Reviews For Gift of Spirit
Reviewer: FredGeorgewheezes
Date: 08/07/11 2:00
Chapter: Chapter 2

please write the other chapters down i wanna read them!!!!!

Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 08/01/11 20:00
Chapter: Chapter 2

I love the set up and where this story seems to be going. Great job and keep up the good work! Can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: remmus
Date: 01/30/11 8:53
Chapter: Chapter 2

More on the way, I hope?

Reviewer: vampqueen
Date: 07/03/10 21:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

cool

Reviewer: loekie
Date: 06/01/10 10:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

hey there.... I just wanted to let you know I absolutely loooooooved what you have so far,..... Are you going to update???
*hopeful smile*
anyways...
great job!

Reviewer: Star lynn grace
Date: 05/19/10 22:17
Chapter: Chapter 2

r u going to write more??????????????????/

Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 04/26/10 10:58
Chapter: Chapter 2

Like it so far. When will we find out what happened to Hermione? At first, it seemed that she didn't know what happened to her but now not so sure.

Reviewer: Virgil
Date: 02/12/10 19:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like the way you set up the situation, but I feel like Hermione was a tad bit out-of-character. She wouldn't say "a headache relieving potion or something." She would probably know the name of the potion for relieving headaches, and even if she didn't know it, she doesn't strike me as the type of person who would say "or something," which is a bit sophomoric. Also, I think it's in her nature to be kind to those who are injured, even if it is Malfoy. "You’ve had it coming for a long time. Won’t you tell me who it was so I can properly thank them?" is something I'd more expect Draco to say. (Who blacked your nose, Granger? I want to send them flowers!) Overall I think this is very good and well-written in terms of style and flow.
-Virgil-

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