Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 04/28/11 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Whoah...deep. I can't see 'Tom' falling in love, and I can't really see Amy getting back to normal. I can see her more as a broken person. But good job, good ideas, good descripions.

Reviewer: moebear
Date: 01/02/10 0:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, I never really considered that Voldemort would have a crush :) It's sort of cute, when he was little, but what he did to Amy and Dennis was horrible. I hope you write more, maybe expand this topic. I really liked it!

Reviewer: TwitchyGirl
Date: 01/01/10 20:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a unique take on young Tom's emotions and mind; it is flowing and believeable. The last paragraph is particularly moving.

However, the grammar and spelling errors were very distracting; I suggest you revise.

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