Well, that was cheerful......

This is soo sad. I want to cry. But it was a good story.

This made me tear up, especially the ending. It was just too much imagining him there, staring off into space and just waiting.

Like your story. It is very deep and to the point.

This story is extremely sad. It`s a good one-shot, although I feel as though I didn`t really get into the characters` minds at all. The situations were what drove the story, and although it turned out really well, I feel as though it could have been more emotional with more character development. But for a one-shot that`s hard, and you did well.

Author's Response: Thanks for your input! I've been told before that this one-shot does seem a bit underdeveloped, and I'm working on doing a rewrite. Hopefully it turns out better. :)