Reviews For Fawkes' Gifts
Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 12/11/12 20:35
Chapter: Chapter 1- Surprises for the Dursleys

Again I read this first chapter and again I beg you to continue posting the rest.I don't think that Dumbledore meant to restrain Harry in the way he did, He just wanted to temper the temper until Harry had the abilities to do what he must.And he also wanted to protect him. But Albus is gone and it's up to those who will followHarry to work with him not try protect him. Please pick up the story again.

Reviewer: KBWeasley
Date: 02/13/12 21:43
Chapter: Chapter 1- Surprises for the Dursleys

Please finish. I am on the edge of my seat

Reviewer: KBWeasley
Date: 02/13/12 13:30
Chapter: Chapter 1- Surprises for the Dursleys

Please finish. I am on the edge of my seat

Reviewer: Gryffindor146
Date: 11/02/11 5:00
Chapter: Chapter 1- Surprises for the Dursleys

Where's the rest? :(

Reviewer: Hp_fanfic_fan
Date: 05/27/10 3:48
Chapter: Chapter 1- Surprises for the Dursleys

are u really uploading this again? I read this fic years ago and loved it. It was one of the 1st fanfics I read. I was on my way to download it....and it as gone! Boo. I asked around to see if anyone had it, but no luck. So here I am, months later, looking for it again. I googled it and what do you know...i was like....ugh didn't she delete this? So i was confused....and even more confused when i saw the upload date. But i've got it now...hope you do upload it soon. I'd love to read it again. Honest, its been so long; I've read hundreds of fics since then, and even wrote 20 or so stories myself....I don't even remember what this fic was about. So hurry up and remind me :) Please.

Reviewer: bagwell
Date: 01/03/10 20:28
Chapter: Chapter 1- Surprises for the Dursleys

I like the story line. I would have liked t have seen a bit more dialogue with the Dursleys especially Aunt Petunia. I've always wondered what she would have said if she had had the courage to speak when they departed...

Author's Response: Thank you. There are quite a few fanfics out there that show the Dursleys pov but when I wrote this I decided to keep it in canon for the most part. JK doesn't give them much space in her books and I just kind of kept to that reasoning. I would suggest Dursleys, Meet The Wizarding World by Ghoul In Pajamas if you'd really like that pov. Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: Fluffy77
Date: 01/03/10 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 1- Surprises for the Dursleys

Great start! Looking forward to the next chapters. This should be fun.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm pretty proud of this story and the sequel. I wrote the majority of it before DH came out, so updates shouldn't take too long. I hope you continue to like it.

Reviewer: pottersxxmistress
Date: 01/03/10 10:15
Chapter: Chapter 1- Surprises for the Dursleys

i'm already wanting more! great start and please keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you. This entire story is finished and I'll post the new chapters within a few days of validation. The sequel is 95% finished and by the time I get to that part it should be finished completely. I'm so glad you like this and hope to see you in reviews often. Thanks again.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 01/03/10 10:14
Chapter: Chapter 1- Surprises for the Dursleys

Oh RedHairedMom, this was as good as it was before. I remember a lot, but not everything. I look forward to reading it as the first time. You've got it that everyone is showing and using their strengths. Hermione is as always, Awesome. I wonder if the book Hermione found was hidden from people intent on evil, or they who are evil dismissed the Ancient Magic? One has to admire the way Harry left Privet Drive, given the Dreadsleys a taste of his wealth as well as the knowledge that they will get no more from him. I hope your postings are quick. I do love this story! Bravo!!!!!!

Author's Response: I've tried to do some judicious editing to change the 'stilted' speaking. It's hard for me to write differently than I speak so the formality might still sneak past me. I'm so glad you're happy with the characterisations. I like seeing them as a little more grown up and knowledgable about the world around them. I'll post chapter two in a day or so. Thanks so much for your support of the story.

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