I love the set up and where this story seems to be going. Great job and keep up the good work! Can't wait for an update!

cool

r u going to write more??????????????????/

I like the way you set up the situation, but I feel like Hermione was a tad bit out-of-character. She wouldn't say "a headache relieving potion or something." She would probably know the name of the potion for relieving headaches, and even if she didn't know it, she doesn't strike me as the type of person who would say "or something," which is a bit sophomoric. Also, I think it's in her nature to be kind to those who are injured, even if it is Malfoy. "You’ve had it coming for a long time. Won’t you tell me who it was so I can properly thank them?" is something I'd more expect Draco to say. (Who blacked your nose, Granger? I want to send them flowers!) Overall I think this is very good and well-written in terms of style and flow.
-Virgil-