Reviews For A Day in the Life
Reviewer: enchantedsleeper
Date: 07/29/11 14:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

:D This is the first fanfic I've read on Mugglenet which I've liked enough to add to my favourites. Your characterisation of everyone was absolutely spot-on. I especially liked how you wrote Peter as being more than just a pathetic hanger-on, a Marauder with equal status and sense of humour to the other three. I also like that you wrote Lupin as not quite the goody-goody people think he is XD The image of him pouting at Mary is especially cute. I can't help but wonder what Sirius put in his trunk! XD Also, trust Lily to figure out exactly what would stop the Marauders pranking her. She is the best :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Finding this when randomly logging back into my account after more than a year's absence was a nice surprise :) I learned these characterization skills from taking a class on the Marauders on the beta forums - I would definitely recommend the beta forum classes, if they still exist. Thanks again! ~ LiLu

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 12/23/09 23:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

i loved it u actually made wormtail likeable which was kinda nice change i think over all it was gr8

Author's Response: Thanks! Peter is a difficult character for me to write, so I'm glad you thought I did a good job. ~LiLu

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 12/22/09 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was very good! i love marauder era and i think you did a really good job with the characterization and avoiding cliches. great job and keep writing! =D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you thought I avoided cliches, since that's what the class was about that this is the final for. It's good to know I learned something. :) ~LiLu

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