One tiny mistake I thought I might point out. For Ginny in the seventh paragraph:
"Anyone can make that mistake, right. "
I think that should be a question. Otherwise, this was incredibly cute.
Nicely done. I like the way you found a common thread in these stories and strung them together. It's cool to see the parallels between them. Good characterization, as well. There are a couple of grammatical errors (such as not capitalizing O.W.L.s), but it's not that bad. And the way you separated the paragraphs with the dashes worked really well. Good job!
I think I enjoyed this story so much because a) those are my favorite ships (yes, they are gonna happen people, with the exception of J/L, cuz they already did happen), b) it was nicely written and c) it was very true to the stories. You didn't get all wild and go off the deep end. Thanks for writing!
Wow. I was thinking about saying why don't you write a sequal, which would be cool, but I think the stories end here. As I love all three of these ships it's perfect and well written. This is a masterpiece and art in itself that enhances the beauty of writing. Love it!
Mesher!(I mean that in a good way) Perfect, perfect, perfect! You cross three girls' opinions, use three guys, and create the coolest thing ever. You are a demi-goddess among fanfiction writers.
Author's Response: i love you. not only do you get a million cookies but an all expense paid trip to the tropical foriegn country of your choice...... did i mention that i love you
It was an interesting story but it sort of doesn't make sense at some points
that was interesting....i think i liked ginny's tale the best though...i am not a h/r shipper. but it was good none the least.