Reviews For Jemzi
Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 06/06/10 16:38
Chapter: The Wedding Part One

I cant wait to read the next chapter! I want to hear this debate about Voldemort's "love life"!!! lol Ok I hope that Luka asks Lily to dance during the wedding! I think it would be very cute!!!

Author's Response: More clever predictions, as before. Hopefully the next chapter will live up to expectations :D

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 06/06/10 13:30
Chapter: The Wedding Part One

Amazing chapter. I don't think I've been quite as obsessed with any other story in recent months, as I am with this one. I check it every day to see if you've updated. I really like Luka, and would love to read more about him, so please update soon!

Author's Response: Plenty more of Luka and his brothers in the next chapter. I think the wedding will be in three parts. So glad you liked this chapter :)

Reviewer: AccioDiadem
Date: 06/04/10 6:29
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

O.o
I'm speechless.

Author's Response: Good. Next chapter soon :)

Reviewer: awesomeness2000
Date: 06/03/10 21:23
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

OMG. If Blaise found out! That would be ugly. lol
great chapter! Excited for the next one and the wedding!

Author's Response: The wedding should be good and yes, if Blaise found out there would be blood

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 06/02/10 20:53
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

Hehehehe!!! LOL! Good one... VERY good one!!
So delicate. And so skillfully writen!!

BTW, poor Jem.. Albus massaging her... She was completely at her mercy!! It was rather risky business, too!! The nerve of them! Yickes! A house FULL of people there!

I think it was very interesting that we have ourselves two very protective fathers! Blaise may be more, uhm, loud and open about it. While Harry, keen to his own character, is more reflective about it. Observant... I'm very intrigued about where this will lead us!!

^_^ Can't wait to see how this ends...

Author's Response: Protective fathers are addictive to write, so there should be plenty more :D

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 06/01/10 21:20
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

Loved it! Like you doubted that. ^_^

I really am excited to read about Lily's love life. And I liked that you finally introduced Harry.

Author's Response: I couldn't leave Harry out of this story. Plenty more of him and Lily in the wedding :)

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 06/01/10 14:59
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

Aw! I feel bad for Lily and I still love Blaise. Thanks to you, every time I read a fan fic where Blaise is being a total arse i cannot help but think of how sweet he can be!

Author's Response: Love Blaise to bits and there will be plenty more from him and Lily :D

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 06/01/10 14:55
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

What is going to happen with Lily? She is a great character, and what is Blaise keeping from her? What was the fight really about? This chapter brought up so many questions! Loved the chapter though - update soon!

Author's Response: Questions will all be answered; I don't like loose ends, and there will be plenty of Lily and her problems in the next chapter :D

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 06/01/10 13:37
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

Blaize is adorabale, really. Poor Lily... though I like the over-protective Harry ;)
Nice chapter!

Author's Response: I know; I love Blaise!! Harry, too, they're good fathers :D

Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 06/01/10 12:44
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

AWE!! Poor Lily!!! I hope she finds someone at the wedding!! That would be perfect!! Maybe one of Krum's kids! It would make James go crazy!!

Author's Response: You have the sight, my friend. Next chapter soon, I hope, so you'll see how close that prediction is :D

Reviewer: ThatRomantic
Date: 06/01/10 5:55
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

Poor Blaise and Lily.

I hope Jem doesn't have to leave for finishing school though and that Blaise tells her things in time.

Romantic
xx

Author's Response: Time will tell :) Thanks for R&R ing

Reviewer: hushpuppy22
Date: 06/01/10 0:59
Chapter: Lily Conjures Cupid

Did they forget contraception 'cause it sure seemed like it... Hmm, if she gets pregnant they will not have to worry about her getting sent to a finishing school!

Author's Response: I'm not going to lie, I hate the intimate scenes. It's like writing about your friends or your siblings :D

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 05/31/10 14:34
Chapter: Jemzi Needs Finishing

SO cute!
As usual, when one problem is solved there is always another one to handel...But I still think that people who love each other so much won't let anyone separate them. At least, I hope so... :)
Great chap! Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: Will do, next chapter's in the queue so should hopefully be up soon :D

Reviewer: Melbie
Date: 05/30/10 23:09
Chapter: Jemzi Needs Finishing

keep writing this is soooo good! you have a great talent! ur such a good writer! im so excited for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. So glad you like it, next chapter should hopefully be up soon :)

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 05/29/10 18:45
Chapter: Jemzi Needs Finishing

Oh it was great! I can't tell you how much I love Jemzi and Albus together - you need to keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! AHHHHHH! You are a great writer and I am so happy that you are updating so quickly!

Author's Response: Next chapter will hopefully be up soon :)

Reviewer: Slytheringirl6
Date: 05/29/10 15:45
Chapter: Jemzi Needs Finishing

So the fight with Harper was good! I like how Albus puts his foot down and tells Harper that Jemzi will not go! It is very cute! I cant wait to read about the wedding! Ok so I think you are going to have a steamy scene soon!!?? That would be fun! lol

Author's Response: Yep, Al's manning up. The wedding will hopefully be pretty good :)

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 05/29/10 14:21
Chapter: Jemzi Needs Finishing

Uhm... I'm VERY thankful this is Albus Potter we're talking about!!!

Still, that's NOT the type of question you ask in that situation Jem!!!! LOL!!!


Liked it very much. I guess Peter's jealous his new friend got herself a BF so soon!! And thanks to his advice!! Poor Casper!!

Nice steamy scenes you write for the love birds. And their dialogs are so beautifully writen. I like the way they "quote" each other. And how you convey so powerful, deep meanings in short simple words.

Good chapter and thanks for the lightning quick update!! ^_^

Author's Response: Yes, Peter is a tad jealous. I am indeed getting better at updating, so hopefully the next chapter will be up soon(ish) :D

Reviewer: DownWithTheCarrows113
Date: 05/29/10 13:51
Chapter: Jemzi Needs Finishing

Oooh Lalaaaa! haha :)! I hope that she doesn't go to finishing school, but I know there is probably going to be loads more drama dealing with the subject!

Author's Response: Of course, that's how I work :)

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 05/28/10 4:27
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

YES!!!! AN UPDATE! BINGO!!!!

Albus and Jemzi are FINALLY together-about time. I wonder what's going to happen next-is the overprotective father going to get in the way of such a happy relationship??? Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Blaise will have things to say, but he won't get in the way. Next chapter soon :)

Reviewer: Melbie
Date: 05/27/10 15:18
Chapter: Can Such Things Be?

omg i loooooove this you are an aweosme writer! keep it up! how many chapters are you planning on writing?

Author's Response: Not positive yet, but I will keep updating :D

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