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Reviews For Waiting

Name: buckbeakfan202 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/11 18:07 · For: Waiting
Well, that was cheerful......

Name: mindenaubrey (Signed) · Date: 02/15/11 18:40 · For: Waiting
Oh! That was so sad. I loved the borrowed idea about the boats though, I've never thought of that before. :)
Poor Malfoy. :(

Name: MemberofOrderofPheonix (Signed) · Date: 12/14/10 16:50 · For: Waiting
This is soo sad. I want to cry. But it was a good story.

Name: fairy_lights27 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/10 23:38 · For: Waiting
So sad.........

Name: Juliet Heathrow (Signed) · Date: 02/28/10 20:00 · For: Waiting
This made me tear up, especially the ending. It was just too much imagining him there, staring off into space and just waiting.

Name: clarabelle (Signed) · Date: 02/27/10 12:52 · For: Waiting
:( that's so beautiful and so sad at the same time.

Name: Alice-Olivia (Signed) · Date: 02/22/10 20:22 · For: Waiting
Like your story. It is very deep and to the point.

Name: ThatRomantic (Signed) · Date: 02/10/10 16:27 · For: Waiting
That was so beautiful at the end. I've not seen 'Up' but I'm guessing the end is where you got the inspiration from. Lovely - simply lovely.


Name: Sdogg (Signed) · Date: 02/03/10 16:11 · For: Waiting
This story is extremely sad. It`s a good one-shot, although I feel as though I didn`t really get into the characters` minds at all. The situations were what drove the story, and although it turned out really well, I feel as though it could have been more emotional with more character development. But for a one-shot that`s hard, and you did well.

Author's Response: Thanks for your input! I've been told before that this one-shot does seem a bit underdeveloped, and I'm working on doing a rewrite. Hopefully it turns out better. :)

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