Reviews For Daddy
Reviewer: Ginny_Luvs_Malfoy
Date: 07/05/08 15:40
Chapter: Epilogue

really sweet story... it deserves to have been a featured story. i could feel teh emotion. you're a talented writer. keep it up!

Reviewer: Jay_malfoy
Date: 07/01/08 3:09
Chapter: The Only One He Ever Loved

This is the fourth time I've read this fic. It's amazing. And while I am a huge Dramione shipper, this is one of the best stories I've read from all the HP fan fic sites. Ron and Hermione are perfect for eachother in this story.

Reviewer: beatlemanial
Date: 06/19/08 19:13
Chapter: The Party

i really like reading a longer story that isn't like 25 chapters long... this is a really good story and all of the characters are EXTREMELY true to their canon selves. well done and i shall read more of your work!

Reviewer: doraweasley
Date: 06/17/08 17:49
Chapter: Epilogue

PLEASEEE write more sexual and romantic hermonie/ron stories!!!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!!!!

Reviewer: EnchantressOfTheNite
Date: 05/24/08 1:03
Chapter: The Party

A beautiful Story! It made me cry and laugh, I felt so close to Hermione! You need to publish your work!!

Reviewer: LS_Potter
Date: 05/20/08 8:51
Chapter: The Party

nice chapter

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/09/08 16:03
Chapter: The Only One He Ever Loved

I've loved reading this fic. All the characters were so much themselves that it was like an extension of canon. I really didn't like Miranda at all, but then I thought if she grew up lonely then once she found somebody she wanted she'd fight tooth and nail for them. I'm guessing that her contemplative mood over the last few days of her stay with the Weasleys was her realising that Hermione and Ron did belong together and it's more lonely to be with someone who isn't happy than to be alone. All of the thoughts in between dialogue were very funny, weird how we never show our complete selves to anyone. I'd love it if there were a sequel, but if not, thanks anyway for this, I've had an evening very well spent.

Reviewer: JennyRocks321
Date: 05/04/08 0:11
Chapter: Epilogue

Hey,I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Your amazing,i have a question for u though, just in case i cant find that Q&A thingy. When Hannah hurts herself...does Miranda have anything to do with it, and did u make Miranda's character after someone you know in real life?

Reviewer: yogurtfish
Date: 04/27/08 8:01
Chapter: Epilogue

I really enjoyed this story because the plot was really well thought out. I liked the potrayal of Miranda even though she was really nasty... thank you for such an enjoyable story


Reviewer: Niki Libby Chang
Date: 04/22/08 12:39
Chapter: The Party

wow...oh futher mucker wow!!!!!!! Best...Damn...Fan...Fic...EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so glad mirando is out of the picture! If she had died, that probably would have made everone feel better. She is a straight up B#$*& and if she ever talks about Hannah like that again i will whoop her ass!!! I don't care if she isn't real!!!

Reviewer: LunaTheLoony
Date: 04/17/08 17:51
Chapter: The B.A.T

dude, this story is freaking awesome. I'm only on chapter ten, but i love it!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/09/08 22:39
Chapter: The Only One He Ever Loved

aaww! such a cute story!! although, i wish that hermione and ron would get married first before they move in together.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/09/08 22:31
Chapter: September Nineteenth

nevermind, miranda cant marry krum, she can have someone else , i suppose... haha and yay(!!) that miranda is finally out of the picture!

Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 04/09/08 20:12
Chapter: Catching Up

"Typical? Having your baby is typical?" Hermione asked, folding her arms across her chest. Ron had said some stupid things in his life, but this took the biscuit. Best part of the entire chapter! Rather than Ginny's, here we see Hermione's fieriness and stubbornness.

Another part of him felt sad; he had missed out on important stages of his daughter's life - her birth, first steps and first word.

"I'm sorry you had to do this alone," Ron said, feeling guilty.
Aw, Ron--- I love his characterization. The ups and downs in his and Hermione's relationship when he comes home is brilliant. It describes their feelings right as they're having the talk that Hermione so dreaded, ups and downs.

He took the stairs two at a time, leaving Hermione with the feeling that this could have gone better. Poor Hermione. Ron does always know how to ruin things, even if it isn't under the best of circumstances.

Harry turned to his old friend. "She's beautiful," he told Hermione, "just so …" he searched for a word to describe how amazing the baby was, but couldn't find one. Oh, I do believe that Harry is my favorite character in your story, despite how hard they are to choose between. This really, truly is great. I love how accepting of Ron and Hermione's you've made Harry. He didn't even question anything, like Ron did, only complimented on Hannah. Good work.

"Why do you care so much anyway, Hermione?" Ginny asked suspiciously. She turned to Hannah and pried Harry's glasses from her, and helped him put them back on. "I thought you were over Ron." I find this quite . . . unbelievable, I think? It just doesn't seem to me like anyone would speak this aloud. Obviously Hermione still has feelings for Ron, whether she loves him or not, because she has a child with him, and that half of Ron lives in Hannah, whom she loves. Also, to care about him enough to not inform him of a child, which would send him straight home, also tells how much she cares for him as well. It just seems oddly structured.

Better, we think. He's Hannah's Godfather, and he loves. I think you forgot a word here.

She did make a move to hug him but, at the last minute, lost her nerve and, instead, grabbed his hand for a firm shake. Ha ha, I do love the awkwardness of their past relationship.

Nice work, another great chapter.

~Lindsey :)

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/09/08 19:21
Chapter: The B.A.T

hey! miranda and krum would make such a cute couple!! then hermione can have ron. lovely plan if i do say so myself, lol

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/09/08 9:25
Chapter: St Mungo's

aw! thats so sweet! i hope ron finds out that miranda's lying soon.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/09/08 9:15
Chapter: Hexed

hannah! i know she's not dead, but i hope she's ok!!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/09/08 9:06
Chapter: Past and Present

good for hermione! how dare miranda talk about hannah like that?! evil women...

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/09/08 8:44
Chapter: Swing Low

aw! ron makes the perfect dad! why cant he see what a piece of work miranda is?!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/08/08 21:25
Chapter: The Talk

ugh, that miranda is a piece of work. poor hermione!

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