I'm really enjoying your story I cant seem to put down (so to speak).
"You rock, Dawn!"
I do enjoy your writing style a great deal. Thank you for sharing your talent and love for the trio with us.
Loving it so far!
Wait until Ronald hears about this? Er sorry Miranda, but are you stealing your comebacks from Malfoy? HA! this is fantastic!
This was a great story! I don't know what else to say besides I loved it; it was wonderful. :)
This story also made me laugh, cry and want to punch Miranda in the face. Loved every word!
Having reading this made me laugh, cry and be furious at Ron for being such a one-minded arse. I really, really like this story. You're on my list ;-) Also, I think it is rather fun that you called Ginny and Harrys son Sirius, when thats the "actual" boy's middle name. It was kinda obvious that it might come up, but stil ^^
I nearly cried when you mentioned Fred and Tonks . . . but good beginning :)
Hey. I enjoyed reading your story! Thanks fo sharing :-)
Wow. I actually really enjoyed this.
enjoyed , thanks.
Get rid of Miranda
I laughed, I cried, I hissed at that beyotch Miranda. Nice, nice job!
This is a fantastic story! It's so real. Good job, Dawn! ;)
This is probably the third time i've read this and it just seems to get better everytime. Well Done on an amazing story :)
well, that was such a thuroughly wonderful story that i have to admit i read the whole thing from start to finish for hours and haven't even touched my homework. And though i think the ending was completely perfect, I find myself sad knowing that it did indeed end : '( truely wonderful job! and though it sounds cheezy, i have to wonder if you ever considerd writing as a career? from what ive read, i have no doubt that you'ld be quite good, and extreamly sucessful! wishing all the best, KEEP WRITING!
I like thi chapter but I wouldn't have started it talking about the fence.
I absolutely love this book. I stayed up till 1:01 in the morning reading it. I think that you've expressed Ron and Hermione's love for each other more thsn ever. It shows that true love is the most powerful thing in the world and will always come out in the end. Yet again I love this story with all my heart. I also cried after it was finished. I love how you, in the end everything turned out better than alright.
Overall this is a wonderful story. It really stays true to J.K. Rowling's characters. The plot is really good although I would have liked to see more magic involved with it.
I absolutely love this story. Once I started reading, I couldn't stop. You are amazingly talented.