental or the story shows "completed" yet theres a chapter missing?
I was checking most recent (yeah, to see if the last chapter was up, I admit it!) and I saw it and I did a happy dance but the last chap is not up!! I'm unhappy! Fanfiction.mugglenet owes me a happy dance!! :(

*pityful glance*

Author's Response: Yeah, the final chapter is in the queue but it's marked itself complete. Should be up soon :)

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 09/09/10 16:57
Chapter: Calm Before the Storm

I don't think I've ever reviewed before, but this is a nice story. The tension and build-up for Jemzi and Albus was just long enough, and when they finally caved, it was very sweet. I personally prefer Luka and Lily though. The foreign flair is nice :) Rose and Scorpius, I don't really understand. Even if they are both shy, and it has taken them a long time to get to where they are, shouldn't they be assuming their feelings a litle more?

I have some constructive crit though :). The moment when Luka asks if she's that rude to everyone didn't make sense to me. In the previous paragraph, he was regretting having started the argument and wishing he could leave, so when that snappy dalogue came up, I was sure it was going to be Lily. That paragraph threw me off a little.

But nice story, and keep writing, and developing your fun characters! :)

Author's Response: Not much longer to go, to be honest :)

Reviewer: HeadWig
Date: 09/09/10 10:23
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved


Author's Response: :D xx

Reviewer: AccioDiadem
Date: 09/09/10 7:50
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

Oh my dumbledore! I'm speechless. Everything that has happened in this chapter has made me that much more anxious for the next! Keep up the excellent work!

Author's Response: Will do, so glad you like it :D

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 09/09/10 0:04
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

you did not just end it in such a cliffhanger... oh you are evil. this was a very sweet chapter, i love that scorpius and rose are resolved, now we jstu ahve to make sure that albus lives and see what hapens with leon and tristan. hehehe i bet someone is going to have to pay for the curse that hit albus. i can't wait for more

Author's Response: Good, cos the next chapter should be up pretty soon :D

Author's Response: Good, cos the next chapter should be up pretty soon :D

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 09/08/10 20:19
Chapter: Albus Potter: The Boy Who Loved

no, no no no no. if you kill albus i swear to god. I cant even. i just cried at the thought (not even joking) . you better pull a kings cross and bring him the fuck back. ugh, what was even the reason? HOW ABOUT NO. but then again- you are known for killing the main character. I'll still read because that scene between scorpius and rose gave me the chills. you are an extremely gifted writer and i hope you do this more seriously or published in the future. love always!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Next chapter soon, I hope :D

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