Reviews For Daddy
Reviewer: turtles_rock
Date: 08/27/07 16:53
Chapter: Catching Up

Sooooo good
I Loved it

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 08/26/07 22:36
Chapter: Catching Up

i love your story! it feels very real and i wish you would have made it longer but you are right when you say that it would be to drawn out. anyway good job! btw Ron's eyes are blue

Reviewer: 2ndchances
Date: 08/26/07 18:11
Chapter: Hello Daddy

ooohh! very good.

Reviewer: izzywinchester
Date: 08/24/07 9:34
Chapter: St Mungo's

You should have added something about Draco Malfoy attacking Hermione and Hannah somewhere before or after this chapter, otherwise the story was great!

Reviewer: MsHellfire
Date: 08/24/07 8:19
Chapter: As the Months Pass

My reaction to the ending: "Argh! Everyone spit on Ron! SPIT i tell you!

Reviewer: hproxmysox36
Date: 08/21/07 12:32
Chapter: The Party

sick. thats just sick. >=(

*put up a warning*

Author's Response: What exactly is sick?

Reviewer: Padfoot519
Date: 08/21/07 9:40
Chapter: Epilogue

you rock
and you r a really good writer

Reviewer: tonksy
Date: 08/20/07 0:06
Chapter: Epilogue

I loved this story. It was full of everything a short romance should be full of. I'm a romance nerd. And the otter key ring...nice touch.

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 08/19/07 21:51
Chapter: Past and Present

My reply would definately have been "wait until he finds out what you said about his daughter"

Reviewer: fizzingwhizbee_2
Date: 08/19/07 11:38
Chapter: Catching Up

yOU CAN REALLY GET ACROSS EMOTION. I WANT TO KILL MIRANDA. SHE'S JUST SO...PERKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fizzingwhizbee_2
Date: 08/19/07 11:32
Chapter: Hello Daddy

OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fizzingwhizbee_2
Date: 08/19/07 11:28
Chapter: As the Months Pass

RON GOT A GIRLFRIEND!!!!!!!! OH NO!!!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 08/16/07 18:20
Chapter: September Nineteenth

It had taken Hermione a while to fall asleep after that night in the kitchen, not to mention many non-sexual thoughts, such as sour milk, Harry, dentist drills and fried toast.

Okay, sour milk, dentist drills and fried toast I can understand, but Harry as a non-sexual thought...kinda creepy, seeing as Daniel makes him look very dashing. 10/10

Author's Response: Daniel Radcliffe is only Harry in the movies. And either way, Hermione and he are platonic friends.

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 08/16/07 18:06
Chapter: The B.A.T

"Harry's a good listener, too," Ginny said offhandedly, investigating a purple jumper she had just found at the bottom of the wardrobe. "Though sometimes I think he's just staring at my boobs rather than actually listening." She grinned and turned to Hermione. "The other day, I didn't put a bra on and went on about absolute rubbish to see what he would do. He just nodded and 'agreed with me'

That was funny! I can see that happening, and boy is it vivid! haha 10/10

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 08/16/07 17:37
Chapter: Past and Present

That...that...*gestulates wildly* WITCH!!! I H8 her!! 10/10

Reviewer: ginny_potter72
Date: 08/16/07 10:34
Chapter: Epilogue

i luv this story. congratulations on getting featured!! its a great idea, and i love how you tied victor in. five stars. out of five...

Reviewer: Dramatic_Snitch
Date: 08/15/07 14:53
Chapter: Epilogue

I love this story, it's so good. I must have read it five times since I first saw it. I'm really glad you re-wrote it, it's an amazing story.

Reviewer: magicalmischief x
Date: 08/15/07 6:24
Chapter: Epilogue

I really loved this story!
I was so sad when they broke up and very very angry when he didnt come home alone!!

cant wait to read your next work =)

Reviewer: capox
Date: 08/15/07 2:46
Chapter: Epilogue

i love this story.
sooo cool.

Reviewer: skypok
Date: 08/14/07 20:40
Chapter: The Party

wow this story is wonderful.
well thought and well written throughout.
i hope you keep up the excellant work.

s,Pokorski

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