Ahhhhh
Author's Response: I agree :)
omg, i'm so happy for them. I was sitting here reading all o fthe sappy them stuff and being like "yuck, there so annoyingly cute and perfect" and my friend goes "eww its you and will!! (my bf)" that was so unsettling. keep writing plez!!!! i'm getting seriosu creeps from the ghost...
Author's Response: As you should. Next chapter soon :D
*going happy dance for the happy couple*
I actually punched the air and yelled "YES" when they confessed their love for each other!!! ^_^
Let's see... Leon and Tristan were indeed a bit suspicious this chap. I hope no friends try to come between these two like in MTT.. That would not be nice. Espacially considering I'd expect Daddy Zabini to be not thrilled with Al right now. But, honestly, what does he expect of Jem? To become a nun? Deal with it Blaise!! I trust Harper will be able to put him into place!!
I think Rose's reaction was very humorous. Nice touch. I half expected Miss Hillary to have a out-of-place remark for Jem, one to be heard by her addorable BF... That skank needs to be put in her place by a chivalrous Gryffindor!!
I'd have liked to see a bit more Scorpious and see how he reacts to the good news. But you can't have everything!!
Great chapter!! ^_^
Author's Response: Leon and Trist are to be watched, but they won't be doing any MTT stunts. Glad you hate Hilary as much as me, and Daddy Zabini will have a lot to say in the future :D
YES! They finally did it! I adore your writing, really. This chapter was so cute, romantic, beautiful, amazing. And I really love Albus and, his character and the way he is in love with Jemzi! I'm becoming jealous myself...=)
Author's Response: Thanks for a lovely review; I wanted this chapter to be quite cute :D
Ah! Finally. They've realised that they're meant for each other.
Author's Response: Yup :D
OMG OMG OMG THEY'RE TOGETHER! *massive squeeeee!*
Author's Response: I know. About time, too :)
YAYYYYYYYY. Nuff said XD
Love love love love love times infinity this chapter.
Author's Response: Good, glad you like it :P
FINALLY! That is all I have to say!
Author's Response: Quite right :)
Wow, I'm so glad you updated fast! The two of them are quite cute together, but the thing I really want to know now is what Harper will say about the secret in her family! Update soon!
Author's Response: That will be revealed in the next chapter :D
FINALLY!!! :) I squealed, loud, properly freaking out my dog and making her fall off the bed. I was giggling like mad, which usually happens when I read your romance stories, and grinning till it was over!! Cannot wait till next chaper!
Author's Response: Next chapter soon, I hope. So glad you liked :P
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! I am soo glad it finally happened! It was amazing, I love them! You are such an amazing writer - pleaaaaaassssseeee give me at least one more chapter of them being perfect without interference! What is up with Leon and Tristan? Gah! It was fantastic, and I love that you have updated quickly - please continue!
Author's Response: I should update pretty soon; so glad you liked this chapter :)
First to review!!! First to review! At least, I think. That was absolutely perfect. I think a lot of authors wouldn't have included their friends' absolute shock, but your doing so made their reactions so much more believable. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed any of your stories- I'm not one who usually reviews- but I decided that I should start reviewing your stories. They are absolutely amazing; you are incredibly talented at creating multifaceted, believable characters. I have read all of them and adore every one. Thank you so much for posting your stories here; I get so excited when I get the email that you have updated. Please keep up your amazing work; you are my favorite author here!
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for reviewing, always nice to hear from someone new. I have no intention of abandoning this story, so next chapter should be up pretty soon. Stay tuned :D
Hah! It took her that long to see!! I love Peter the ghost, and the scene of Rose and Scorpius! The next chpter just can't come soon enough!
Author's Response: Good, it should be up pretty soon :)
Finally she realized it!!!
Great chapter, can't wait for the nexr one... =)
Author's Response: I know, finally. Next chapter really soon :D
poor albus :(
i dislike the term ginger however, as i know that for some red haired folk, it really ruins their self esteem because it has become something bad to have that colour hair... it's like, racist nowadays!
just saying
Author's Response: I have red hair, as do a lot of people from my country (Scotland) and we just tend to laugh it off or man up and deal :)
I seriously want to read the next chapter: I can't wait!
If I haven't already reviewed this story, I'd just like to say that I absolutely love it. I knew even before I read this story that it was going involve a romance between Jemzi and Albus, and it became more obvious as I read the various chapters. Thanks for getting chapter ten up super quick! Now, already knowing that romance between Albus and Jemzi would happen in this story (eventually) I was still amazed to read the whole story of what had happened between them. You know, when I found out what the argument had been, I couldn't help but think of Albus just like Severus when he (Albus) accidently lost Jemzi's friendship. And I still can't wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: Next chapter soon; so glad you like Al and Jem as a pair. :D
Ah you're evil to stop there :)
So this is the first time I've reviewed one of your stories, but I just wanted to let you know that I spent about the last week reading all of your stories. They're all brilliant, unique, and incredibly well-written, and this one is looking to be just as good. I really love Jemzi's character and Albus as well, although he needs to learn a bit of tact sometimes haha.
Update soon please! On all your non-finished stories :)
Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing--keep it up! :D
Yeeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaaaw!!!!!
Got ONE word: Allelluyah!!!!!!!!!!
About time, too. Thought, it's more suitable that she realized HE loves HER!!!!!!
Dung!! Now she'll be all miserably thinking he hates her...? I think I'll have to come and knock some sense into that thick skull of hers!!! LOL!!!!
What a great chapter!! Peter the ghost... THANK YOU!! I owe you, the whole castle owes you dude!!! Cheers to you hun!!!
And to you, Belledeg, you EVIL mastermind, double cheers!! Can't wait for the next update!!! ^_^
Author's Response: Next chapter should be up soon and should be pleasing to many readers :)
OMG! Indeed!! Albus!! Temper check s'il vous plait, pal!!!!
You know, if you have feeling for someone, feelings that are not corresponded, (but might be) INSULTING the object of your emotions is generally NOT the way to go about it. Adding insults to their family might not prove useful, either. People usually go with chocolates or flowers.
So, the reason for the big fall out is unveiled. Albus was green with jealousy over Jem's BF and he lost it. Quite badly, btw Whore AND Death Eater father? Really? Nothing about mum to add Al? Jeesh!! What a smuck our darling hero turned out to be in the female charming field!! Poor lad!
I wonder if maybe Casper will be of help to make Jem open her eyes, though. Because she certainly drew Albus to his (uncalled for and totally our of boundaries) exabrupt.
Gosh!!! They're quite the vexing pair!!! She for being so blind; him for being too proud to do something rahter than let his vile levels rise!!!
Yes, Potter, is she's just plain slow, quit the hinting and get your sorry ass moving!! You've been better and less-friendship-crashing than insults!!!
I'm VERY angry at your characters right now, Belledeg. I'm sure you can tell!! They need to go to a corner and think about what they've done!! LOL!!!
But I still love them AND your fic!!!
^_^
Author's Response: Yup. Argument revealed and justified from Jemzi's point. But people say horrible things out of anger and jealousy :(
ooohh!!
wat will she do know?
will she go to albus??
plz update soon!!
when r u goin to update 'my cruel companion'???
dyin to read the nxt chp!
Author's Response: MCC should be updated pretty soon, same with this one. Glad you liked the chapter :D
