This is really interesting.
You have got Ron's character spot on.
It's good to get it from his point of view.
Author's Response: Thank you kindly!
Really interesting to see this scene from a different perspective, we often forget how hard it must be for Ron, who has a very close-knit family to run off and not be able to let anyone in on the mission.
In character the whole way, I really enjoyed this fic, Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, it's true about Ron and I tried to emphasise how isolated he must feel BECAUSE he has so many people he wants to tell, ironically enough. Glad you enjoyed!