Bum bum bummmmmm and the plot thickins :-)
This is my favorite Chapter so far!!!!
Well Lily and Luka are just too cute :') But I have to say that Albus and Jemzi are my favourite :D But...LEON AND TRISTAN GOT TOGETHER :) WOOOOOO!And I do really feel sorry for poor Peter...you should write his story one day :)
Hi, I'm almost at the end of this beautiful story and now suddenly the chapter links are not working anymore and taking me again and again to the consent page. When i click continue it's coming back to the chapter links. Could you please check once what's the issue. I'm addicted to the story and now not able to finish the last 3 chapters.
Hmm...I'm a little disappointed that we didn't get to see more of Ginny and Harry, just because I feel that they are a really underwritten couple on this fansite! I also feel that Harry would have wanted to be in the Hospital Wing with his son, or would have joined the confrontation in the previous chapter. Still, amazingly well-wrtten fic. I'm not big on next generation, but this one blew me away! The Tom Riddle was a bit unbelievable, but a very sweet addition, and I loved all the side stories that you developed. I wish you could have spent more time on them, even though it made sense, plotwise, for Al and Jemzi to take up most of the first half. And now, after my incredibly long review and feedback which means nothing since you've already finished the story...I really loved this fic.
*sigh* I'm almost depressed that this story is over. It is so beautifully written, the characters are well developed, and the plot line had me screaming at my computer to load the next chapter faster! I love every detail of the story; I'm even in love with Jemzi's name! I find my self reading this story over and over, maybe once every two weeks. I'm not even kidding; the bookmark to chapter one is right next to my facebook bookmark. I'm still fairly new to the realm of fanfiction, but I doubt that I will ever find a story that I love more than this. Thank you for creating such a supermegafoxyawesomehot story!! :D
Love from Cali, nikilovegood
Author's Response: Thank you for a lovely review; it means a lot to me, especially with this story as it's very much my most original piece. Thanks again :D
OMG!!! I LOVE this story!!! Jemzi is so funny, and i love Scorpius, and pretty much every character. I think your a great writer!! I could toatly see there kids being like that, lol, and I love how you brought teddy into it,soo sweet!! and i hope you keep writing!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing; glad you enjoyed my take on the characters as well as my OCs. Thanks again :D
OMG!!! Best fic ever!!! I love how everybody coupled up at the end, and I think my favorite pair was Leon and Tristan. Love love love love love it!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much; so happy you liked the story and took the time to read it :)
AMAZING!!!!! loved it :):)
just a suggestion whether you choose to or not is completely your choice but perhaps...the story of lily and luka?? i adored the way you wrote their part in this story :)
anyhow thank you for sharing this incredible next-generation story i loved your original characters as well :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read this; I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I did consider Lily and Luka for a bit. We'll have to see :D
You have Griffenfore playing Ravenclaw twice. They played Ravenclaw in the match where you had Jemzi injured
This story is truly amazing. I have suggested it to all my harry potter obsessed friends. I wish this story could go on and on. I never wanted this story to end. You are an amazing writer. Truly. Please write some books. Thank you so much for writing this story. Needless to say, this is my number 1 all time favorite EVER fanfiction. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Thank you, that's so nice of you :D xx
I wish it could go on and on :)
So rare that I find a story that I actually love, but I've stuck with Blaise and Harper from the beginning.
So good.
Thank you :)
Author's Response: You're welcome. Thanks for sticking with and reviewing :D
:) That was great! Perfect! Amazing! Although, I'm going to miss desperately waiting for updates. Haha . Well anyways, good luck in NY. And thanks again for such a great story.
Author's Response: You're welcome and thank you very much for reading and reviewing :D
ahh that was such a sweet ending, everyone got together! happily ever after :) especially liked luka and lily! good luck at uni :)
Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you liked it :D
I can't believe this is really it! That was one of the best stories I have ever read, and I'm really going to miss it - I already do. There is no need of me telling how great this specific last chapter was, because that's pretty obvious, and yet I can't help myself - IT WAS AMAZING!!! (as was the whole story).
It's a pitty you won't be writing anymore, because you are very talanted. Either way, I wish you good luck in New York, and I hope to see someday yet another great story/book/best-seller written by you! Thank you so much for writing and sharing your stories with us!
Author's Response: You're welcome and I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this one :D
Absolute fantastic ending!! I'm so glad to not have to bawl my eyes out and I'm so glad nobody died!! And I agree with it response in the last chapter, Gryffindors are always doing things that are heroic, which is why both Jem and Al deserve to be Gryffs!
I'm surprised your not going to study writing. You're wonderful at it and I would totally buy a book if you were the author!!
Is this your last fix before going to Uni? Just wondering!
I hope you keep writing!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, I couldn't let anyone die :D
Yay, for happy endings! I loved this story so much and really am sad to see it end. I hope you DO end up writing more because I'd love to see more from these characters (Jemzi and Albus...perfection) But overall, spectacular job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm so glad you liked the ending :)
Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story great characterization and plot line! Great job, and gook luck at University!
Author's Response: Thank you very much and you're welcome :D
Wow, what a beautiful close! Thank you so much for writing this, it was a pleasure to read.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
