Reviewer: SoGranola
Date: 05/25/13 6:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lots of crying over here, and a couple of loud laughs too. I really love your work.

Reviewer: waywardkitty42
Date: 08/10/12 13:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

so sweet and real.

Reviewer: nayin
Date: 10/13/11 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Beautifully written,you're one of my favorite author's here.well done

Reviewer: Liet Dumbledore
Date: 08/20/11 19:06
Chapter: Chapter 1


Reviewer: lifewhatever
Date: 10/12/10 15:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story was so cute! I wasn't sure what direction you were trying to go in at first but it was a good story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you ended up liking it :)

Reviewer: Memish
Date: 08/03/10 0:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

You literally write Harry and Ginny perfectly. I love love love this :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: BlackRabbit13
Date: 07/11/10 12:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

i wnated to let you know i dont typically read one-shot fics but yours caught my eye. lately all the stories i read have been bad and made me stop reading. i must say however that yours was fantastic. the struggles you depicted and the frustrations and everything were to a dime. thank you so much for this read!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you read this despite that it's not your usual fare! There's so much good fanfiction out there, but there's also a lot of . . . not so good fanfiction, and I know how frustrating it can be trying to navigate through -- I'm happy you liked this and I hope you find more good fics soon! :)

Reviewer: GinnyPotterFan26
Date: 02/22/10 12:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was a really nice story. It was interesting to see Harry and Ginny in the future, beyond even what the Epilogue showed. I'll say again that I think your work is very well-written, with emotion behind every word. I can sense a sense of purpose as I read, as though you put considerable thought and effort into the choice of every word. I also thought the song fit with the story really well (and I was excited to read it, because I like the song itself).

Author's Response: Thanks very much! This is one of my most recent pieces, and I really did pour a lot of myself into it, so I'm glad you liked it and appreciated the effort. I'm a huge fan of Matt Nathanson, so I'm also glad you agreed with the song choice :)

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 02/15/10 13:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Sweet Lily
Date: 02/05/10 15:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was such a sweet story. I got teary eyed when Ginny was giving motherly advice to Lily.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 01/22/10 12:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

awww..this was an interesting story. when i saw the summary, i wasn't sure if i would like it, but i really did. nice job :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to give it a chance and like it! Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 01/21/10 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was soo cute, and I like this a lot you should definaly go with those feels more often!!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'll try :)

Reviewer: DaisyMaeEvans
Date: 01/19/10 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

This touched me in such a deep place. I can't stop crying! (and yes, that's a good thing!) Beautiful work.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: juli_dances
Date: 01/19/10 19:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved this! It was beautiful, per usual. I love your take on these characters, and your writing is so expressive. Thanks for sharing your vision of Harry and Ginny's love. :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it and enjoyed the way I portrayed the characters!

Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 01/18/10 23:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

What I love about your stories are that they capture scenarios that really haven't been thought out before but still feel so real. You're amazing and basically the only reason I check MNFF anymore, so I hope you keep up the amazing work. I love Harry/Ginny even more now :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That literally made me smile to read :) And, of course, I'm so glad to have made you love Harry/Ginny more! I'm glad you liked this story -- and my others.

Reviewer: WeasleyMom
Date: 01/18/10 8:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really liked this, and I'm not usually a huge fan of Harry/Ginny fics. I like the idea of exploring how Rowling's characters might behave in the everyday details and phases of married life, struggles and whatnot... bit of an empty nest thing going on with Ginny here. I liked it. Nice resolution with the kids getting involved.

I liked the use of present tense, though I'm usually resistant to it as a writer. When reading though, it makes me feel immediately connected to your narrative.

Just one more thing... with Ron and Hermione... it was that morning wasn't it? ;) C'mon, you can tell me! Please?

Hehe... nice job with this! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love the whole world J.K. Rowling's created, but I also love the characters, and its fun to imagine the characters in OUR world! I'm glad you liked it. Present tense can be a little unsettling, I think, and sometimes it takes me a little while to "get into it" but I always think when used well it can add to a story. I'm glad you liked it and the story overall! And Ron and Hermione . . . ;)

Reviewer: BeetleBard
Date: 01/17/10 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good one. Not to be critical, but you really need to check the tense of your verbs.

Author's Response: Thanks! Critique is always good. Do you mean that its written in present tense? Stories are usually written in third or first person and past tense, but sometimes I like to mix it up by writing in second person or with present tense -- I've done it before in other genres, although this is the first time I've done it for Harry Potter.

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 01/17/10 12:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is soooooo good!! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 01/17/10 12:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

aww a great story (like always) lol.

i was just litening to this song while opening my inbox and saw this story. kind of creepy right? lol, great song choice. i think it fit very well.


Author's Response: Thanks! I'm a big Matt Nathanson fan, so I'm glad you liked the lyric choice :)

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