Reviews For Friday Thirteenth
Reviewer: Rose Nym
Date: 08/30/10 18:46
Chapter: The Black Day

Cute and funny, and the OC's were believable. It possibly could have been even better if you had included the Slytherins' reactions to being magic-less, or Filch's! (to everyone else losing theirs)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and comment! The story was written quite hastily, I admit, so I didn't really give it the time it would have needed to become perfect. Maybe I'll work on it again in the future, taking into consideration what you suggested.

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