Reviews For Daddy
Reviewer: Classic777
Date: 11/22/08 18:26
Chapter: The B.A.T

Good stuff, I love your plot

Reviewer: Quarternoob
Date: 11/03/08 19:27
Chapter: The B.A.T

Dawn,

I'm not sure how long ago this was posted, but as a proofreader for an amateur writer (my better half), I can say it's chapters like this that define a story. They aren't boring, they are interesting.

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 11/02/08 14:27
Chapter: Epilogue

done done done done amazing i loved it aww hannah! and julliet is my FAVORITE grils name i love it.

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 11/02/08 14:21
Chapter: The Only One He Ever Loved

aww!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 11/01/08 14:39
Chapter: September Nineteenth

cliffhanger!!!! cliffhanger cliffhanger!!! who is it??? is it Molly? no no its Viktor! wait wait dont tell me! GINNY!!! or Harry?? WAIT IVE GOT IT MIRANDA??? but why would she smile then....irs a mystery!!!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 11/01/08 14:10
Chapter: The B.A.T

ok no offense at all!!!!!!!!!!!! but i sort of hated this chapter...i thought it was kind of fluffy...and boring..but i shouldn't be talking! i hated when my teacher called my writing 'fluffy' and i guess he was right! ive submitted 4 stories and they all have been rejected!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 11/01/08 9:01
Chapter: St Mungo's

hmmmmmmmmm wow! i loved it!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 11/01/08 8:47
Chapter: Hexed

oh no oh no that arse! stu[id Ron!!!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 10/30/08 14:45
Chapter: Past and Present

ooooooooo!!!!

Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman
Date: 10/29/08 16:11
Chapter: Hello Daddy

Oh Merlin, save me! I do not usually read AUs but this just takes the biscuit. Honestly! I know men are clueless but Ron is definitely beyond that! LOL

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 10/28/08 14:45
Chapter: Swing Low

I knew that about Hermione already but it didnt hurt! i wish Hermioone had picked the other road now....

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 10/27/08 17:54
Chapter: The Talk

intresting..i probably should feel more mad torwards Miranda, but I still cant get over the fact that Ron broke up with her!! I will KILL that man!!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 10/27/08 17:33
Chapter: Catching Up

"Let the party begin!!!!!" oh yeaaaa

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 10/27/08 17:33
Chapter: Catching Up

"Let the party begin!!!!!" oh yeaaaa

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 10/27/08 15:08
Chapter: As the Months Pass

ummm wow!!! im a really bad reviewer incase you havent noticed....

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 10/27/08 14:52
Chapter: The Party

wow! good!

Reviewer: phoenixalison
Date: 10/27/08 14:35
Chapter: The Party

I'm liking it.. but i'm gonna read the other chapters and tell you what i think about the whole story.

Reviewer: gg of griffindor
Date: 10/23/08 5:14
Chapter: Epilogue

This story is so wonderful and sweet. It warms my heart.
Well done!!!!

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 09/17/08 19:49
Chapter: Epilogue

Aww. So cute. Loved the ending XD

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 09/17/08 19:44
Chapter: The Only One He Ever Loved

YAY! I luurv this story with a fucking passion

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