Reviews For Waiting
Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 03/04/11 18:07
Chapter: Waiting

Well, that was cheerful......

Reviewer: mindenaubrey
Date: 02/15/11 18:40
Chapter: Waiting

Oh! That was so sad. I loved the borrowed idea about the boats though, I've never thought of that before. :)
Poor Malfoy. :(

Reviewer: MemberofOrderofPheonix
Date: 12/14/10 16:50
Chapter: Waiting

This is soo sad. I want to cry. But it was a good story.

Reviewer: fairy_lights27
Date: 03/01/10 23:38
Chapter: Waiting

So sad.........

Reviewer: Juliet Heathrow
Date: 02/28/10 20:00
Chapter: Waiting

This made me tear up, especially the ending. It was just too much imagining him there, staring off into space and just waiting.

Reviewer: clarabelle
Date: 02/27/10 12:52
Chapter: Waiting

:( that's so beautiful and so sad at the same time.

Reviewer: Alice-Olivia
Date: 02/22/10 20:22
Chapter: Waiting

Like your story. It is very deep and to the point.

Reviewer: ThatRomantic
Date: 02/10/10 16:27
Chapter: Waiting

That was so beautiful at the end. I've not seen 'Up' but I'm guessing the end is where you got the inspiration from. Lovely - simply lovely.

Romantic
xx

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 02/03/10 16:11
Chapter: Waiting

This story is extremely sad. It`s a good one-shot, although I feel as though I didn`t really get into the characters` minds at all. The situations were what drove the story, and although it turned out really well, I feel as though it could have been more emotional with more character development. But for a one-shot that`s hard, and you did well.

Author's Response: Thanks for your input! I've been told before that this one-shot does seem a bit underdeveloped, and I'm working on doing a rewrite. Hopefully it turns out better. :)

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