Reviewer: FawkesToTheRescue
Date: 01/16/11 15:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aaw, even though Christmas is over, this poem made me smile so much :D I love the contrast you've brought with the Malfoys and the Weasleys. Very Christmas-y!

 :) Megan

Reviewer: Rose Nym
Date: 08/09/10 20:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

cute! I know I'd rather be a Weasley...

Reviewer: Virgil
Date: 01/02/10 22:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

aw, very touching.

Author's Response: Thank you! =D I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 12/27/09 9:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww, this is lovely and fills me with my own festive cheer (although that might also be down to the presents I received LOL). Seriously, though, this is a wonderful poem that highlights very nicely whay we love the Weasleys so much and why the Malfoys are so lacking despite their wealth.

This poem flows very well and the rhymes aren't at all forced, so well done for that. My only quibble is with this line:

A rather very happy family.

It reads a bit awkwardly and I think you should take out either 'rather' or 'very'.

That's the only nit pick I have. Great job, BB. ~Carole ~

Author's Response:

Thank you! It really does show we hate those loathsome Malfoys, and like the Weasleys doesn't it? I'm glad you noticed that =D

 

And I see what you mean about that line, I shall change it. Thanks for the review, Carole!

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