FINALLY! I thought she would never ever see that she felt something for Albus! :) Cannot wait for the next chapter, I am on the edge of my metaphorical seat in anticipation, waiting to see what she will do next!! P.s. you've created such wonderful characters!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, she's finally caught on. Next chapter is written and should be up soon :P
Wow! What a fight!... Al was very cruel. But she really is rather blind - he is so in love, how can she not see it???!!!
So tensed, as usual, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Jealousy is an ugly emotion. Next chapter soon :D
omg!!! i love this!! you are soo talented!! when is the next chapter going to be submited!! i cant wait!!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you. Next chapter soon hopefully :D
OH, THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!! wow, I both did and didn't see THAT coming... Albus- so coldhearted but, he's jealous, so i can pardon it. I love the way you do the flash backs and the ghost, i hope we see more of him! or do I???
Author's Response: Yep. Plenty more of the ghost but, as the title of this chapter suggests, he is one to watch :D
OMG. no wonder she hasn't forgiven him!!!
Thats a terrible thing to say,
Can;t wait for next chapter =)
Author's Response: Next chapter soon, I promise :)
I like the way you keep your readers on the tenterhooks. we've finally found out what happened between Jemzi and Albus. I'm waiting for the next chapter eagerly.
Author's Response: Should be up soon, so glad you're enjoying it :D
OMG! Hurry up with the next chapter! I want to see what happens next! lol I like that there is a ghost that no one knows about, especially one from the Second War. I cant wait to see more of this story!
Author's Response: Next chapter's in the queue, so glad you're liking the story :D
Ooooo....fineally! I don't blame jemzi at all for what she did. I'd do the same. That was a really good scene!
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, Jemzi's anger is now totally justified :D
aaahhh!!!
finally we get to knw the reason
i loved it!
plz update soon!
Author's Response: Will do :)
I can't believe that she can't see it!
Romantic
xx
Author's Response: Thanks, I like to think so :)
OMG! Is she going to realize that he loves her? Is that the fight? You need to give more information!!!! That was amazing - you sure know how to write cliff-hangers. Please let the next chapter go up soon.
Author's Response: Next chapter's in the queue, should hopefully get approved soon :D
She is so oblivious!! And thank you for posting so soon and you are my favorite fan fiction author on this website and this is one of my favorite stories!! I really really hope to see her finally understand he has feelings for her and they finally go out together!!
Author's Response: So glad you like it; next chapter soon :D
Awwww. loved it!
Author's Response: :P
Can't wait for the next update... I'm afraid I've become dependent of this wonderful fic!!! I loved the Covent Garden escapade! My fav place in London, along with the Tower!! ^_^
I really liked Albu's "rant" on the mould!! Brilliant!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapters soon, I hope :P
awww :( poor Al!
soo sorry i haven't been reviewing lately, but i'll try to keep it up!
GREAT chapter!!! keep updating, please! it's soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing!
Author's Response: He won't be poor Al when you find out what he did. Still, glad you like :D
i loved it!!
Author's Response: Great! Stay tuned :)
I really really like this story! The family contrasting is really powerful! Can't wait!
Author's Response: Next chapter soon, so glad you're enjoying it :)
Very good, as per usual. I like how you threw in the palmistry bit! Really looking forward to the next one...
Author's Response: Good, it should be up sooner rather than later. :D
OMG OMG! It was soo great! I loved the Albus- Jemzi interaction, and James is still amazing. Wow. Good job! I'm soo excited for the next chapter, and the return of Rose and Scorpius. Please please update soon - a month is soo long!
Author's Response: It's not been that long, has it?? Next chapter's written and ready to go :)
This is awsome hurry the hell up with updates.i love it!
Author's Response: Next hapter soon! Thanks a lot :P
