This chapter was excellent!!!!! And you rock, Dawn!!
I want to punch Miranda too. I bet every reader does! You have a great writing skill - and a good plot-designing skill !
Oooh.. I wonder what would happen to them!! Nice work!! I'm really enjoying this story!
Oh no! She is NOT - you can't possibly have a new girlfriend! This story is so exciting. There are so many talented authors at MNFF! You are one of them :D
i really liked this story! it was very well- written, especially compared to other fan-fictions that i have read, you also stayed very true to the characters that jk rowling created. the only thing that i didn't like was that hannah was in ravenclaw. i think that as she was brought up, ron would have talked about gryffindor a lot and that she might have felt less loved being put in a different house.
Wow, what an amazing, well-writen, addictive story you have written. Keep writing, because I cannot wait until your next piece!
I read it a few years ago, but I still remember that I loved it, it was one of the best.
definitely one of the best stories I've read in quite a while. you make Miranda so... evil. I love it!
This was WONDERFUL! It was one of the better FanFics I have ever read! I do have to say that I would've hit Miranda sooner than Hermione did. I guess I just have less self-control. Oh, and you probably wrote this before DH, am I right? Some of the characters are still alive in this, not to mention the names of all the childeren. I loved it. I definately cried when it was over. :)
Keep Going! I Really Love It! It's Very...Well, I Wouldn't Quite Say Realistic, But Their Desicions And Dialogue Are Very Believable. Good Work!
that was a great story
that better be ron
it was ok i wish ginny would have said yes that they were an item
thats why he needs to stay with her because they are always ther for eachother
OH NO WAHT HAPPENED!!!!!
THAT WITCH I HATE MIRANDA!!!!!!!~!
why couldnt miranda get mad when she saw ron holding the baby
now we`re were talking getting back at miranda sounds like fun
its getting better i hope ron gets so mad at miranda that he kicks her out and never speaks to her or fogives her again
you ruined the story when he brought the girl home the rest was great