Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/25/10 19:49
Chapter: First Weeks

I must apologize as I hadn't noticed that you had posted a new chapter until I was cruising around checking up on different authors and found your new chapter. So now I have an example of going through security systems. I guess I wasn't being very creative in my thinking before. I was only thinking about airport security and I was wondering why a wizard would fly. How horrible to be rejected by the group that you worked so hard to be a part of. Claudia's boyfriend's family doesn't sound very nice either. Great chapter and I'll try to be more diligent about looking for new postings:D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/27/10 20:59
Chapter: Transformation

I lost track of this story and I'm glad I found it again. I think I had your pen name in my notes somewhere but I have so many notes:D Poor kid--had to go to a back alley spell caster. It's nice to see magical folk are discriminated against in the same way non-magicals are. I loved the comment Ganesh made about cooking--those spells are hard, right after he'd performed a surgical spell:D Now what kind of secure area would wizarding people be going through? Your last sentence is very interesting. So, a transgendered person hasn't really changed physically but is merely wearing a disguise in the wizarding world? Wow. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Sorry about what happened below, I had a tic and clicked "submit".

You impress me; I don't even take notes on what stories I read on here; I just put everything I want to keep reading in my favorites. Thanks for the last review as well as this one.

I was kind of thinking of those spells at Gringotts in book seven that wash away all magical enchantments. Since we Americans are much more paranoid than the English, I thought maybe stores would have those kinds of spells on their entrances.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/18/09 10:51
Chapter: Prologue-Who I Was Before

I thought this would be really interesting. It's sure a creative idea--one I've never thought of. I can't wait to read more. I hope Jason figures out what is going on with himself soon. I would think this is a painful thought or decision, whether you're magical or non-magical. I also hope that Shekina remains a friend. I've read other fan fiction where the characters are gay or bisexual but never transgender. Great chapter and hope you update soon.

Author's Response: ye

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 12/17/09 22:20
Chapter: Prologue-Who I Was Before

this seems like it will be a very interesting story! im looking forward to reading more =)

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