Reviews For Jemzi
Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 05/29/10 13:51
Chapter: Jemzi Needs Finishing

Oooh Lalaaaa! haha :)! I hope that she doesn't go to finishing school, but I know there is probably going to be loads more drama dealing with the subject!

Author's Response: Of course, that's how I work :)

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 05/28/10 4:27
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?


Albus and Jemzi are FINALLY together-about time. I wonder what's going to happen next-is the overprotective father going to get in the way of such a happy relationship??? Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Blaise will have things to say, but he won't get in the way. Next chapter soon :)

Reviewer: Melbie
Date: 05/27/10 15:18
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

omg i loooooove this you are an aweosme writer! keep it up! how many chapters are you planning on writing?

Author's Response: Not positive yet, but I will keep updating :D

Reviewer: AccioDiadem
Date: 05/26/10 20:03
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?


Author's Response: I agree :)

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 05/26/10 16:53
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

omg, i'm so happy for them. I was sitting here reading all o fthe sappy them stuff and being like "yuck, there so annoyingly cute and perfect" and my friend goes "eww its you and will!! (my bf)" that was so unsettling. keep writing plez!!!! i'm getting seriosu creeps from the ghost...

Author's Response: As you should. Next chapter soon :D

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 05/26/10 16:15
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

*going happy dance for the happy couple*

I actually punched the air and yelled "YES" when they confessed their love for each other!!! ^_^

Let's see... Leon and Tristan were indeed a bit suspicious this chap. I hope no friends try to come between these two like in MTT.. That would not be nice. Espacially considering I'd expect Daddy Zabini to be not thrilled with Al right now. But, honestly, what does he expect of Jem? To become a nun? Deal with it Blaise!! I trust Harper will be able to put him into place!!

I think Rose's reaction was very humorous. Nice touch. I half expected Miss Hillary to have a out-of-place remark for Jem, one to be heard by her addorable BF... That skank needs to be put in her place by a chivalrous Gryffindor!!

I'd have liked to see a bit more Scorpious and see how he reacts to the good news. But you can't have everything!!

Great chapter!! ^_^

Author's Response: Leon and Trist are to be watched, but they won't be doing any MTT stunts. Glad you hate Hilary as much as me, and Daddy Zabini will have a lot to say in the future :D

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 05/26/10 13:42
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

YES! They finally did it! I adore your writing, really. This chapter was so cute, romantic, beautiful, amazing. And I really love Albus and, his character and the way he is in love with Jemzi! I'm becoming jealous myself...=)

Author's Response: Thanks for a lovely review; I wanted this chapter to be quite cute :D

Reviewer: madhumakhi
Date: 05/26/10 1:44
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

Ah! Finally. They've realised that they're meant for each other.

Author's Response: Yup :D

Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 05/26/10 1:26
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

OMG OMG OMG THEY'RE TOGETHER! *massive squeeeee!*

Author's Response: I know. About time, too :)

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 05/25/10 21:37
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?


Love love love love love times infinity this chapter.

Author's Response: Good, glad you like it :P

Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 05/25/10 19:56
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

FINALLY! That is all I have to say!

Author's Response: Quite right :)

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 05/25/10 18:46
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

Wow, I'm so glad you updated fast! The two of them are quite cute together, but the thing I really want to know now is what Harper will say about the secret in her family! Update soon!

Author's Response: That will be revealed in the next chapter :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 05/25/10 15:35
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

FINALLY!!! :) I squealed, loud, properly freaking out my dog and making her fall off the bed. I was giggling like mad, which usually happens when I read your romance stories, and grinning till it was over!! Cannot wait till next chaper!

Author's Response: Next chapter soon, I hope. So glad you liked :P

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 05/25/10 15:09
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! I am soo glad it finally happened! It was amazing, I love them! You are such an amazing writer - pleaaaaaassssseeee give me at least one more chapter of them being perfect without interference! What is up with Leon and Tristan? Gah! It was fantastic, and I love that you have updated quickly - please continue!

Author's Response: I should update pretty soon; so glad you liked this chapter :)

Reviewer: Blue Raspberry
Date: 05/25/10 12:42
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

First to review!!! First to review! At least, I think. That was absolutely perfect. I think a lot of authors wouldn't have included their friends' absolute shock, but your doing so made their reactions so much more believable. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed any of your stories- I'm not one who usually reviews- but I decided that I should start reviewing your stories. They are absolutely amazing; you are incredibly talented at creating multifaceted, believable characters. I have read all of them and adore every one. Thank you so much for posting your stories here; I get so excited when I get the email that you have updated. Please keep up your amazing work; you are my favorite author here!

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for reviewing, always nice to hear from someone new. I have no intention of abandoning this story, so next chapter should be up pretty soon. Stay tuned :D

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 05/24/10 18:14
Chapter: Jemzi's Epiphany

Hah! It took her that long to see!! I love Peter the ghost, and the scene of Rose and Scorpius! The next chpter just can't come soon enough!

Author's Response: Good, it should be up pretty soon :)

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 05/24/10 8:18
Chapter: Jemzi's Epiphany

Finally she realized it!!!
Great chapter, can't wait for the nexr one... =)

Author's Response: I know, finally. Next chapter really soon :D

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 05/23/10 22:11
Chapter: Christmas Part Two

poor albus :(
i dislike the term ginger however, as i know that for some red haired folk, it really ruins their self esteem because it has become something bad to have that colour hair... it's like, racist nowadays!
just saying

Author's Response: I have red hair, as do a lot of people from my country (Scotland) and we just tend to laugh it off or man up and deal :)

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 05/22/10 22:52
Chapter: Jemzi's Epiphany

I seriously want to read the next chapter: I can't wait!
If I haven't already reviewed this story, I'd just like to say that I absolutely love it. I knew even before I read this story that it was going involve a romance between Jemzi and Albus, and it became more obvious as I read the various chapters. Thanks for getting chapter ten up super quick! Now, already knowing that romance between Albus and Jemzi would happen in this story (eventually) I was still amazed to read the whole story of what had happened between them. You know, when I found out what the argument had been, I couldn't help but think of Albus just like Severus when he (Albus) accidently lost Jemzi's friendship. And I still can't wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Next chapter soon; so glad you like Al and Jem as a pair. :D

Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 05/22/10 20:13
Chapter: Jemzi's Epiphany

Ah you're evil to stop there :)

So this is the first time I've reviewed one of your stories, but I just wanted to let you know that I spent about the last week reading all of your stories. They're all brilliant, unique, and incredibly well-written, and this one is looking to be just as good. I really love Jemzi's character and Albus as well, although he needs to learn a bit of tact sometimes haha.

Update soon please! On all your non-finished stories :)

Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing--keep it up! :D

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