Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 02/28/10 19:04
Chapter: The Garderobe

Love the last line!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 02/28/10 18:52
Chapter: The Potions Storeroom

I recollect reading that Warren had a long conversation with the sorting hat as a first year. I wonder if this has something to do with his idea of The GSA club and why maybe Augustus is so annoyed with him. It seems as though most people seem to like Augustus without Warren's intervention, so maybe Warren's angry that he didn't think of the idea instead of Warren.

I noticed a weariness in Professor Sprout during her meeting with Warren and others. Perhaps she secretly wishes they would just study in the library?

I like the fact that you replaced Filch and some of the older teachers.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 02/23/10 18:30
Chapter: Skeletons in the Closet

Charming story. You have managed to show Warren's nerdiness without once using the word. (At least I think that was your goal???). You have steered clear of the stereotypes and yet have shown that Augustus is not to be trusted.

I have no idea where this story is going, but it is a pleasant read.

Author's Response: thank you:) You've answered some questions for me I was having about my characterizations:)

Reviewer: fallennxstarr
Date: 01/26/10 23:52
Chapter: The Mission

Hi there I guess I get to be your first review! Your story is well written and looks like its going to have an interesting plot. Warren seems a bit Percy-ish but in a less pomous and more friendly way I hope to see more expansion in his character in the coming chapters and I am looking forward to see where this plot leads. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for giving me my first review:)

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