how could you have him have a girl friend when he came home that was not a good idea:( :( :(
aww he loves her i know they get married in dh cause i reaad it but its still sweet
great job!!! amazing writing! I love how you made their personalities change with all the drama, great job!
Great sweet story. Bravo!!!
brilliant brilliant story. one of THE best r/hr fics ever! ohhhhhhhh those two make my day! haha...this is the 3rd time i've read this and havent ever gotten bored of it!
don't know what to say!
it's not just that your story's really ..thrilling (I don't know if I'm getting the right words, I am German (in fact Austrian)) and gripping and all, but it's HOW you write...! The way you use words to transfer feelings to make me feel eyactly like the protagonist! Your words don't just describe the situations, thay somehow ARE the situations...they flow just like liquid, without edges...perhaps that sounds weird...but it's like Mark Twain said: "The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter—it’s the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning. " And you always get theright word :-)
I think you should really take into consideration of becoming an author (if you have not yet)
Thank you for such a thrlling story!
*squee* loved it!
This chapter was good/bad beacuse...and you rock, dawn
i love it! twas amazing!
heck yess "Watching Miranda slam the door of the Burrow and disappear from his life, Ron could only think of one word:
"Bitch."" very niccee
XD love it
aw ronie's jellouse.
now we just have to figure out how to get hag-face out of the picture
[exuse my language]
what a bitch! ow come ron cant see it?...
i will read on...
what a bitch
hehe... shoving her out of the house dose seam mighty nice :)
[amazing story :)]
WHAT?!?!?!?! but... he said take a break... not break up. there's a Difference!!!
very good story. im lovn it!
I think that this story is what some of us HP fans wanted to happen. Life just couldn't be 'happily ever after'. Those 19 years had to be spiced up a little, and this is the author that did it.
this is an amazing story it was one of the first i have read and is one of my favorites!!
it was a perfect love story with a happy ending :)
wow. let me tell you right now, about five years ago, i read the first few chapters of this story ( i believe thats all you had up at that point) and i loved it. it really stuck with me. and then tonight i found it again and recognized it, and decided to read it again, ending included. You really are an amazing writer, and this is such an original plot! i just wated to let you know how much of an impact this story made on me that long ago and that it stayed with me for so long. Keep up the good work! You're awesome. :]